**Mohobat ke layak** by Rahim

by dead heart on March 31, 2010, 07:35:24 PM
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Khuda ke hue jaa rahe ho tum Zalim..
Bhulna mat kuch insaan mohobat ke layak hote hai...
 

~Rahim~
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«Reply #1 on: March 31, 2010, 08:48:31 PM »
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Wah very touching lines Rahim bhai,bahut hi khoob. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: March 31, 2010, 10:11:18 PM »
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Bahut achcha likha hai aapne Rahim bhai...!!!

 Hats off to you!

kaash insaano ne insaano se mohabbat ki hoti,
to is jahaan me khuda ki jarurat nahi hoti...!!!

Quote from: -Rahim- on March 31, 2010, 07:35:24 PM
Khuda ke hue jaa rahe ho tum Zalim..
Bhulna mat kuch insaan mohobat ke layak hote hai...
 
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«Reply #3 on: March 31, 2010, 10:20:36 PM »
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Wah kya baat hai ............ vry vry good
Quote from: -Rahim- on March 31, 2010, 07:35:24 PM
Khuda ke hue jaa rahe ho tum Zalim..
Bhulna mat kuch insaan mohobat ke layak hote hai...
 

~Rahim~
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«Reply #4 on: April 01, 2010, 09:50:29 AM »
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Nice Lines Rahim,.

In Mitti Ke Khilono Se Kahaan Tak Hum Karte,.
Jab Hum Mar Jaayenge To Zyaada Dair Tak Hume Ye Yaad Nahi Rakhte,.

Wafa Agar Hum Itni Khuda Se Jo Karte "Azeem"
Kasam Khuda Ki Kabhi Is Zamaane Mein Hum Ruswa Na Rehte,.

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«Reply #5 on: April 02, 2010, 09:09:53 AM »
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Shukriya Madhu di, Neelgold jee, Kapil dost aur Azeem bhaijan...

Very nice lines by Azeem bhai aur Kapil dost!!
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«Reply #6 on: April 02, 2010, 09:43:24 AM »
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Thanx a lot Rahim bhai...!!!

Quote from: -Rahim- on April 02, 2010, 09:09:53 AM
Shukriya Madhu di, Neelgold jee, Kapil dost aur Azeem bhaijan...

Very nice lines by Azeem bhai aur Kapil dost!!
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«Reply #7 on: April 02, 2010, 10:43:45 AM »
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muaf karna Rahim ji samajh kam aayaa.
Quote from: -Rahim- on March 31, 2010, 07:35:24 PM
Khuda ke hue jaa rahe ho tum Zalim..
Bhulna mat kuch insaan mohobat ke layak hote hai...
 

~Rahim~
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«Reply #8 on: April 02, 2010, 10:12:07 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on March 31, 2010, 07:35:24 PM
Khuda ke hue jaa rahe ho tum Zalim..
Bhulna mat kuch insaan mohobat ke layak hote hai...
 

~Rahim~
Bahut khoob Rahim Ji
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«Reply #9 on: April 03, 2010, 10:11:56 AM »
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Shukriya Rajesh jee..
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«Reply #10 on: April 03, 2010, 10:13:57 AM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on April 02, 2010, 10:43:45 AM
muaf karna Rahim ji samajh kam aayaa.
Iska matlab yeh hai ke woh Khuda se bahaut mohobat karti hai, mager woh yaad rakhe ke kuch insaan bhi mohobat ke layak hote hai..
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«Reply #12 on: May 23, 2011, 09:53:34 AM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on May 22, 2011, 08:45:07 AM
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Bahaut bahaut shukriya jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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