~*~ Mohobaton ka mausam gaya ~*~ by Rahim

by dead heart on January 05, 2011, 07:36:06 PM
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Salaam Doston..

Dost ya pyaar, yeh sawal maine dekha hai apni zindagi main logon ko khud se puchte hue..aur jawab aksar pyaar hota hai chahe woh pyaar apko dard deta ho..

Kabhi kabhi ap as a dost kisi ko kehte hai kay yeh shaks sahi nahin phir bhi woh shaks usse hi chunta hai kabhi kabhi uske alfaaz apke mutalik bahaut dard ponchate hai..Bas aj issi soch par kuch likhna chahta hoon..Mager kahin bhatak gaya tha likhte likhte..

Mujhe dukh bahaut hua hai uss ek shaks kay lavz parr kar mager shayad utna acha aur dard bhara likh nahin paya mager maine dil se likha hai..

Never take a friend for granted..You may lose them..Like someone lost me..

Meethi meethi baaton ka woh daur gaya,
Doston ko sila dene ka woh zamana gaya..

Kabhi hum unke ashq bahaya karte the,
Ek dusre ka ghum batne ka woh silsila gaya..

Ab toh text aur e-mail se hi kam chal jata hai,
Saath baith kar baaton ka woh mausam gaya..

Istamal kiya, khela aur torr kar phenk diya,
Teri zindagi se ‘Khamosh’ naam ka woh khilona gaya..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: January 05, 2011, 07:58:40 PM »
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Good expression Rahim, I can feel your Pain,.

May Allah Bless you,
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«Reply #2 on: January 05, 2011, 10:25:20 PM »
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Teh dil se shukriya Azeem bhai..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #3 on: January 06, 2011, 03:09:26 AM »
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Rahim ji bahut haqeekat likha aapne.
bahut khoob.
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«Reply #4 on: January 06, 2011, 04:26:37 AM »
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bahooooooooooot hi pyara likha hai bhai rahim.......sachchaiyon ko adhar bana kar likhi gai aapki rachnaon ka apna alag hi andaz hai...dheron daad

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«Reply #5 on: January 06, 2011, 08:17:33 AM »
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nice lines rahim ji...
specially 2nd para...
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«Reply #6 on: January 06, 2011, 10:04:01 AM »
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Nirala jee aur Manzil-e-ishq jee..
bahaut bahaut shukriya..!
Khush rahiye!
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«Reply #7 on: January 06, 2011, 10:06:58 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on January 06, 2011, 04:26:37 AM
bahooooooooooot hi pyara likha hai bhai rahim.......sachchaiyon ko adhar bana kar likhi gai aapki rachnaon ka apna alag hi andaz hai...dheron daad

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Shukriya mere bhai..
apki nazm parri..
bahaut khubsoorat hai..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #8 on: January 06, 2011, 10:17:22 AM »
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Mast likha hai Rahim-bhaijaan.....beete dino ki yaad taazaa ho gayee.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Quote from: -Rahim- on January 05, 2011, 07:36:06 PM
Salaam Doston..

Dost ya pyaar, yeh sawal maine dekha hai apni zindagi main logon ko khud se puchte hue..aur jawab aksar pyaar hota hai chahe woh pyaar apko dard deta ho..

Kabhi kabhi ap as a dost kisi ko kehte hai kay yeh shaks sahi nahin phir bhi woh shaks usse hi chunta hai kabhi kabhi uske alfaaz apke mutalik bahaut dard ponchate hai..Bas aj issi soch par kuch likhna chahta hoon..Mager kahin bhatak gaya tha likhte likhte..

Mujhe dukh bahaut hua hai uss ek shaks kay lavz parr kar mager shayad utna acha aur dard bhara likh nahin paya mager maine dil se likha hai..

Never take a friend for granted..You may lose them..Like someone lost me..

Meethi meethi baaton ka woh daur gaya,
Doston ko sila dene ka woh zamana gaya..

Kabhi hum unke ashq bahaya karte the,
Ek dusre ka ghum batne ka woh silsila gaya..

Ab toh text aur e-mail se hi kam chal jata hai,
Saath baith kar baaton ka woh mausam gaya..

Istamal kiya, khela aur torr kar phenk diya,
Teri zindagi se ‘Khamosh’ naam ka woh khilona gaya..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #9 on: January 06, 2011, 11:34:09 AM »
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bahut khoob bhaiii ...


dhr saari daad..

kabhi kabhi hame pata hota hai ki hamara apna hi azeez dost galat hai or ye jankar bhi ki kam se kam apne dost ke khilaf nhai bol sakte par bolna padta hai......jab samne ek or azeez dost daanv par laga ho..abhi kuchh din pehle hi apni bahut achhi frnd ko naraz kiya he maine apne kisi dost ko devdas banne se bachane ke liye...bata bhi nhai sakta kya kya nhai sunaya dono ne muje..

chale the nibhane kasm dosti ki dost se khilafat karke
rukh dost ka dekhiye ki dosti hi na samaj sake wo~
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«Reply #10 on: January 06, 2011, 12:30:52 PM »
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Koyal di apka shukriya teh dil se..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #11 on: January 06, 2011, 12:32:48 PM »
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Abhi bhaijan, Apke lavz ko samaj saka kyun kay khud pe biti hai..
Kehte dosti torrni nahin chahiye mager kabhi kabhi woh dost
kehlane kay layak bhi toh nahin rehte..
Khair, Khush rahiye aur bahaut bahaut shukriya kay apne waqt diya..
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«Reply #12 on: January 06, 2011, 04:21:04 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on January 05, 2011, 07:36:06 PM
Salaam Doston..

Dost ya pyaar, yeh sawal maine dekha hai apni zindagi main logon ko khud se puchte hue..aur jawab aksar pyaar hota hai chahe woh pyaar apko dard deta ho..

Kabhi kabhi ap as a dost kisi ko kehte hai kay yeh shaks sahi nahin phir bhi woh shaks usse hi chunta hai kabhi kabhi uske alfaaz apke mutalik bahaut dard ponchate hai..Bas aj issi soch par kuch likhna chahta hoon..Mager kahin bhatak gaya tha likhte likhte..

Mujhe dukh bahaut hua hai uss ek shaks kay lavz parr kar mager shayad utna acha aur dard bhara likh nahin paya mager maine dil se likha hai..

Never take a friend for granted..You may lose them..Like someone lost me..

Meethi meethi baaton ka woh daur gaya,
Doston ko sila dene ka woh zamana gaya..

Kabhi hum unke ashq bahaya karte the,
Ek dusre ka ghum batne ka woh silsila gaya..

Ab toh text aur e-mail se hi kam chal jata hai,
Saath baith kar baaton ka woh mausam gaya..

Istamal kiya, khela aur torr kar phenk diya,
Teri zindagi se ‘Khamosh’ naam ka woh khilona gaya..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~


Bahut Bahut Khoob Bhai Rahim!!!

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«Reply #13 on: January 06, 2011, 05:29:37 PM »
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bahut hi khas peshkash mere dost.
jiyo bhai jiyo.
Rahim bhai kya sachhai likhte ho uff.
khus raho bhai.
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«Reply #14 on: January 06, 2011, 06:45:33 PM »
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Apka teh dil se shukriya Killbill jee aur Khwaish Dost..
Hamesha saath dene kay liye apka shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!
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