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«Reply #15 on: May 31, 2010, 02:32:11 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji... main tahe dil se aapka shukriya adaa karta hoon...!!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on May 27, 2010, 07:50:48 AM
Yeh peshkash bhi bahut achchhi hai Kapil
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«Reply #16 on: May 31, 2010, 06:13:28 PM »
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bahut bahut shuktiya Geet ji... nahi mujhe aapki baat buri nahi lagi...par kya karu jab likhna shuru karta hoon ye nahi sochta ki kya likh raha hoon bas likhta rehta hoon... koshish karunga kam alfazon me likhne ki...!!!

 
Quote from: brokenbyluv on May 27, 2010, 11:18:51 AM
Nice kapil ji...per ek baar add karna chahungi ki aap likhte bahu acha hai per agar aap apni kavita mein kam alfazo mein zyada se zyada ehsaso ko bayan kare tou kavita aur bhi behtareen lagegi..maaf kijiyega kuch galat kaha ho tou per main bhi kayi baar zyada alfazo ka upyog kar deti hu per hamesha koshish yahi rehti hai ki kam lafzo mein padhne wala merre jazbaat padh sake.take cre...aur khoob likha hai apne...
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«Reply #17 on: May 31, 2010, 06:14:16 PM »
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shukriya...!!!

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«Reply #18 on: May 31, 2010, 06:14:54 PM »
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«Reply #19 on: June 01, 2010, 08:59:35 AM »
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bilkul sahi farmaya hai aapne klaskarji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley icon_flower
sach hai mohabbat chahat dosti kashish mein fark nahi pata hai logon ko. confusion mein hi dil tod baithte hain.
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«Reply #20 on: June 01, 2010, 12:02:02 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Suresh ji... yahi confusion hi saare fasaad ki jad hai... Usual Smile

Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on June 01, 2010, 08:59:35 AM
bilkul sahi farmaya hai aapne klaskarji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley icon_flower
sach hai mohabbat chahat dosti kashish mein fark nahi pata hai logon ko. confusion mein hi dil tod baithte hain.
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«Reply #21 on: June 01, 2010, 01:11:10 PM »
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Wah Kapil ji bahot arhpurn aur kaam ki poem likhi hai aapne. Daad qubool farmaayen.
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«Reply #22 on: June 01, 2010, 07:14:09 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Riyaz ji... humne tahe dil se aapki daad qubool ki...!!!

Quote from: riyaz106 on June 01, 2010, 01:11:10 PM
Wah Kapil ji bahot arhpurn aur kaam ki poem likhi hai aapne. Daad qubool farmaayen.
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«Reply #23 on: June 08, 2010, 06:56:54 PM »
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bahut bahut shuktiya Geet ji... nahi mujhe aapki baat buri nahi lagi...par kya karu jab likhna shuru karta hoon ye nahi sochta ki kya likh raha hoon bas likhta rehta hoon... koshish karunga kam alfazon me likhne ki...!!!

 

Ji shukriya apne merri baat ko positively liya..khush rahiye aur yu hi apni bhawanao ko lafzo mein qaid karte rahiye...
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«Reply #24 on: June 14, 2010, 08:03:40 PM »
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Ji shukriya apne merri baat ko positively liya..khush rahiye aur yu hi apni bhawanao ko lafzo mein qaid karte rahiye...
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