~Mohobat nahin~ by Rahim

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Yo par, mere fav shayaron main se ek Khwaish Dost hai..Unka kalam parra toh dil jaise aj kuch bol parra..
Meri zindagi main kuch lamhe aise hote hai, jo bilkul tanha hote hai..Inn lamhon main aksar main kuch likh bait'ta hoon..Yeh lamha unn lamhon main se ek hai..

Zindagi main ager apke paas koi aisa hai jo apka hoke apka nahin hai, toh yeh kalam ap dil se samaj sakenge..Yeh kalam ek dedication hai unn tamam kay naam jinhone mohobat ki, payi aur phir pake na payi.. tearyeyed

Aj woh shaks salaam tak nahin karta hai Rahim,
Jo kabhi mujse baatein karne ko tarasta rehta tha..

Jism bik jata hai, mohobat nahin,
Insaan mit jata hai, mohobat nahin..

Tera mera rishta nadi aur kinare ki tarha hai,
Ek dusre kay beena jee nahin sakte phir bhi ek nahin..

Tu asmaan hai toh main zameen hoon,
Ek dusre kay paas rehkar bhi hum saath nahin..

Dard-e-judai tujse main bayan kar nahin sakta,
Tu aur main reh gaye, ‘hum’ nahin..

Umeedein dil ki meri tune kuch iss ada se torri,
Rehgaye ab ‘Khamosh’ main ko bhi aur armaan nahin..

Apne dil kay ashkon se likh diya fasana khud ka ‘Khamosh’,
Sach bataun toh doston main koi shayar nahin..

Guzarish karta hoon kay wafa karna hamesha yaaron,
Kyun ki dil tootne ka ghum bewaffaon ko sehna parrta nahin..

Jism bik jata hai, mohobat nahin,
Insaan mit jata hai, mohobat nahin..

~Rahim~
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«Reply #1 on: August 17, 2010, 12:15:14 AM »
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Waah Mere Bhai, Kya Kehne,Pehle Ashar Dil Choo Gaya,.
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Shukriya Azeem bhai..! teh dil se shukriya..!
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daad pesh he jii..

tum bin tanha he asmaan
tanha he tum bin taare
roothi roothi si he raat
khafa he chand sitare
saans li nhai jati mujhse
kaise sahe jindagi ke sitam
itni si baat ekduje se sanam
na keh sake tum na keh sake hum~
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«Reply #4 on: August 17, 2010, 06:51:53 AM »
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rahim ..tumhari har kavita mujhe bht hi pasand aati hai..par iski to baat hi kuch aur hai....
sach me ye sirf ek poem nahin hai...dil ka dard hai aur us dard me gum un tamam logon ki zindagi...jinhone pyaar kiya aur kho diya...
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«Reply #5 on: August 17, 2010, 07:17:13 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on August 16, 2010, 11:56:10 PM
Yo par, mere fav shayaron main se ek Khwaish Dost hai..Unka kalam parra toh dil jaise aj kuch bol parra..
Meri zindagi main kuch lamhe aise hote hai, jo bilkul tanha hote hai..Inn lamhon main aksar main kuch likh bait'ta hoon..Yeh lamha unn lamhon main se ek hai..

Zindagi main ager apke paas koi aisa hai jo apka hoke apka nahin hai, toh yeh kalam ap dil se samaj sakenge..Yeh kalam ek dedication hai unn tamam kay naam jinhone mohobat ki, payi aur phir pake na payi.. tearyeyed

Aj woh shaks salaam tak nahin karta hai Rahim,
Jo kabhi mujse baatein karne ko tarasta rehta tha..

Jism bik jata hai, mohobat nahin,
Insaan mit jata hai, mohobat nahin..

Tera mera rishta nadi aur kinare ki tarha hai,
Ek dusre kay beena jee nahin sakte phir bhi ek nahin..

Tu asmaan hai toh main zameen hoon,
Ek dusre kay paas rehkar bhi hum saath nahin..

Dard-e-judai tujse main bayan kar nahin sakta,
Tu aur main reh gaye, ‘hum’ nahin..

Umeedein dil ki meri tune kuch iss ada se torri,
Rehgaye ab ‘Khamosh’ main ko bhi aur armaan nahin..

Apne dil kay ashkon se likh diya fasana khud ka ‘Khamosh’,
Sach bataun toh doston main koi shayar nahin..

Guzarish karta hoon kay wafa karna hamesha yaaron,
Kyun ki dil tootne ka ghum bewaffaon ko sehna parrta nahin..

Jism bik jata hai, mohobat nahin,
Insaan mit jata hai, mohobat nahin..

~Rahim~

BAHUT KHOOB RAHIM SAHAB
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«Reply #6 on: August 17, 2010, 07:44:54 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on August 16, 2010, 11:56:10 PM
Yo par, mere fav shayaron main se ek Khwaish Dost hai..Unka kalam parra toh dil jaise aj kuch bol parra..
Meri zindagi main kuch lamhe aise hote hai, jo bilkul tanha hote hai..Inn lamhon main aksar main kuch likh bait'ta hoon..Yeh lamha unn lamhon main se ek hai..

