~*~ Mohobat kahaan hai ~*~ by Rahim

by dead heart on April 20, 2011, 11:22:18 AM
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Mohobat..Kitne log iss lavz ko istamal karte hai mager koi mehsoos karta hai? Aj mohobat kya sirf ek lavz banke nahin rehgaya?

Kal ek show suna radio par jahan topic tha kay nafrat mohobat se zada takatwar hai..Sach kahoun toh kuch hadd tak I agree..Khair, jo kuch sabki baaton se seekha, dekha iss duniya main, iss kalam main uttar raha hoon..

Yeh article kay roop main likha hai..Parr kar apne dil se kuch sawal kar lijiyega..Kuch ehsaas kar lijiyega..

Galib ka shaer jo maine quote kiya hai shayad ek dum accurate na ho mager almost aisa hi hai..

Aj kay zamane main mohobat ka zikr...? Umm hairan hoon..

Arson ka ho ya mahinon ka,
Mohobat ka rishta toot’ta zaroor hai,
Tabhi puchta hoon..Aj kay zamane main mohobat ka zikr..?

‘woh tumhari tareef kar raha tha’; kaun bharosa karega ispe,
‘woh tumhe gali de raha tha’, haan ispe sab bharosa karenge,
Tabhi puchta hoon..Aj kay zamane main mohobat ka zikr..?

Mohobat ka rishta chahe kitna gehra kyun na ho mager,
Ek kaanch ki tarha hota hai..bas ek darar kafi hai bikharne kay liye,
Tabhi puchta hoon..Aj kay zamane main mohobat ka zikr..?

Log mohobat ki shaan main ghazlein likhte parrte rehte hai,
Pucho unse; aj kitne log mohobat karte hai, shayad hi koi jawab mile,
Tabhi puchta hoon..Aj kay zamane main mohobat ka zikr..?

Jab saath the toh har pal ek dusre se baatein kiya karte the,
Juda hue toh bimari main bhi haal na pucha usne tera ‘Khamosh’,
Tabhi puchta hoon..Aj kay zamane main mohobat ka zikr..?

Aj kal kay logon ko kehte suna aksar ‘I love you…..’,
Phir mahine baad "you" kay agey naam badal jata hai,
Tabhi puchta hoon..Aj kay zamane main mohobat ka zikr..?

‘Khamosh’ ko pasand nahin log woh jinhe izzat nahin mohobat ki,
Galib ne bilkul sahi kaha tha:
“Bade zulm hue hai mohobat par yahan Galib,
Jinhe mili unhe qadar nahin aur jinhe qadar hai, unhe mili nahin”..

Yahan jahan dekho nafrat hi nafrat hai,
Judai ka ghum milta tha woh alag daur tha, aj bas bewaffai hai,
Aj gaur karke apne dil se yeh sawal karlena doston,
Aj kay zamane main mohobat ka zikr toh hota hai mager mohobat kahan hai..?

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: April 20, 2011, 01:34:07 PM »
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dost…
bade khafa khafa se andaz e bayan hai mohbt ke……
sawaal to haqiqi hain!!

magar dost…
mohbt to mohbt hai…
dusra koi nahi iska jawab to srf khud ka dil hi de skta hai…
har jagah to mohbt hi dikhti hai muje…

pyar bhare dil me
toote dil me
khamosi me
chahkan me
saanso me
dhadkano me
zazbato me
ehsaaso me
aankho me
nigaho me
gusse me
nafrato me
siskiyo me
aansuon me
muskurahto me
udasi me
wafai me
bewafai me
hr bat mohbt h dost
khuda ki banai is duniya me srf mhbt h…
bs thode
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«Reply #2 on: April 20, 2011, 02:20:49 PM »
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bht accha likha hai rahim...
but i agree wit kb...
kuch changes jarur hai par fir bhi muhabbat muhabbat hi hai...
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«Reply #3 on: April 20, 2011, 03:23:19 PM »
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Har Ek Ka Apna-Apna Nazaruyan Hai Dost Mohabbat Ko Lekar..

Aapne Apni Soch Ko Sach jaaniye Ba-khoobi pesh Kiya..

