~*~ Mujhe bada acha lagta hai ~*~ by Rahim

by dead heart on September 22, 2011, 02:57:13 PM
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Tera muskurana, tera sharmana,
Mujse yun nazrein churana,
Mujhe bada acha lagta hai..

Geele tere jism ki woh khushboo,
Kareeb aa kar mujhe sungana,
Mujhe bada acha lagta hai..

Ankhein teri nam nahin honi chahiye,
Gusse main yun farmaan farmana,
Mujhe bada acha lagta hai..

Samander kay kinare fiza ko mehsoos karna,
Aur usme tera meri baahon main ajana,
Mujhe bada acha lagta hai..

Sar rakh soyi ho tu mere kandhe par,
Aise main teri zulfon ko ungliyon se sehlana,
Mujhe bada acha lagta hai..

‘I love you’ sunke tera,
Meri ankhon main ansoo ajana,
Mujhe bada acha lagta hai..

Kash koi hota yeh sab kehne kay liye,
Mager khwabon main hi sahi,
‘Khamosh’ ka yeh sab tasawur kar jana,
Bada acha lagta hai..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: September 22, 2011, 03:03:38 PM »
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Great sharing
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«Reply #2 on: September 22, 2011, 05:03:26 PM »
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Good,Rahim Saheb.
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«Reply #3 on: September 22, 2011, 05:30:43 PM »
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Rahim Sahaab Aadaab!

Bahut khoob Janab... Achche ahsaas O khayaal ko
kafi khub lafzoN meiN sameta hai aapne.. Usual Smile

Humari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye.. Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda hafez... Usual Smile         
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«Reply #4 on: September 22, 2011, 05:43:05 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on September 22, 2011, 02:57:13 PM
Tera muskurana, tera sharmana,
Mujse yun nazrein churana,
Mujhe bada acha lagta hai..

Geele tere jism ki woh khushboo,
Kareeb aa kar mujhe sungana,
Mujhe bada acha lagta hai..

Ankhein teri nam nahin honi chahiye,
Gusse main yun farmaan farmana,
Mujhe bada acha lagta hai..

Samander kay kinare fiza ko mehsoos karna,
Aur usme tera meri baahon main ajana,
Mujhe bada acha lagta hai..

Sar rakh soyi ho tu mere kandhe par,
Aise main teri zulfon ko ungliyon se sehlana,
Mujhe bada acha lagta hai..

‘I love you’ sunke tera,
Meri ankhon main ansoo ajana,
Mujhe bada acha lagta hai..

Kash koi hota yeh sab kehne kay liye,
Mager khwabon main hi sahi,
‘Khamosh’ ka yeh sab tasawur kar jana,
Bada acha lagta hai..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #5 on: September 22, 2011, 09:35:30 PM »
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Quote from: awais_007 on September 22, 2011, 03:03:38 PM
Great sharing
Awais jee, sharing nahin maine khud likhi hai..
Khush rahiye..!
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on September 22, 2011, 05:03:26 PM
Good,Rahim Saheb.
Shukriya Shukriya Siddiqui Sahab..
Khush rahiye..!
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 22, 2011, 05:30:43 PM
Rahim Sahaab Aadaab!

Bahut khoob Janab... Achche ahsaas O khayaal ko
kafi khub lafzoN meiN sameta hai aapne.. Usual Smile

Humari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye.. Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda hafez... Usual Smile         

Parwaaz jee,
Apka teh dil se shukriya..
Bas yunhi saath dete rahiye..
Khush rahiye..!
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Quote from: MANOJ6568 on September 22, 2011, 05:43:05 PM
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Shukriya Shukriya Manoj jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #9 on: September 23, 2011, 02:46:03 AM »
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bahut khub Rahim sahab--
bht pyara nagma hai--

bht dino baad aapka koi nagma padha jisme dard ka namonishan nhi hai Usual Smile

aur haan ye Last para to mere lie likha hai aapne shayd--
mujhe b ye sab--
khabon me tasswar kar jana bada acha lagta hai
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daad daad sahab bahot saari daad
likhte rahiye
muskurate rahiye
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«Reply #10 on: September 23, 2011, 06:42:15 AM »
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very gooooooooood Rahim ji as usual bahut sunder.
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«Reply #11 on: September 23, 2011, 06:54:51 AM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Dost Rahim..

Ek Khoobsurat Geet!!! bahut ache dost Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: September 23, 2011, 10:01:02 AM »
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Quote from: sarfira on September 23, 2011, 02:46:03 AM
bahut khub Rahim sahab--
bht pyara nagma hai--

bht dino baad aapka koi nagma padha jisme dard ka namonishan nhi hai Usual Smile

aur haan ye Last para to mere lie likha hai aapne shayd--
mujhe b ye sab--
khabon me tasswar kar jana bada acha lagta hai
tongue3

daad daad sahab bahot saari daad
likhte rahiye
muskurate rahiye
Yeh toh kamal hogaya na..kay Rahim ka likha hua kalam,
aur usme dard ek katra bhi nahin..!
Mujhe lagta hai arson baad dard kay bina kuch likh paya hoon..
Apka teh teh dil se shukriya dost..
Insh'Allah koi miljaega jald hi apko..
Khush rahiye..!
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on September 23, 2011, 06:42:15 AM
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very gooooooooood Rahim ji as usual bahut sunder.

Dil se shukriya Suresh jee..
Bas yunhi saath dete rahiyega..
Khush rahiye..!
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Quote from: khwaish on September 23, 2011, 06:54:51 AM
Bahut bahut Khoob Dost Rahim..

Ek Khoobsurat Geet!!! bahut ache dost Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Shukriya Shukriya Khwaish dost..
Bas saath dete rahiyega..
Khush rahiye..!
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