MOKHTALIF PAHLU.......................................A.B

by adil bechain on March 14, 2009, 05:12:16 AM
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 a-    PARESHAN HAI, INSAAN..
       IS DAUR KEY  ASABAAB SEY,
       KI, AANEY LAGI HAI KHUSBOO,
       CHAMELI KI, GULAB SEY.....!!! sad10
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  b-   CHALA  JAA  RAHA HOON,
       MANZIL KI TALAASH MAIN...,
       RAAHGIR TO BAHOT MILEY,
       RAHBAR NAA MILA KOI...!!! Embarrased

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  c-   BAHUT MOHABBAT SEY PALA HAI..,
       DUSHMANI UNSEY...!
       HAI ZAKHAM BHI UNKA,
       AUR MARHAM BHI UNKA..!! icon_geek


       ADIL BECHAIN

  


    
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«Reply #1 on: March 16, 2009, 07:35:19 AM »
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bhoot khoob ADil ji..
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«Reply #2 on: March 17, 2009, 12:20:32 AM »
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Bahut achhe!!!
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«Reply #3 on: March 17, 2009, 02:25:41 AM »
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Nice 1  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #4 on: June 25, 2009, 09:00:00 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on March 16, 2009, 07:35:19 AM
bhoot khoob ADil ji..

THanx Sophi ji
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Thank u Roja ji
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Quote from: cRony/eNemy on March 17, 2009, 12:20:32 AM
Bahut achhe!!!

Thank u Rony ji
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«Reply #7 on: June 25, 2009, 09:08:21 AM »
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Excellent,very beautiful creation Adil ji. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: July 06, 2009, 05:12:11 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on June 25, 2009, 09:08:21 AM
Excellent,very beautiful creation Adil ji. Applause Applause Applause


THANK U MADHUWESH
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«Reply #9 on: August 16, 2009, 10:54:21 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: August 16, 2009, 11:09:10 AM »
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very nice adil ji

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«Reply #11 on: August 25, 2009, 12:11:22 PM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on August 16, 2009, 11:09:10 AM
very nice adil ji

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THANX JASBIR JI
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: March 04, 2010, 05:46:32 AM »
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Wah wah bahut achhi poems hai Adil ji. Marhaba.
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«Reply #14 on: March 04, 2010, 08:26:52 AM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on March 04, 2010, 05:46:32 AM
Wah wah bahut achhi poems hai Adil ji. Marhaba.

thank u, bytheway, ye poem nahin hai mokhtalif ashaar hain
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