~Mujhe likhna nahin ata~ by Rahim

by dead heart on October 27, 2010, 01:56:32 PM
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Aj dil ki ek shikayat ko lavzon main utarne ki ek koshish kar raha hoon..

Mujhe woh bhari bhari lavzon ka istamal karna nahin ata,
Aisa lagta hai jaise mujhe likhna hi nahin ata..

Kehte hai kayi log shayar par nazmein parrte nahin meri,
Shayad mujhe nazmon main woh ras dalna nahin ata..

Kehne ko toh khud kay liye likta hoon mager chahta hoon sab parrein,
Mager shayad mujhe bakiyon ki tarha wah wahi lootna nahin ata..

Aj dil woh baat kehgaya jo kayi dino se kehna chahta hai,
‘Khamosh’ tujhe likhna nahin ata..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: October 27, 2010, 03:23:35 PM »
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Bhai Rahim!!! Yeh Naa kahiye Ke Aapko Likhna Nahi Aata,Haan Yeh zaroor Ho sakta hai Ke Humein Padhna Nahi Aata..

Aapne waise To likha Bahut Hi khoob Hai,Koi Shaq Nahi Par Isse bada Koi jhoot Nahi Ho sakta Ke "Rahim ko Likhna Nhai Aata" Jaise ke maine aapko pehle bhi kaha hai hai Ke Rahim Aapke Likhe Lafz Ehsaaso Se bharpoor Hote Hai..Aap Dil Se likhte Ho Aur Yaad Rakhiye Dil Se likhne Wale Humesha Auro Ke Dil Ko Chute Hai, Yoindia Ki mehfil mein Aap Ki Ek Alag hi pehchaan Hai..

Yahan Aise Bahut Se Shayar hai Jo Sirf Apna Hi Likha padhte Hai,Unn Sab se Main Pichle Thread mein Guzaarish kar chuka Hoon..Ke Auron ka Likha Bhi padhe..Khair Chodiye Inn baaton Ko,Aapki baat Nirali Hai..Plz Aisa kabhi naa Sochiye.
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«Reply #2 on: October 27, 2010, 04:28:25 PM »
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ufffffffffffff bhai .....ye kya keh rahe ho tum.....agar tumko likhna nahin aata to fir to humko bhi sochna padega k humko likhna aata hai k nahin......
hmmm...dard ko jis atrah tumbayaan karte ho wo sidhe dil me utarate hain sahbd..jante ho tum....fir bhi aisa kehte ho..aur haan rahi replies ki baat to yahan kai aisi post hain jobht achhci hain lekin unpe reply nahin hote kisike iska matlab ye to nahin k unhe likhna nahin aata ya unhone bekaar likha hai....

aisa sochna bhi nahin re....jaisa k khwaish ji ne kaha ..yahan iss mehfil me aapki alag ek pehchan hai..log rahim k post ki wait karte hain dhyan se padhte hain..aur sarahte bhi hain.....
isly apne man se ye baat nikal do mere chhote se bhaiya...

aur jii khol k likho apni poem kya fark padta hai koi padhe ya nahin..bht hain tumhare fans jo tumhe padhna chahte hain ...samjhe...chhotu
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«Reply #3 on: October 27, 2010, 07:28:38 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on October 27, 2010, 03:23:35 PM
Bhai Rahim!!! Yeh Naa kahiye Ke Aapko Likhna Nahi Aata,Haan Yeh zaroor Ho sakta hai Ke Humein Padhna Nahi Aata..

Aapne waise To likha Bahut Hi khoob Hai,Koi Shaq Nahi Par Isse bada Koi jhoot Nahi Ho sakta Ke "Rahim ko Likhna Nhai Aata" Jaise ke maine aapko pehle bhi kaha hai hai Ke Rahim Aapke Likhe Lafz Ehsaaso Se bharpoor Hote Hai..Aap Dil Se likhte Ho Aur Yaad Rakhiye Dil Se likhne Wale Humesha Auro Ke Dil Ko Chute Hai, Yoindia Ki mehfil mein Aap Ki Ek Alag hi pehchaan Hai..

Yahan Aise Bahut Se Shayar hai Jo Sirf Apna Hi Likha padhte Hai,Unn Sab se Main Pichle Thread mein Guzaarish kar chuka Hoon..Ke Auron ka Likha Bhi padhe..Khair Chodiye Inn baaton Ko,Aapki baat Nirali Hai..Plz Aisa kabhi naa Sochiye.


