mujhe apni god me sir rakhkar so jane do maa - Abhi

by AbhiTamrakar on August 17, 2010, 10:06:01 AM
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mujhe apni god me sir rakhkar so jane do maa,
bahut thak gaya hun bahar khelkar anchal me chhup jane do maa,
bahar dhoop bhi kafi thi tumhare anchal ki yad bahut aayi mujhe,
thoda sa apni mamta ki chhaon me so jane do maa,
me door rehkar tumse tumhe yad karta hun bahut,
aaj tumhare pas hun to thoda machal jane do maa,
me tumhe kitna satata hun shaitaniyo se apni,
meri galtiyan bisar kar mujhe galese lag jane do na maa,
mujhe apni god me sir rakhkar so jane do maa~~~
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«Reply #1 on: August 17, 2010, 10:13:38 AM »
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wah kya likha he aapne maa ke liye......
bahot hi sundar rachana he abhi ji....

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«Reply #2 on: August 17, 2010, 01:40:10 PM »
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Atyant sundar chitran kiya hai aapne apne shabdon ki madat se... mann bhawan rachna hai aapki... bahut sundar...!!!
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«Reply #3 on: August 17, 2010, 02:01:09 PM »
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abhi ji....abhi abhi aisa hi kuch nishu se suna...aur aapki ye poem padhi....dil bhar sa aaya.......

ek bachcha apni maa ko kitna miss karta hai...ye feel hua...

very touching words.....ek bachche k dil se nikle hue
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«Reply #4 on: August 17, 2010, 02:05:59 PM »
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bahot hi achchha likha hai abhi.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: August 17, 2010, 04:19:46 PM »
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Abhi very good poem.......mastam hai .... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


soyee nahi hoon mujhe sula do meri maan

aa jaao mujhe loori suna do meri maan

ashk meri aankhoon main jam say gaye hain

kerkay dil pay jaber mujhe rula de meri maan

dekho kitni bay-tarteeb ho gayee hay zindagi

bikhray hain meray baal bana de meri maan

aik karb say aashna rehti hoon her ghadi

is dard ka ahsaas mitta do meri maan

jal rehi hoon main andekhi aag main

chomo mera mattha aag bujha do meri maan

bohat darr lagta hay mujhe duniya say

tum mujhe duniya say chhupa do meri maan

thak gayee hoon bohat duniya say ladtay ladtay

tum mujhe apni aaghosh main panah do meri maan…!!…


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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on August 17, 2010, 10:06:01 AM
mujhe apni god me sir rakhkar so jane do maa,
bahut thak gaya hun bahar khelkar anchal me chhup jane do maa,
bahar dhoop bhi kafi thi tumhare anchal ki yad bahut aayi mujhe,
thoda sa apni mamta ki chhaon me so jane do maa,
me door rehkar tumse tumhe yad karta hun bahut,
aaj tumhare pas hun to thoda machal jane do maa,
me tumhe kitna satata hun shaitaniyo se apni,
meri galtiyan bisar kar mujhe galese lag jane do na maa,
mujhe apni god me sir rakhkar so jane do maa~~~
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«Reply #6 on: August 17, 2010, 04:35:39 PM »
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mujhe mom ki yaad aarahi hai ye padh ke ab..
koyal thn for sharing this poem
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«Reply #7 on: August 17, 2010, 05:14:12 PM »
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Mujhe bhi ek dam eysa hi laga tha......apne collection se turant ye poem dhundi aur share ki....mujhe bahut achhi lagti hai....dilse lagi hui hai......ye kavita.....








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mujhe mom ki yaad aarahi hai ye padh ke ab..
koyal thn for sharing this poem
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«Reply #8 on: August 18, 2010, 07:12:18 AM »
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aap sabhi ka shukriya aapko pasand aayi hamara likhna safal hua~`

i would like to thnx one of ma frnd "Heenu" she told me to writ on maa and dat day mujhe mummy ki yad bhi aa rahi thi so sab kuchh meri feelings ban ke utar gaya~

thnx again for liking~
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«Reply #9 on: August 18, 2010, 07:17:17 AM »
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माँ ओ मेरी माँ, आज भी मेरी आँखों में आँसू आ जाते हैं,
जब तेरी आँचल के छाओं में गुज़रे दिन याद आते हैं,
काश मैं आज तेरी गोदी में कुछ पल के लिए सो पाता,
मेरे बचपन के तेरे साथ बीते वो सारे लम्हे याद आते हैं…
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«Reply #10 on: August 18, 2010, 07:31:03 AM »
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bahut khoob kapil jiii ...apko padhkar apni likhi ek or kavita yad aa rahi he ~~pesh karta hun~

woh roz school jana
darwaze par akar chillana
mummy me to aa gaya
fir teri god me sir rakhkar
mera baith jana
teri mamta ha hath
sir par padte hi
tere anchal ki chhaon me
mera yuhi so jana
tera pyar se thapki dekar uthana
meri aankh me ye yaaden
aaj bhi aansu dekar jaatti he
dhoop me jab jalta hun kabhi
reh rehkar tere anchal ki chhaon yad aati he
yad aata he har bar tera dantna mujhe
jane kyu ruut bachpan ki itni jaldi chali jati he~jane kyun~  
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«Reply #11 on: August 18, 2010, 07:41:17 AM »
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bahut khoob Abhi ji.... mere ye poem padhke dekhiyega... shayad aapko achchi lage...

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«Reply #12 on: August 18, 2010, 08:11:41 AM »
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mmuuuuummmmmmuyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy........

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«Reply #14 on: August 18, 2010, 08:34:55 AM »
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ye kya tha....

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 18, 2010, 08:11:41 AM
mmuuuuummmmmmuyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy........

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