-----/// Mujhe chale jaane do ///----- Hriday

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main  shaam  kaa   kaalaa baadal  hoon
mujhe hawaaon sangh  chale  jaane do
main  rahungaa   to  bas  dard  dungaa
bahut  duur  mujhe  ab chale  jaane do

naa  roko  mujhe  ab, na toko mujhe ab
mujhe   dur      chale    hi     jaanaa   hai
ghum   ke   sabhi  kaa   ek  kaaran hoon
mujhe    duur    ab     chale    jaane   do

ban kaantaa ghulaab mein rehtaa hoon
ban  zeher  sharaab  mein  rehtaa hoon
mere  hone  se   bas   nuksaan    hi  hai
naa roko  mujhe, mujhe chale  jaane do

har  shaks  ki   aankhon   mein khaltaa
hoon     aag     nahi    fir     bhi    jaltaa
ghaaw  bhi  hoon, main dard bhi hoon
mujhe     duur    ab   chale     jaane  do

garam  ret  kaa   koi  kann  hoon  main
dard  bharaa  ek   khsann   hoon  main
mere   hone   se    kisne    kyaa  paayaa
vyarth  hoon,  mujhe   chale   jaane do

naa  pyaas  bujhe,  woh  saagar  hoon
naa  raahat   de,   woh   baarish  hoon
mujhe   jal  ke  raakh  ban  jaanaa   hai
mujhe   jaanaa   hai,  chale   jaane   do


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«Reply #1 on: May 26, 2014, 03:15:49 PM »
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bahut khoooob ....daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad kubool karein Hriday ji
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«Reply #2 on: May 26, 2014, 03:17:54 PM »
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bahut khoooob ....daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad kubool karein Hriday ji
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Suresh ji.....!!!
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emotional and beautiful creation kapil ji kaafi samay baad padi aapki krati bahut accha laga bazm me aate rahen
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«Reply #4 on: May 26, 2014, 03:56:37 PM »
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emotional and beautiful creation kapil ji kaafi samay baad padi aapki krati bahut accha laga bazm me aate rahen

bahut bahut shukriyaa Premdeep ji jo aapne meri is koshish ko waqt diyaa, padhaa aur pasand kiyaa, main aapkaa tahe dil se shukriyaa adaa kartaa hoon...!!!
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«Reply #5 on: May 26, 2014, 04:45:18 PM »
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बहुत बहुत खुबसूरत एहसास.....

ढेरों ढेरों दाद......

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«Reply #6 on: May 26, 2014, 04:47:51 PM »
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बहुत बहुत खुबसूरत एहसास.....

ढेरों ढेरों दाद......

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bahut bahut shukriyaa Amit ji...!!!
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«Reply #7 on: May 26, 2014, 07:57:45 PM »
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main  shaam  kaa   kaalaa baadal  hoon
mujhe hawaaon sangh  chale  jaane do
main  rahungaa   to  bas  dard  dungaa
bahut  duur  mujhe  ab chale  jaane do

naa  roko  mujhe  ab, na toko mujhe ab
mujhe   dur      chale    hi     jaanaa   hai
ghum   ke   sabhi  kaa   ek  kaaran hoon
mujhe    duur    ab     chale    jaane   do

ban kaantaa ghulaab mein rehtaa hoon
ban  zeher  sharaab  mein  rehtaa hoon
mere  hone  se   bas   nuksaan    hi  hai
naa roko  mujhe, mujhe chale  jaane do

har  shaks  ki   aankhon   mein khaltaa
hoon     aag     nahi    fir     bhi    jaltaa
ghaaw  bhi  hoon, main dard bhi hoon
mujhe     duur    ab   chale     jaane  do

garam  ret  kaa   koi  kann  hoon  main
dard  bharaa  ek   khsann   hoon  main
mere   hone   se    kisne    kyaa  paayaa
vyarth  hoon,  mujhe   chale   jaane do

naa  pyaas  bujhe,  woh  saagar  hoon
naa  raahat   de,   woh   baarish  hoon
mujhe   jal  ke  raakh  ban  jaanaa   hai
mujhe   jaanaa   hai,  chale   jaane   do


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acha likha hai per kuch words mujhe samjh nahin aaye  icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #8 on: May 26, 2014, 09:16:28 PM »
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Baddiya  peshkash Hirday  ji. superb. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Bahut khoob.
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«Reply #10 on: May 26, 2014, 11:44:28 PM »
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main  shaam  kaa   kaalaa baadal  hoon
mujhe hawaaon sangh  chale  jaane do
main  rahungaa   to  bas  dard  dungaa
bahut  duur  mujhe  ab chale  jaane do

naa  roko  mujhe  ab, na toko mujhe ab
mujhe   dur      chale    hi     jaanaa   hai
ghum   ke   sabhi  kaa   ek  kaaran hoon
mujhe    duur    ab     chale    jaane   do

ban kaantaa ghulaab mein rehtaa hoon
ban  zeher  sharaab  mein  rehtaa hoon
mere  hone  se   bas   nuksaan    hi  hai
naa roko  mujhe, mujhe chale  jaane do

har  shaks  ki   aankhon   mein khaltaa
hoon     aag     nahi    fir     bhi    jaltaa
ghaaw  bhi  hoon, main dard bhi hoon
mujhe     duur    ab   chale     jaane  do

garam  ret  kaa   koi  kann  hoon  main
dard  bharaa  ek   khsann   hoon  main
mere   hone   se    kisne    kyaa  paayaa
vyarth  hoon,  mujhe   chale   jaane do

naa  pyaas  bujhe,  woh  saagar  hoon
naa  raahat   de,   woh   baarish  hoon
mujhe   jal  ke  raakh  ban  jaanaa   hai
mujhe   jaanaa   hai,  chale   jaane   do


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acha likha hai per kuch words mujhe samjh nahin aaye  icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!

bahut bahut shukriyaaa Sheba ji, jo words aapko samajh nahi aaye woh hain...
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Baddiya  peshkash Hirday  ji. superb. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut bahut shukriyaaa Madhu ji....!!!
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Bahut khoob.

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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Adil ji....!!!
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