Zindagi main ager apke paas koi aisa hai jo apka hoke apka nahin hai, toh yeh kalam ap dil se samaj sakenge..Yeh kalam ek dedication hai unn tamam kay naam jinhone mohobat ki, payi aur phir pake na payi.. tearyeyed

Aj woh shaks salaam tak nahin karta hai Rahim,
Jo kabhi mujse baatein karne ko tarasta rehta tha..

Jism bik jata hai, mohobat nahin,
Insaan mit jata hai, mohobat nahin..

Tera mera rishta nadi aur kinare ki tarha hai,
Ek dusre kay beena jee nahin sakte phir bhi ek nahin..

Tu asmaan hai toh main zameen hoon,
Ek dusre kay paas rehkar bhi hum saath nahin..

Dard-e-judai tujse main bayan kar nahin sakta,
Tu aur main reh gaye, ‘hum’ nahin..

Umeedein dil ki meri tune kuch iss ada se torri,
Rehgaye ab ‘Khamosh’ main ko bhi aur armaan nahin..

Apne dil kay ashkon se likh diya fasana khud ka ‘Khamosh’,
Sach bataun toh doston main koi shayar nahin..

Guzarish karta hoon kay wafa karna hamesha yaaron,
Kyun ki dil tootne ka ghum bewaffaon ko sehna parrta nahin..

Jism bik jata hai, mohobat nahin,
Insaan mit jata hai, mohobat nahin..

~Rahim~

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Rahim Apke Is Nazm  ki tareef mein Kya Kahoon!!! har Lafz,Dil Se Nikla Hua Mehsoos Hota Hai..bahut Gehri Aur Chot deti Hui yeh Nazm Humesha Mere Dil ke kareeb rahegi....Main Agar Kuch Yahan naa Likhoon To Woh Khud Se beimaani Hogi..Bas Kuch Likh raha Hoon..

Jo mohabbat Kabhi humne ki thi aaj shayad tumhe yaad hai ke Nahi
kuch waade Jo mil kar kiye the
aaj woh waade tumhe yaad hai ke Nahi

Mera Agar Tum Par koi Haq nahi To Naa Sahi!!!
Par tumne kabhi kaha tha ke Tum meri ho,
yeh Baatein tumhe yaad hai ke nahi..

asaan hai auron se fareb karna par Eh Nadaan Khud Se To waffa kar!!!!
kabhi Aaene mein Nazrein mila kar zaroor dekhna,
Yeh Nazrein Sharmshaar hai Ke nahi..

Main maanta Hoon,Zindagi Mein har Koi Apne haq Ka Failsa Le Sakta Hai
Par kuch jazbaat aise the jo Hum-Tum Ko "EK" Karte The!!!
Woh Jazbaat Aaj Bhi Zinda Hai ke Nahi...

Tere Ek baar Ke Ruthne Par naa Jaane Kitne Ashq Bahaye hai inn Palkon Ne!!
Ek baar phir Piche mudkar Dekh to le,
Aankhein meri Aaj Bhi Nam Hai ke Nahi...

Tu Khush rahe, Abaad Rahe, khuda Har Dum Tere saath Rahe!!!!
Par "Khwaish" Ke dil mein Sirf Ek saawaal hai!!!!

"Kya Sachi Mohabbat Ki iss Duniya mein Koi Aukaad Hai Ke Nahi...."
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«Reply #7 on: August 17, 2010, 08:03:48 AM »
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Rahim Apke Is Nazm  ki tareef mein Kya Kahoon!!! har Lafz,Dil Se Nikla Hua Mehsoos Hota Hai..bahut Gehri Aur Chot deti Hui yeh Nazm Humesha Mere Dil ke kareeb rahegi....Main Agar Kuch Yahan naa Likhoon To Woh Khud Se beimaani Hogi..Bas Kuch Likh raha Hoon..

Jo mohabbat Kabhi humne ki thi aaj shayad tumhe yaad hai ke Nahi
kuch waade Jo mil kar kiye the
aaj woh waade tumhe yaad hai ke Nahi

Mera Agar Tum Par koi Haq nahi To Naa Sahi!!!
Par tumne kabhi kaha tha ke Tum meri ho,
yeh Baatein tumhe yaad hai ke nahi..

asaan hai auron se fareb karna par Eh Nadaan Khud Se To waffa karo!!!!
kabhi Aaene mein Nazrein mila kar zaroor dekhna,
Yeh Nazrein Sharmshaar hai Ke nahi..

Main maanta Hoon,Zindagi Mein har Koi Apne haq Ka Failsa Le Sakta Hai
Par kuch jazbaat aise the jo Hum-Tum Ko "EK" Karte The!!!
Woh Jazbaat Aaj Bhi Zinda Hai ke Nahi...

Tere Ek baar Ke Ruthne Par naa Jaane Kitne Ashq Bahaye hai inn Palkon Ne!!
Ek baar phir Piche mudkar Dekh to le,
Aankhein meri Aaj Bhi Nam Hai ke Nahi...

