mujh se meri nigahein....

by sana Afroz on November 12, 2014, 07:31:22 PM
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Ek roz pooch baithi ,
mujh se meri nigahein.

kis samt jaa rahi hain,
apni tamaam rahein..

bekhauf hote mujrim,
besamt hoti manzil.

bebaakiyan hamaari,
manzil bana dein mushkil

dar hai 'sana' ye hamko,
mahroom kar na jaayein.

jo aaj hain hamari,
qudrat Ki ye panahein.
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«Reply #1 on: November 12, 2014, 08:06:15 PM »
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Ek roz pooch baithi ,
mujh se meri nigahein.

kis samt jaa rahi hain,
apni tamaam rahein..

bekhauf hote mujrim,
besamt hoti manzil.

barham si ho rahi hain,
qudrat ki ye panahein.
Kya baaaaaaaaaaaaaat hai....waah waah.
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«Reply #2 on: November 13, 2014, 04:39:52 AM »
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Mahutrama Sana Afroz sahibah ..aadab

choti bhr me sher kahna go ke intehaee pur khataar daal per ashiyana banane  jaisa kaam hai ...jahan chand hi alfaz ke baad qafiye se mulaqat hoti hai to radeef bhi ek marhala hai ... akhri sher ke misra e oola se agar sarfe nazar kar liya jaaye to kahna hoga ke kalam me aapne jis chabuk dasti se kaam liya hai wo laaiq e sitaaish hai ...dad hazir hai aapki tilism angez taqleeq per ..Allah kare zoor e qalam aur ziyadah ....


dua go

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«Reply #3 on: November 13, 2014, 05:05:31 AM »
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Shukriya Qadeer saheb isi tarah meri hausla afzai kartey rahein Insha'Allah qalam ka jalwa duniya dekhegi ...Ameen ...
ek baar phir Shukriya...
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«Reply #4 on: November 13, 2014, 05:19:00 AM »
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Shukriya Qadeer saheb isi tarah meri hausla afzai kartey rahein Insha'Allah qalam ka jalwa duniya dekhegi ...Ameen ...
ek baar phir Shukriya...

sana sahibah aap akhri sher ke misra e oola per tawajjo den aur isko badal den plss
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«Reply #5 on: November 13, 2014, 06:15:37 AM »
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Qadeer saheb Maine misra tabdeel kar diya hai plzz nazr e sani farmayein..
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«Reply #6 on: November 13, 2014, 09:43:52 AM »
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Ek roz pooch baithi ,
mujh se meri nigahein.

kis samt jaa rahi hain,
apni tamaam rahein..

bekhauf hote mujrim,
besamt hoti manzil.

bebaakiyan hamaari,
manzil bana dein mushkil

dar hai 'sana' ye hamko,
mahroom kar na jaayein.

jo aaj hain hamari,
qudrat Ki ye panahein.


good ji good icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #7 on: November 13, 2014, 09:46:05 AM »
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Bohat khub sana keep writing
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«Reply #8 on: November 13, 2014, 12:04:58 PM »
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Qadeer saheb Maine misra tabdeel kar diya hai plzz nazr e sani farmayein..

Jazak Allah ...kya khoob tarmeem hai ..zindabad ....rau hazir hai ....
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