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asaan nahi hain mohabbat karna par log baar baar kar lete hain,
pehli mulaaqat me hi jaane kaise pyaar ka izhaar kar lete hain,
jise log pyaar samajhte hain aaj wo pyaar nahi kuch aur hai,
agar dekhte hi pyaar ho jaaye wo pyaar nahi aakarshan hai,
kyun log do mulaqaaton ko mohabbat samajhne lag jaate hain,
kisi ki meethi baaton ko kyun chahat samajhne lag jaate hain,

saalon tak saath hoke bhi samajhna mushkikl hai mohabbat ko,
agar koi tumhaari har baat pe khush to jaruri nahi chahat ho,
logo ki to aadat hoti hai dil rakhne ke liye muskuraate hain,
us muskan ko mohabbat ka naam deke hi aashiq pachhtate hain,
kyun log do mulaqaaton ko mohabbat samajhne lag jaate hain,
kisi ki meethi baaton ko kyun chahat samajhne lag jaate hain,

mohabbat se alag bhi ek rishta hota hai is jahaan me dosti ka,
dosti ko mohabbat samajhke log gala ghont dete hain dosti ka,
baad me na to mohabbat rehti hai na hi dosti reh paati hai,
zindagi bhi tab ghum ke samundar me doob ke reh jaati hai,
kyun log do mulaqaaton ko mohabbat samajhne lag jaate hain,
kisi ki meethi baaton ko kyun chahat samajhne lag jaate hain...



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«Reply #1 on: May 26, 2010, 11:32:53 AM »
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 yehi to khasiyat hai dil ki janab Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: May 26, 2010, 08:46:09 PM »
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Wah wah Kapil ji bahut baddiya likha aapne .ek alag andaaz mein likha aapne  .great work.excellent Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: May 27, 2010, 05:20:46 AM »
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   Nice thought kapil ji. 3rd paragraph to ji bilkul true likha hai. Yun hi likhte rahin. Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: May 27, 2010, 05:54:55 AM »
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Bhut achay Kapil ji very nice work, keep writing


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«Reply #6 on: May 27, 2010, 07:50:48 AM »
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Yeh peshkash bhi bahut achchhi hai Kapil
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«Reply #7 on: May 27, 2010, 11:18:51 AM »
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Nice kapil ji...per ek baar add karna chahungi ki aap likhte bahu acha hai per agar aap apni kavita mein kam alfazo mein zyada se zyada ehsaso ko bayan kare tou kavita aur bhi behtareen lagegi..maaf kijiyega kuch galat kaha ho tou per main bhi kayi baar zyada alfazo ka upyog kar deti hu per hamesha koshish yahi rehti hai ki kam lafzo mein padhne wala merre jazbaat padh sake.take cre...aur khoob likha hai apne...
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«Reply #8 on: May 28, 2010, 06:06:48 AM »
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asaan nahi hain mohabbat karna par log baar baar kar lete hain,
pehli mulaaqat me hi jaane kaise pyaar ka izhaar kar lete hain,
jise log pyaar samajhte hain aaj wo pyaar nahi kuch aur hai,
agar dekhte hi pyaar ho jaaye wo pyaar nahi aakarshan hai,
kyun log do mulaqaaton ko mohabbat samajhne lag jaate hain,
kisi ki meethi baaton ko kyun chahat samajhne lag jaate hain,

saalon tak saath hoke bhi samajhna mushkikl hai mohabbat ko,
agar koi tumhaari har baat pe khush to jaruri nahi chahat ho,
logo ki to aadat hoti hai dil rakhne ke liye muskuraate hain,
us muskan ko mohabbat ka naam deke hi aashiq pachhtate hain,
kyun log do mulaqaaton ko mohabbat samajhne lag jaate hain,
kisi ki meethi baaton ko kyun chahat samajhne lag jaate hain,

mohabbat se alag bhi ek rishta hota hai is jahaan me dosti ka,
dosti ko mohabbat samajhke log gala ghont dete hain dosti ka,
baad me na to mohabbat rehti hai na hi dosti reh paati hai,
zindagi bhi tab ghum ke samundar me doob ke reh jaati hai,
kyun log do mulaqaaton ko mohabbat samajhne lag jaate hain,
kisi ki meethi baaton ko kyun chahat samajhne lag jaate hain...



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bahut bahut shukriya sarkaar...!!!

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bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji...!!!

Wah wah Kapil ji bahut baddiya likha aapne .ek alag andaaz mein likha aapne  .great work.excellent Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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bahut bahut shukriya Tamanna ji...!!!


   Nice thought kapil ji. 3rd paragraph to ji bilkul true likha hai. Yun hi likhte rahin. Applause Applause
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bahut bahut shukriya Aslam ji...!!!

Bhut achay Kapil ji very nice work, keep writing


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