mohabbat....................A.B

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                              le   kar  jaan   meri   jaan   ho  gayi...,
                              mohabbat ab   kitni    aasaan   ho   gayi...,

                              kiyaa   shuru   bechnaa sharm -o- hayaa...,
                              shahr   mein  meri   dukaan   ho   gayi...,

                              muskuranaa  uss  haseenaa kaa mujh  per...,
                              aur   maano  zindagi  jawaan  ho   gayi...,

                              rolayaa  kyaa ,  ek  patthar  ko  maine...,
                              sungg-dili to jaise  pareshaan  ho gayi...,

                              pironaa lafzo.n kaa aansoo.on  ke saath...,
                              dekh  kar ghazal  ye  be-zubaan ho gayi...,

                              ehteraam faaqaa-kashi kaa kiyaa bechain...,
                              aur  ghurbati ghar mein mehmaan ho gayi...,

                              


                              

                              
                              

      
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«Reply #1 on: February 24, 2016, 08:47:47 AM »
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Bahot khoooob...
rolayaa  kyaa ,  ek  patthar  ko  maine...,
sungg-dili to jaise  pareshaan  ho gayi...,

pironaa lafzo.n kaa aansoo.on  ke saath...,
dekh  kar ghazal  ye  be-zubaan ho gayi...,
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«Reply #2 on: February 24, 2016, 09:24:22 AM »
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bahot badhiya sir...qabile tareef..
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«Reply #3 on: February 24, 2016, 01:12:19 PM »
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pironaa lafzo.n kaa aansoo.on  ke saath...,
                              dekh  kar ghazal  ye  be-zubaan ho gayi...,

Bahot khub......
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«Reply #4 on: February 24, 2016, 02:41:40 PM »
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laajawaab ek rau ke saath daad
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«Reply #5 on: February 24, 2016, 07:02:04 PM »
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Bechain Sahab Aadaab ...!

Bahut khoob janab ... badi achchi kalaam kahi hai...
Sabhi sher qabil e daad aur khoob huye haiN ...







Quote from: adil bechain on February 24, 2016, 08:29:29 AM


                              le   kar  jaan   meri   jaan   ho  gayi...,
                              mohabbat ab   kitni    aasaan   ho   gayi...,


Jee SahiN farmaya janab mohobbat ab aasaan ho gayi ... umda matla hua hai daad...




                              kiyaa   shuru   bechnaa sharm -o- hayaa...,
                              shahr   mein  meri   dukaan   ho   gayi...,


Waah waah waah kia kahne janab bahut khoob ... bada hi khoob sher hua hai daad...




                              muskuranaa  uss  haseenaa kaa mujh  per...,
                              aur   maano  zindagi  jawaan  ho   gayi...,


Hahaha ... sahiN hai janab ummar darazi ka asar khayaaloN par bhi aata hai ...




                              rolayaa  kyaa ,  ek  patthar  ko  maine...,
                              sungg-dili to jaise  pareshaan  ho gayi...,


Bahut khoob janab bahut umda kafi achcha aur gehra sher hua hai...




                              pironaa lafzo.n kaa aansoo.on  ke saath...,
                              dekh  kar ghazal  ye  be-zubaan ho gayi...,


Bahut achcha sher hua hai daad ...




                              ehteraam faaqaa-kashi kaa kiyaa bechain...,
                              aur  ghurbati ghar mein mehmaan ho gayi...,


Bahut khoob janab achcha maqta hua hai daad ... sabr rakhiye ...




                             


                             

                             
                             

       



Amuman badi hi khoob kalaam huyi hai is khoobsurat kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhte rahiye...  bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez ...
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«Reply #6 on: February 24, 2016, 09:50:21 PM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on February 24, 2016, 08:29:29 AM


                              le   kar  jaan   meri   jaan   ho  gayi...,
                              mohabbat ab   kitni    aasaan   ho   gayi...,

                              kiyaa   shuru   bechnaa sharm -o- hayaa...,
                              shahr   mein  meri   dukaan   ho   gayi...,

                              muskuranaa  uss  haseenaa kaa mujh  per...,
                              aur   maano  zindagi  jawaan  ho   gayi...,

                              rolayaa  kyaa ,  ek  patthar  ko  maine...,
                              sungg-dili to jaise  pareshaan  ho gayi...,

                              pironaa lafzo.n kaa aansoo.on  ke saath...,
                              dekh  kar ghazal  ye  be-zubaan ho gayi...,

                              ehteraam faaqaa-kashi kaa kiyaa bechain...,
                              aur  ghurbati ghar mein mehmaan ho gayi...,

                             


                             

                             
                             

       
waah kyaa baat hai Adil Sahib bahut hee umdah Ghazal hai, dheron daad.
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«Reply #7 on: February 25, 2016, 06:38:40 AM »
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bahut khub adil sahib.
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«Reply #8 on: February 25, 2016, 10:53:14 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: March 24, 2016, 12:32:08 PM »
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Quote from: Rustum Rangila on February 24, 2016, 08:47:47 AM
Bahot khoooob...
rolayaa  kyaa ,  ek  patthar  ko  maine...,
sungg-dili to jaise  pareshaan  ho gayi...,

pironaa lafzo.n kaa aansoo.on  ke saath...,
dekh  kar ghazal  ye  be-zubaan ho gayi...,
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«Reply #11 on: May 17, 2016, 09:58:02 AM »
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Quote from: poojachakarvarti@gmail.co on February 24, 2016, 09:24:22 AM
bahot badhiya sir...qabile tareef..

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