-----// Mohabbat bewafaai se //----- Hriday

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kuch  yun  mohabbat  hui  hai  mujhe bewafaai se
ki naa chaah  ke  bhi  mohabbat  kar  jaataa hoon

tadaptaa  rehtaa hoon  main dil  ke  haathon,  aur
chhipaa ke  har  dard  ko, main  muskuraataa hoon

chaltaa hoon  angaaron pe  sochke  ki  araam  mile
is  tarhaa  se  main  apne  pairon  ko jalaataa hoon

aadat nahi hai  mujhe  phoolon  ki  to  kyaa  karun
kaanton  ko   seene se  lagaake dil behlaataa hoon

log  kehte  hain  mujhe tameez  nahi  baat karne ki
shaayad  isi  liye  kuch  kehne  se ghabraataa hoon

band rehtaa hoon apne kamre ki  deewaaron mein
aur  apne  dard ko main geeton me  sajaataa hoon


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«Reply #1 on: February 19, 2013, 12:44:45 AM »
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bahut khoob Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: February 19, 2013, 02:22:22 AM »
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chaltaa hoon  angaaron pe  sochke  ki  araam  mile
is  tarhaa  se  main  apne  pairon  ko jalaataa hoon
aadat nahi hai  mujhe  phoolon  ki  to  kyaa  karun
kaanton  ko   seene se  lagaake dil behlaataa hoon
log  kehte  hain  mujhe tameez  nahi  baat karne ki
shaayad  isi  liye  kuch  kehne  se ghabraataa hoon
band rehtaa hoon apne kamre ki  deewaaron mein aur 
apne  dard ko main geeton me  sajaataa hoon
bahut khoob hriday jee Applause

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«Reply #3 on: February 19, 2013, 03:09:27 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: February 19, 2013, 04:06:16 AM »
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bahut khubsurat . hriday ji , tah e dil se badhai aur daad .
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«Reply #6 on: February 19, 2013, 05:32:35 AM »
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kuch  yun  mohabbat  hui  hai  mujhe bewafaai se
ki naa chaah  ke  bhi  mohabbat  kar  jaataa hoon
muaaf karna bhaaee, iss sher ka koee matlab nahin samajh aayaa .
tadaptaa  rehtaa hoon  main dil  ke  haathon,  aur
chhipaa ke  har  dard  ko, main  muskuraataa hoon

chaltaa hoon  angaaron pe  sochke  ki  araam  mile
is  tarhaa  se  main  apne  pairon  ko jalaataa hoon

aadat nahi hai  mujhe  phoolon  ki  to  kyaa  karun
kaanton  ko   seene se  lagaake dil behlaataa hoon

log  kehte  hain  mujhe tameez  nahi  baat karne ki
shaayad  isi  liye  kuch  kehne  se ghabraataa hoon

band rehtaa hoon apne kamre ki  deewaaron mein
aur  apne  dard ko main geeton me  sajaataa hoon


*****HRIDAY*****


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«Reply #7 on: February 19, 2013, 05:59:52 AM »
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kuch yun mohabbat hui hai mujhe bewafaai se
ki naa chaah ke bhi mohabbat kar jaataa hoon


muaaf karna bhaaee, iss sher ka koee matlab nahin samajh aayaa .


Prasang: Prastut panktiyaan mahakavi 'Hriday' ki rachnaa 'Mohabbat Bewafaai se' se li gayi hain jo unhone san 2013 ki ek ardha raatri me likhaa thaa.

Vyaakhyaa: Isme kavi ye kehnaa chaahte hain ki unhe itne dhokhe mile hain, itni bewafaai mili hai ki unhe bewafaai se mohabbat hone lagi hai. aur bewafaai to sirf mohabbat ke baad hi mil sakti hai. unkaa mann maanne ko tayyar hi nahi ki koi unse bewafaai naa kare. yahi kaaran hai ki wo baar baar bewafaai ke ichchuk mohabbat ki or chal padte hain, arthaat mohabbat kar jaate hain isi soch ke sath ki koi unse mohabbat kare aur fir bewafaai. bewafaai ke saath kavi ki mohabbat hi hai jo unse baar baar mohabbat karwaati hai


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hahahahahaah ummeed kartaa hoon mere is mazaak kaa aapne buraa nahi maanaa hogaaa...aaj kuch masti kaa mann ho gayaa thaa... tongue3... bahut bahut shukriya meri rachna ko waqt dene ke liye...!!!
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«Reply #8 on: February 19, 2013, 06:04:24 AM »
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Prasang: Prastut panktiyaan mahakavi 'Hriday' ki rachnaa 'Mohabbat Bewafaai se' se li gayi hai jo unhone san 2013 ki ek ardha raatri me likhaa thaa.

Vyaakhyaa: Isme kavi ye kehnaa chaahte hain ki unhe itne dhokhe mile hain, itni bewafaai mili hai ki unhe bewafaai se mohabbat hone lagi hai. aur bewafaai to sirf mohabbat ke baad hi mil sakti hai. unkaa mann maanne ko tayyar hi nahi ki koi unse bewafaai naa kare. yahi kaaran hai ki wo baar baar bewafaai ke ichchuk mohabbat ki or chal padte hain, arthaat mohabbat kar jaate hain isi soch ke sath ki koi unse mohabbat kare aur fir bewafaai. bewafaai ke saath kavi ki mohabbat hi hai jo unse baar baar mohabbat karwaati hai


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Kavi atyant prasanna hai


hahahahahaah ummeed kartaa hoon mere is mazaak kaa aapne buraa nahi maanaa hogaaa...aaj kuch masti kaa mann ho gayaa thaa... tongue3... bahut bahut shukriya meri rachna ko waqt dene ke liye...!!!


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«Reply #9 on: February 19, 2013, 07:46:13 AM »
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Waah waah hriday ji bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne. har sher khoob rahe. Aur aapke sher ka saraansh toh bahut khoob raha. padhkar maza aa gaya. hats off to you. Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
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«Reply #13 on: February 25, 2013, 11:50:13 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Nandbahu ji.....!!!

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«Reply #14 on: February 27, 2013, 11:57:42 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Mukesh ji.....!!!

chaltaa hoon  angaaron pe  sochke  ki  araam  mile
is  tarhaa  se  main  apne  pairon  ko jalaataa hoon
aadat nahi hai  mujhe  phoolon  ki  to  kyaa  karun
kaanton  ko   seene se  lagaake dil behlaataa hoon
log  kehte  hain  mujhe tameez  nahi  baat karne ki
shaayad  isi  liye  kuch  kehne  se ghabraataa hoon
band rehtaa hoon apne kamre ki  deewaaron mein aur 
apne  dard ko main geeton me  sajaataa hoon
bahut khoob hriday jee Applause


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