~*~ Mujhe bhi parr liya karo ~*~ by Rahim -Panna 2:Miscellaneous Shayri

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«Reply #15 on: February 28, 2011, 07:37:24 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on February 28, 2011, 03:24:04 PM

bhai Rahim ,Jaise Ki Aapne Kaha Ke Aapne Yeh nazm Gusse mein Likha Hai, Main Sach kahoon To Mujhe iss nazm mein badi masumiyat Nazar aayi..Kisi se Gile-shikwe Dil mein Paalkar Jeena Aur Kabhi Ek choti Si Shikayat mein usse Khatam kar dena, Inn Dono Baaton mein Bahut Fark hai..Aapne Apne dil ka haal bahut khoooooooooobsurti se bayaan kiya..bahut bahut khoob!!!

Aapki Har Baat Mujhe achi tarah samaj aayi hai,umeed karta hoon iss baat ko har koi samjhe..

Bas samaj jaye toh likhne ka maksad pura hojaega..
Apka main teh dil se shukriya ada karta hoon dost..
Khush rahiyega sada..!


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Re: ~*~ Mujhe bhi parr liya karo ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #16 on: February 28, 2011, 07:40:57 PM »

Quote from: Mann on February 28, 2011, 03:33:39 PM

Rahim Mere Bhaiiiiiiiiii... Aapka Gussa Bilkul Jaayaz Hai.. aur aapka Likha ek ek lafz Such Hai.. Main Kadra Karta Hoon aapke Likhe in alfaazon Ki.. !!!

Aapki Is Rachna Se Zaroor Kuch Log Khud Me Sudhaar Karenge..!!

Bahut Khoooooooooooob..

**~** Mann **~**

Jab kabhi bhi Vikas bhai ap ate ho aur comment karte ho,
toh dil khushi se jummmm jata hai..
Teh teh dil se shukriya mere bhai..
Khush rahiye..!


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Re: ~*~ Mujhe bhi parr liya karo ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #17 on: February 28, 2011, 09:14:25 PM »

Ale Ale.. Mere bhai ko bhi gussa aata hai ??

Bahoot Khoob Rahim Bro.....

I also feel u r right.. some poeple here always like to disparage instead of appreciating... but kehte hai na saari Ungliya ak barabar nahi hoti...

Isliye Chill... Do things right from your end , if someone is doing something wrong , we can tell them not to do such things again but we cant stop... coz its not about one person its about several...

Rest You write always Good and something true.. !!! Keep rocking !!! Usual Smile

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Re: ~*~ Mujhe bhi parr liya karo ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #18 on: March 01, 2011, 10:12:32 AM »

Quote from: Sophi on February 28, 2011, 09:14:25 PM

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Divya di,
apke iss bhai ko gussa bahaut ata hai..
filhal toh kam kar liya hai..
bahaut sahi kaha apne di..
Yaad rakhunga..
Aur teh dil se shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!


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