mujhe aisa pyar nahi chahiye.......

by Dineshkumarjonty on December 13, 2013, 12:00:05 AM
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A sweet answer

narsari ke bachche
chhote chhote pyare pyare......

khalte hai....
rote hai.....
huste hai.....
mushkurate hai.....
jhagdte hai....
chilalate hai.....
tang karte hai....
pyar karte hai....
ruthte hai....
manate hai.....
sikhte hai....
sikhate hai....

Ek sabse samjhdaar Teacher unki dekh rekh karta hai
tum hi batao ar socho
ki vo sabkuchh bhala kaise khatam kar de
magar humsab to jante hai ...hum kya kar rahe hai..
ar hume kya karna chahiye......

Dinesh kumar
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«Reply #1 on: December 13, 2013, 12:25:09 AM »
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Nice h.
Par ye kya likha apne ? -

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«Reply #2 on: December 13, 2013, 01:56:13 AM »
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yeh kaisa poem hai. i object and feel bad. i request moderators/admin to remove this shayri
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«Reply #3 on: December 13, 2013, 02:39:06 AM »
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Suman jee....

maine poem ko modify kar diya hai...

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«Reply #5 on: December 13, 2013, 11:11:36 AM »
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aapne Jo bhi pehle likha tha mai use padh nhi paya lekin ye smjh aya ki aapne kuch aisa likha tha Jo aapko iss forum par nhi likhna chahie.

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«Reply #7 on: December 13, 2013, 06:49:18 PM »
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Quote from: Dineshkumarjonty on December 13, 2013, 12:00:05 AM
A sweet answer

narsari ke bachche
chhote chhote pyare pyare......

khalte hai....
rote hai.....
huste hai.....
mushkurate hai.....
jhagdte hai....
chilalate hai.....
tang karte hai....
pyar karte hai....
ruthte hai....
manate hai.....
sikhte hai....
sikhate hai....

Ek sabse samjhdaar Teacher unki dekh rekh karta hai
tum hi batao ar socho
ki vo sabkuchh bhala kaise khatam kar de
magar humsab to jante hai ...hum kya kar rahe hai..
ar hume kya karna chahiye......

Dinesh kumar


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«Reply #9 on: December 14, 2013, 04:21:54 PM »
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sorry baiiii mujhe to aisa pyar chahiye tha shayer karke galti ki
mai kisi ko forse nahi karta hoo.......
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«Reply #10 on: December 14, 2013, 04:41:00 PM »
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Quote from: Dineshkumarjonty on December 14, 2013, 04:21:54 PM
sorry baiiii mujhe to aisa pyar chahiye tha shayer karke galti ki
mai kisi ko forse nahi karta hoo.......

dinesh ji,  aapne post kiya isliye humne pada. force aapne nahi ki but samne dikha to padne ka shouk mujh jaisa rakhne wale pad hi lete hai.

shayri aapko bi pasand hai hum samaj gaye hai. yahan bahut members hai jinke shayari bar bar padne ka mann karta hai. aap ghazal section mein dekhiyega.. aur samaj aajayegi k kaise aur kis words ka upyog karni hai. aap bahut accha likh sakte hai, magar kisi se PM se poochlena k jo aapne likha wo sahi hai ya nahi.

hum bi shayar nahi hai but padne ka aur kuch likhne ka koshish karte rehte hai.. aap bi likh sakte hai.

ok? now cheers
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