Tu Khush rahe, Abaad Rahe, khuda Har Dum Tere saath Rahe!!!!
Par "Khwaish" Ke dil mein Sirf Ek saawaal hai!!!!

"Kya Sachi Mohabbat Ki iss Duniya mein Koi Aukaad Hai Ke Nahi...."

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«Reply #8 on: August 17, 2010, 08:07:20 AM »
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Rahim bhai ab main kin shabdon me aapke is kavita ki taarif karun samajh hi nahi pa rah hoon.. bahut khoobsurti se bahutt sundar shabdon me bahut khoob likha hai apne... shabd is tarha se jode hain jaise koi jaadu lag raha ho ... bahut pyaari peshkash hai ye aapki.... bahut khoob....!!!

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kuchalke apne paon tale meri mohabbat ko wo muskurayi,
us zaalim ki is adaa pe bhi mujhko pyaar aaya tha,

todke mere dil ko kaanch ke tukdo ki tarha rakha jisne,
jaane us bereham ko kyun maine gale lagaaya tha,

ab bhi us haseen qaatil ko main dil se yaad karta hoon,
jise maine bin maange duwa ki tarha paaya tha...
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«Reply #9 on: August 17, 2010, 08:08:54 AM »
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bahut khoob Khwaish ji....!!!

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Rahim Apke Is Nazm  ki tareef mein Kya Kahoon!!! har Lafz,Dil Se Nikla Hua Mehsoos Hota Hai..bahut Gehri Aur Chot deti Hui yeh Nazm Humesha Mere Dil ke kareeb rahegi....Main Agar Kuch Yahan naa Likhoon To Woh Khud Se beimaani Hogi..Bas Kuch Likh raha Hoon..

Jo mohabbat Kabhi humne ki thi aaj shayad tumhe yaad hai ke Nahi
kuch waade Jo mil kar kiye the
aaj woh waade tumhe yaad hai ke Nahi

Mera Agar Tum Par koi Haq nahi To Naa Sahi!!!
Par tumne kabhi kaha tha ke Tum meri ho,
yeh Baatein tumhe yaad hai ke nahi..

asaan hai auron se fareb karna par Eh Nadaan Khud Se To waffa karo!!!!
kabhi Aaene mein Nazrein mila kar zaroor dekhna,
Yeh Nazrein Sharmshaar hai Ke nahi..

Main maanta Hoon,Zindagi Mein har Koi Apne haq Ka Failsa Le Sakta Hai
Par kuch jazbaat aise the jo Hum-Tum Ko "EK" Karte The!!!
Woh Jazbaat Aaj Bhi Zinda Hai ke Nahi...

Tere Ek baar Ke Ruthne Par naa Jaane Kitne Ashq Bahaye hai inn Palkon Ne!!
Ek baar phir Piche mudkar Dekh to le,
Aankhein meri Aaj Bhi Nam Hai ke Nahi...

Tu Khush rahe, Abaad Rahe, khuda Har Dum Tere saath Rahe!!!!
Par "Khwaish" Ke dil mein Sirf Ek saawaal hai!!!!

"Kya Sachi Mohabbat Ki iss Duniya mein Koi Aukaad Hai Ke Nahi...."
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«Reply #10 on: August 17, 2010, 09:34:46 AM »
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Pasand Farmaane ke liye Aapka Teh Dil Se Shukriya..
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jabarzzat, dhamakedar rahim ji n khwaish ji....
tarif karne ke liye alfaz nahi he mera pass.....



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«Reply #12 on: August 17, 2010, 12:49:27 PM »
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   Very Nice Creation Rahim ji. hello2 hello2
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  Very Nice Creation Rahim ji. hello2 hello2

Shukriya Tamanna jee..Bahaut bahaut shukriya..!
Khush rahiye.!

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BAHUT KHOOB RAHIM SAHAB

Shukriya Adil jee.!Khush rahiye.,!
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jabarzzat, dhamakedar rahim ji n khwaish ji....
tarif karne ke liye alfaz nahi he mera pass.....
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Shukriya Thinkhattk jee..! Khush rahiye.!

Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on August 17, 2010, 06:45:52 AM
daad pesh he jii..

tum bin tanha he asmaan
tanha he tum bin taare
roothi roothi si he raat
khafa he chand sitare
saans li nhai jati mujhse
kaise sahe jindagi ke sitam
itni si baat ekduje se sanam
na keh sake tum na keh sake hum~

Shukriya Abhi jee..
Apki yeh chand lines behad khubsoorat rahi..khush rahiye.!
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«Reply #14 on: August 17, 2010, 07:11:47 PM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 17, 2010, 06:51:53 AM
rahim ..tumhari har kavita mujhe bht hi pasand aati hai..par iski to baat hi kuch aur hai....
sach me ye sirf ek poem nahin hai...dil ka dard hai aur us dard me gum un tamam logon ki zindagi...jinhone pyaar kiya aur kho diya...
Teh dil se shukriya Anamika di.! Khush rahiye.!
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