Bahut bahut Khoob Dost!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: April 20, 2011, 08:23:43 PM »
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dost…
bade khafa khafa se andaz e bayan hai mohbt ke……
sawaal to haqiqi hain!!

magar dost…
mohbt to mohbt hai…
dusra koi nahi iska jawab to srf khud ka dil hi de skta hai…
har jagah to mohbt hi dikhti hai muje…

pyar bhare dil me
toote dil me
khamosi me
chahkan me
saanso me
dhadkano me
zazbato me
ehsaaso me
aankho me
nigaho me
gusse me
nafrato me
siskiyo me
aansuon me
muskurahto me
udasi me
wafai me
bewafai me
hr bat mohbt h dost
khuda ki banai is duniya me srf mhbt h…
bs thode
Dost, bahaut bahaut shukriya..
Mera bhi man'na hai kay mohobat hai mager log isse gawa rahe hai..
Khair, saath dete rahiyega..
Khush rahiye!
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«Reply #5 on: April 20, 2011, 08:26:06 PM »
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bht accha likha hai rahim...
but i agree wit kb...
kuch changes jarur hai par fir bhi muhabbat muhabbat hi hai...
Teh dil se shukriya Di..
Sahi kaha..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #6 on: April 20, 2011, 08:26:58 PM »
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Har Ek Ka Apna-Apna Nazaruyan Hai Dost Mohabbat Ko Lekar..

Aapne Apni Soch Ko Sach jaaniye Ba-khoobi pesh Kiya..

Bahut bahut Khoob Dost!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Teh teh dil se shukriya Khwaish dost..
Yunhi saath dete rahiyega..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #7 on: April 20, 2011, 11:17:49 PM »
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WOW rahim bhai,i love this poem.superb.mindblowing creation,Kb ji aape bhi kamaal ke lines likha jo mujhe bahut pasad aayi.mohobat koi jaan bhuj kar nahi karta ho toh khud ho jaata hai. icon_salut Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: April 21, 2011, 09:36:20 AM »
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WOW rahim bhai,i love this poem.superb.mindblowing creation,Kb ji aape bhi kamaal ke lines likha jo mujhe bahut pasad aayi.mohobat koi jaan bhuj kar nahi karta ho toh khud ho jaata hai. icon_salut Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Apka teh teh dil se shukriya Madhu di..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #9 on: April 21, 2011, 10:59:17 AM »
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Rahim ji bahut khoob likha hai .ek naya angle
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: April 21, 2011, 11:06:35 AM »
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Bahut khoob likha tumne rahim aur kuch hadh tak kaafi sachai bhi likhi per har insan ek sa nhi hota jaise sath hote hue bhi sikke k dono pehlu alag hote hai waise hi insan k dil mein nafrat aur mhbt dono sath rehte hai bus farak sirrf unki gehrai mein hota hai...kuch likhna chahungi jawab mein umeed karti hu tum samjh paoge..



Jis pal mein tum jite ho us pal mein mhbt hai,
jise tum pehero sochkar likhte ho har us ghazal mein mhbt hai,

har shakhs ko dekh kar tou tumhe apna nhi lagta hoga,
jo tumhe bheed mein bhi apni si lagti hai us shaqal mein mhbt hai,

jab baithte ho tum kisi ki yado ko sine se lagaye,
tab dil mein uthti har us hulchul mein mhbt hai,

jo tumne kabhi apna sabse khushnasib lamha smjh k jiya tha,
tumhare us guzre hue us kal mein mhbt hai,

apne dil mein jhankar ek baar dekhna tum bhi...
aksar nafrat smjh jise dil se door kiya tumne tumhari us khalal mein mhbt hai.........
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«Reply #11 on: April 21, 2011, 08:07:36 PM »
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Rahim ji bahut khoob likha hai .ek naya angle
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahaut bahaut shukriya Suresh jee..
Haan ek naya angle keh lijiye..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #12 on: April 21, 2011, 08:18:24 PM »
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Bahut khoob likha tumne rahim aur kuch hadh tak kaafi sachai bhi likhi per har insan ek sa nhi hota jaise sath hote hue bhi sikke k dono pehlu alag hote hai waise hi insan k dil mein nafrat aur mhbt dono sath rehte hai bus farak sirrf unki gehrai mein hota hai...kuch likhna chahungi jawab mein umeed karti hu tum samjh paoge..



Jis pal mein tum jite ho us pal mein mhbt hai,
jise tum pehero sochkar likhte ho har us ghazal mein mhbt hai,

har shakhs ko dekh kar tou tumhe apna nhi lagta hoga,
jo tumhe bheed mein bhi apni si lagti hai us shaqal mein mhbt hai,

jab baithte ho tum kisi ki yado ko sine se lagaye,
tab dil mein uthti har us hulchul mein mhbt hai,

jo tumne kabhi apna sabse khushnasib lamha smjh k jiya tha,
tumhare us guzre hue us kal mein mhbt hai,

apne dil mein jhankar ek baar dekhna tum bhi...
aksar nafrat smjh jise dil se door kiya tumne tumhari us khalal mein mhbt hai.........
Bahaut bahaut shukriya di..
aur apne jo likha hai uske liye bas itna:
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Bahaut bahaut khoob..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #13 on: April 22, 2011, 08:36:48 AM »
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Bahaut bahaut shukriya di..
aur apne jo likha hai uske liye bas itna:
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Bahaut bahaut khoob..
Khush rahiye..!

Shukriya rahim..
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