~Mohobat nahin~ by Rahim -Panna 2:Miscellaneous Shayri

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«Reply #15 on: August 17, 2010, 07:13:21 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on August 17, 2010, 07:44:54 AM

Rahim Apke Is Nazm ki tareef mein Kya Kahoon!!! har Lafz,Dil Se Nikla Hua Mehsoos Hota Hai..bahut Gehri Aur Chot deti Hui yeh Nazm Humesha Mere Dil ke kareeb rahegi....Main Agar Kuch Yahan naa Likhoon To Woh Khud Se beimaani Hogi..Bas Kuch Likh raha Hoon..

Jo mohabbat Kabhi humne ki thi aaj shayad tumhe yaad hai ke Nahi
kuch waade Jo mil kar kiye the
aaj woh waade tumhe yaad hai ke Nahi

Mera Agar Tum Par koi Haq nahi To Naa Sahi!!!
Par tumne kabhi kaha tha ke Tum meri ho,
yeh Baatein tumhe yaad hai ke nahi..

asaan hai auron se fareb karna par Eh Nadaan Khud Se To waffa kar!!!!
kabhi Aaene mein Nazrein mila kar zaroor dekhna,
Yeh Nazrein Sharmshaar hai Ke nahi..

Main maanta Hoon,Zindagi Mein har Koi Apne haq Ka Failsa Le Sakta Hai
Par kuch jazbaat aise the jo Hum-Tum Ko "EK" Karte The!!!
Woh Jazbaat Aaj Bhi Zinda Hai ke Nahi...

Tere Ek baar Ke Ruthne Par naa Jaane Kitne Ashq Bahaye hai inn Palkon Ne!!
Ek baar phir Piche mudkar Dekh to le,
Aankhein meri Aaj Bhi Nam Hai ke Nahi...

Tu Khush rahe, Abaad Rahe, khuda Har Dum Tere saath Rahe!!!!
Par "Khwaish" Ke dil mein Sirf Ek saawaal hai!!!!

"Kya Sachi Mohabbat Ki iss Duniya mein Koi Aukaad Hai Ke Nahi...."

Khwaish Dost, apne itna keh dia kay yeh nazm apke dil kay kareeb rahegi yeh mere liye bahaut badi baat hai..Bahaut bahaut bahaut shukriya apka..Teh dil se shukriya.! hamesha khush rahiye.!

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Apki iss kavita ne behad khusbsoorat sawal pucha hai..Kya sachi mohobat ki koi aukad nahin? bahaut khubsoorat..hamesha ki tarha..yunhi likte rahiye.!


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Re: ~Mohobat nahin~ by Rahim

«Reply #16 on: August 17, 2010, 07:18:07 PM »

Quote from: klaskar on August 17, 2010, 08:07:20 AM

Rahim bhai ab main kin shabdon me aapke is kavita ki taarif karun samajh hi nahi pa rah hoon.. bahut khoobsurti se bahutt sundar shabdon me bahut khoob likha hai apne... shabd is tarha se jode hain jaise koi jaadu lag raha ho ... bahut pyaari peshkash hai ye aapki.... bahut khoob....!!!

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kuchalke apne paon tale meri mohabbat ko wo muskurayi,
us zaalim ki is adaa pe bhi mujhko pyaar aaya tha,

todke mere dil ko kaanch ke tukdo ki tarha rakha jisne,
jaane us bereham ko kyun maine gale lagaaya tha,

ab bhi us haseen qaatil ko main dil se yaad karta hoon,
jise maine bin maange duwa ki tarha paaya tha...

Kapil Dost, teh dil se shukriya..bahaut bahaut shukriya..
Bahaut khubsoorat lines likhi hai apne..bahaut ache.!
Likte rhaiye..Khush rahiye.!
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Re: ~Mohobat nahin~ by Rahim

«Reply #17 on: August 17, 2010, 08:16:12 PM »

U are welcome Rahim bhai aur hamaari lines pasand karne ke liye shukriya...!!!

Quote from: -Rahim- on August 17, 2010, 07:18:07 PM

Kapil Dost, teh dil se shukriya..bahaut bahaut shukriya..
Bahaut khubsoorat lines likhi hai apne..bahaut ache.!
Likte rhaiye..Khush rahiye.!
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Re: ~Mohobat nahin~ by Rahim

«Reply #18 on: August 18, 2010, 07:08:14 AM »

shukriya dost apko pasanad aayi ..achha laga~


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