Teh dil se shukriya kehna chahta hoon ae dost apka..
Jaise apne kaha kay Rahim dil se likta hai..
jo mehsoos kiya wohi likha mager ap jaise dost kismat walon ko milte hai..shukriya ae dost..!
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«Reply #4 on: October 27, 2010, 07:33:08 PM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 27, 2010, 04:28:25 PM
ufffffffffffff bhai .....ye kya keh rahe ho tum.....agar tumko likhna nahin aata to fir to humko bhi sochna padega k humko likhna aata hai k nahin......
hmmm...dard ko jis atrah tumbayaan karte ho wo sidhe dil me utarate hain sahbd..jante ho tum....fir bhi aisa kehte ho..aur haan rahi replies ki baat to yahan kai aisi post hain jobht achhci hain lekin unpe reply nahin hote kisike iska matlab ye to nahin k unhe likhna nahin aata ya unhone bekaar likha hai....

aisa sochna bhi nahin re....jaisa k khwaish ji ne kaha ..yahan iss mehfil me aapki alag ek pehchan hai..log rahim k post ki wait karte hain dhyan se padhte hain..aur sarahte bhi hain.....
isly apne man se ye baat nikal do mere chhote se bhaiya...

aur jii khol k likho apni poem kya fark padta hai koi padhe ya nahin..bht hain tumhare fans jo tumhe padhna chahte hain ...samjhe...chhotu
Samaj gaya di..
Ap jaise dost paye hai, kuch nek kam zaroor kiya hoga..
Apka shukriya..
Im touched..
Bas lavz nahin kay apko bata sakun, how much i am touched..!
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«Reply #5 on: October 28, 2010, 05:43:40 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI     RAHIM JI......

YEH KYUN KAHETE HO KI "MUJHE LIKHNA NAHIN AATA"
YEH KYUN NAHIN KAHETE
KHUD KI WAH-WAHYI LOOTANE KE LIYE MUJHE BIKNA NAHIN AATA........
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«Reply #6 on: October 28, 2010, 06:29:43 AM »
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Rahim bhai..sabhi log kuchh na kuchh keh chuke hain ..main kya kahun main to khud ko apke in labzo mein dhoond raha hun...

Aaj ek dil ki bat batata hun ....
mujhe kabhi likhna nahi ayaa..
bahut koshish ki wo likhu jo log kehete hain..
par har bar wo likh gaya jo dil ne kaha ...
kabhi ye sochkar nhai likha ki koi poem ya shayari ya gazal likhuga ..
kyuki sochkar likhna kabhi nahi ayaa..
yunhi keheta gaya or kuchh ban gaya..
warna mujhe ab takl kuchh banana nahi ayaa..Isiliye ye mat kahiye ki apse likhna nahi ataa ..
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«Reply #7 on: October 31, 2010, 04:11:16 PM »
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Shukriya Cara jee
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«Reply #8 on: October 31, 2010, 04:14:27 PM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on October 28, 2010, 06:29:43 AM
Rahim bhai..sabhi log kuchh na kuchh keh chuke hain ..main kya kahun main to khud ko apke in labzo mein dhoond raha hun...

Aaj ek dil ki bat batata hun ....
mujhe kabhi likhna nahi ayaa..
bahut koshish ki wo likhu jo log kehete hain..
par har bar wo likh gaya jo dil ne kaha ...
kabhi ye sochkar nhai likha ki koi poem ya shayari ya gazal likhuga ..
kyuki sochkar likhna kabhi nahi ayaa..
yunhi keheta gaya or kuchh ban gaya..
warna mujhe ab takl kuchh banana nahi ayaa..Isiliye ye mat kahiye ki apse likhna nahi ataa ..
Apki iss baat ne mujhe emotional kar diya hai Dost..
Kahin na kahi apne iss dil ki baat keh di hai..
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«Reply #9 on: November 01, 2010, 06:41:30 AM »
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aji rahim bhaii...dil hi dil baat keheta he~
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«Reply #10 on: November 01, 2010, 08:39:21 AM »
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Wah ji wah....kya khoob likhte ho....Rahim-bhai..... Applause Applause Applause

Badi achhi aadat hai janab Yu khud ko tatolna-tolna
Par jab mann se likho usse kisi se kam mat samajhna
Quote from: -Rahim- on October 27, 2010, 01:56:32 PM
Aj dil ki ek shikayat ko lavzon main utarne ki ek koshish kar raha hoon..

Mujhe woh bhari bhari lavzon ka istamal karna nahin ata,
Aisa lagta hai jaise mujhe likhna hi nahin ata..

Kehte hai kayi log shayar par nazmein parrte nahin meri,
Shayad mujhe nazmon main woh ras dalna nahin ata..

Kehne ko toh khud kay liye likta hoon mager chahta hoon sab parrein,
Mager shayad mujhe bakiyon ki tarha wah wahi lootna nahin ata..

Aj dil woh baat kehgaya jo kayi dino se kehna chahta hai,
‘Khamosh’ tujhe likhna nahin ata..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #11 on: November 01, 2010, 08:14:53 PM »
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Shukriya Koyal di..
Bahaut khubsoorat baat kahi hai apne..
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