<>*Mujhe achcha nahin lagta*<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 04, 2010, 04:50:53 AM
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«Reply #15 on: September 04, 2010, 02:50:24 PM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 04, 2010, 02:40:35 PM
khwaish ji aapki poem k liye kya kahun....dil khush khush ho gaya ye apdhke..thnx alotttttttttt ji for this wonderful reply......

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par yeh kya,Comments To Aaye par Koi Poetry Nahi dikh rahi hai.. sad11
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«Reply #16 on: September 04, 2010, 03:02:24 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on September 04, 2010, 02:50:24 PM
You Are Always Welcome Anuji.. icon_flower

Aapne itna acha likha tha ke hum bhi likhte chale gaye.. Thumbs UP

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reply karenge ji...abhi zara mud nain hai likhne ka
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«Reply #17 on: September 04, 2010, 05:57:43 PM »
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Pahele to hum sab ko daad dete hai jo itni achchi achchi posting ki hai yahaaN sabhi ne......

And kasak Jee aapko do baar alag alag daad Jee
woh isliye ke aapne do alag alag kalaam ko ek jagaaH karke ek post bana dii..... Usual Smile

Pahele 3 sher ke bad aapne naya hi word rhyme meiN use kar liya aur last tak usko kayaam rakha.... So aapko do baar daad...

But aapki post kii feelings and word play achcha raha jee so uske liye bhi daad.....
Aise hi likhati rahiye....
Khush rahiye....
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«Reply #18 on: September 04, 2010, 06:15:10 PM »
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parwaz ji ab fir se chk kijiye.....maine galti sudhaar li.....
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«Reply #19 on: September 04, 2010, 06:30:07 PM »
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It's realy mindblowing Kasak Jee .....

Hum to us waqt soch bhi naih paye the ke sirf words ko milaana hai baki words change karne ki zarurat bhi nahi aapne to kamaal kar diyaa...... Aapki is kalaam per dil se dheroN daad...... Usual Smile
 
Aise hi likhate rahiye.....
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«Reply #20 on: September 04, 2010, 06:34:33 PM »
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hurrayyyyyy......thnx thnx thnnx.....parwaz ji....

aap yunhi tokte rahiye hum improve karte jayenge...
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«Reply #21 on: September 05, 2010, 03:02:04 AM »
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bahut achcha likha hai aapne Kasak ji... bahut pyaar bhare andaaz me aapne dard ko bayaan kiya hai... pyaar me jo ek aag hoti hai uske jalan ko aapne bakhubi bataaya hai... bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai ye apki... is khoobsurat si koshish ke liye dheon badhai...!!!


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«Reply #22 on: September 05, 2010, 08:34:00 AM »
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bahut khoob kasak ji..
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«Reply #23 on: September 05, 2010, 09:34:52 AM »
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Bahaut bahaut khoob Anamika di..! bahaut khubsoorat ehsaas aur jazbaaton ko lavzon main bahaut ache se utara hai apne.!
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«Reply #24 on: September 05, 2010, 09:37:27 AM »
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Abhi jee, Anaam jee aur Khwaish Dost..

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«Reply #25 on: September 05, 2010, 09:40:37 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on September 04, 2010, 12:54:48 PM
"Khwaish" Apna Haal-e-dil lafzon mein Keh deta Hai
Par Agar lafzon Ko Bhi naa Samjha Jaaye To Acha nahi lagta...

Khwaish Dost, yeh do lines bahaut choo gayi dil ko..
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«Reply #26 on: September 07, 2010, 06:29:02 PM »
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Kasak ji You have written a very very touchy marvelous unique effective poem. First two lines are mind blowing. This yr best poem and I congratulate you. You are the poetess in Yo. God may protect you from - buri nazar.
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«Reply #27 on: September 07, 2010, 06:40:01 PM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 04, 2010, 04:50:53 AM
<>*Mujhe achcha nahin lagta*<>

Tu kisi aur ko dekhe ,muskuraye Mujhe achcha nahin lagta
Dil k dard kisi aur ko sunaye Mujhe achcha nahin lagta

Tere kareeb aane k liye taras rahi hun main kabse aur
Tu jab auron ko kareeb laye mujhe achcha nahin lagta

Maana k hai tere kai chahne wale ee mere sanam
Lekin tu kisi aur ka dil behlaye ye mujhe achcha nahin lagta

Dekhna meri aur bhari mehfil me chupke se aur nazar fer lena
Tu mujhse yun nigahein churaye mujhe achcha nahin lagta

Har dard ki parwaah nahin karti main mere sanam lekin
Tu kisi aur ki gazal gungunaye mujhe achcha nahin lagta

Mana k bht buri hun main, nahin salika mujhe jeene ka
Lekin tu mujhe yun palkon pe bithake nazron se giraye
Mujhe achcha nahin lagta…..



awesome kasak ji bahut hi badhiya likha hai...
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