<>*Mujhe maut k aur kareeb le jata hai…*<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on January 13, 2011, 11:11:51 AM
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<>*Mujhe maut k aur kareeb le jata hai…*<>
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kehna chaahti hun bht kuch, lekin lafz na koi mil paata hai
dil mera tujhe jab bhi sochta hai, bas sochta reh jata hai

ankahe jazbaat mere tu yakeenan kuch samjh sa jata hai
chaahe main kuch na kahun, teri gazal me wo bas jata hai

har ek ashk tera teri gazlon ko khubsurti se sajata hai
tabhi to tera likha har sher, mere dil me ghar bana jata hai

anjaan se inn raaston par jab dil mera chalna chahta hai
hath thaam k ye dard tera, mujhe raasta dikha jata hai

tere intezaar me janu har lamha ek sadi sa lagta hai
bita hua har pal mujhe maut k aur kareeb le jata hai…!!!
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«Reply #1 on: January 13, 2011, 12:31:07 PM »
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itna dard anamika ji........

bahot dard baya kar diya he apne to......kese lkih leti he aap ye sab ye mere liye hamesha sawal hi rahega....well few lines for ur reply.....

tumse ki he mohhabat tab khud ko pahchana he
tere pahlu me rahte he kaha ab koi aur thikana

na kar u fana hone ki bate
ek roj sabhi ko jana he

mout se kiski yarii he
ek din sabko jana he

khushiyo se tuje sawaro harpal
dil me ye afsaana he

kareeb rahe ya ho fasle
tujse kiya wada fir bhi nibhana he

teri khamoshi ke alfaaj
ek humne hi to jana he

na kar kal ki ab parwah tu
ab hone de jo ho jana he
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«Reply #2 on: January 13, 2011, 12:52:59 PM »
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uffffffffffffff,,,,,,rajaji........ab kya khun main inke liye...........
bas itna...

leke tera hath apne hathon me mujhe so jana h
kab aayega wo pal bas uss pal k liye jiye jana h

annkhon me tere pyaar bahot h yehi maine jana h
unhi palkon ki chhaon me ab to mujhe jiye jana h
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«Reply #3 on: January 13, 2011, 01:15:43 PM »
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wah badhiya Mehfil hai
  shama rangeen hai
nahi isse bujhana hai
lage raho aap dono bas
  hame to ab anand uthaana hai
bhaad me gai duniyadaari ab
  mera to bas yahi ab--
kuch palon ka thikaana hai
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bahut khubsurat nagma K mam aur lajawaab Jawaab Matrix ji
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thanx
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«Reply #4 on: January 13, 2011, 04:12:31 PM »
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hey bhagwaan --!!!!
ye kya Kasak--
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itni gahrai se zazbaaton
kaagaz pr utaar daala.
  mar hi jaun mai ise padhkar.
ab to mere zehan me kuch
aa hi nahi rha siwaye iske ki
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apne zazbaaton ko mai kya lafz dun
      tere lafzon me to mere hi zazbaat hain
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khus rahen
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«Reply #5 on: January 13, 2011, 05:45:16 PM »
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Kasak Jee Aadaab!

Kia kaheN .... kafi dilfareb aur dardbhara
kalaam pesh kia hai aapne daad..

Lafz haiN ke tez khanjar
Ahsaas the ke chubhte rahe andar....

Likhati rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile         
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«Reply #6 on: January 13, 2011, 05:53:05 PM »
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thnku thnku nirala mastana ji...k aapko hamari ye koshish pasand aai...
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«Reply #7 on: January 13, 2011, 05:56:36 PM »
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mare tumhare aur mere dushman KB..tum to yunhi masti lutate hi achche lagte ho..aise senti dailogue maarte nahin...
thnx re itna sara kehne k liye....
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«Reply #8 on: January 13, 2011, 05:57:36 PM »
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parwaz ji aapne meri koshish ko pasand kiya isse badi tareef kya hogi....thnx a lot jiii...
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«Reply #9 on: January 13, 2011, 06:27:22 PM »
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bahut hi khubsurat bayaan hai dard ka kasak ji...

tujhe dard mein dekhta hun to dard hota hai kasak
shayad mere dard se hi tujhe bahut dard hota hai Intezar !

Intezar !
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«Reply #10 on: January 14, 2011, 06:27:43 AM »
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khubsurat lines intezaar.....

tere dard se pighalta hai dil mera jaise mom pighalti hai agan se
k tujhe kaise samjhaye kasak k tu iss tarah mere liye tadpa na kar....!!!
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«Reply #11 on: January 14, 2011, 11:27:28 AM »
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Bahut khoob kasak ji baaki sabhi ne b khoob likha hai...
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«Reply #12 on: January 14, 2011, 11:58:10 AM »
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Bahut Khoooooooob Anamika Ji.. aap to Humesha se kamaal Hain.. Aur Yeh ek aur rachna aapki Khubsoorat Rachnaaon me shamil ho gai Hai.. Bahut bahut Khooooooooob.. Applause Applause



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«Reply #13 on: January 15, 2011, 02:28:59 PM »
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Bahut Khub Anamika Ji Bahut HI Mast Likha Hai
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«Reply #14 on: January 19, 2011, 01:13:35 AM »
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Naa likho tum ayse geet k mujhe rona aa jaata hai
Soch kar he tujh se judaayi passinaa aa jaata hai

Rooh kyu aaj naaraaj hai khud apne shareer se
Puchh rahaa hairaan ho aaj Anu se Humnaam hai

Likhogi jab jab bhee tum dard bhare geet ayse
Lafz ka tumse naaraaj hona jaan lo laazim hai

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on January 13, 2011, 11:11:51 AM
<>*Mujhe maut k aur kareeb le jata hai…*<>
 love9 love9 love9 love9 love9


kehna chaahti hun bht kuch, lekin lafz na koi mil paata hai
dil mera tujhe jab bhi sochta hai, bas sochta reh jata hai

ankahe jazbaat mere tu yakeenan kuch samjh sa jata hai
chaahe main kuch na kahun, teri gazal me wo bas jata hai

har ek ashk tera teri gazlon ko khubsurti se sajata hai
tabhi to tera likha har sher, mere dil me ghar bana jata hai

anjaan se inn raaston par jab dil mera chalna chahta hai
hath thaam k ye dard tera, mujhe raasta dikha jata hai

tere intezaar me janu har lamha ek sadi sa lagta hai
bita hua har pal mujhe maut k aur kareeb le jata hai…!!!
 love9 love9 love9 love9 love9 love9
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