Mujhe tum na yun chhera karo

by nandbahu on January 18, 2013, 11:52:04 AM
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Mujhe tum na yun chhera karo
Akele mein na yun bulaya karo

Mai hoon larki seedhi gaon ki
Tumahre hoon mai kis kam ki
Dil mera nada bhola sa hai
Chhalava na koi janta hai

Meri sakhiya mujhe hain sab chherti
Tera nam leke tang karti
Sakhiyo ke tano se darti hoon
Badnam hone se kapti hoon

Jahan bhi mai jati hoon tum aate ho
Tumhi bolo kyon yun tarsate ho
Pyar kya hota hai na janu mai
Bato mein teri na aaun mai

Mujhe tum na yun chhera karo
Akele mein na yun bulaya karo


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«Reply #1 on: January 18, 2013, 11:58:31 AM »
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Mujhe tum na yun chhera karo
Akele mein na yun bulaya karo

Mai hoon larki seedhi gaon ki
Tumahre hoon mai kis kam ki
Dil mera nada bhola sa hai
Chhalava na koi janta hai

Meri sakhiya mujhe hain sab chherti
Tera nam leke tang karti
Sakhiyo ke tano se darti hoon
Badnam hone se kapti hoon

Jahan bhi mai jati hoon tum aate ho
Tumhi bolo kyon yun tarsate ho
Pyar kya hota hai na janu mai
Bato mein teri na aaun mai

Mujhe tum na yun chhera karo
Akele mein na yun bulaya karo


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«Reply #2 on: January 18, 2013, 12:19:29 PM »
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Mujhe tum na yun chhera karo
Akele mein na yun bulaya karo

Mai hoon larki seedhi gaon ki
Tumahre hoon mai kis kam ki
Dil mera nada bhola sa hai
Chhalava na koi janta hai

Meri sakhiya mujhe hain sab chherti
Tera nam leke tang karti
Sakhiyo ke tano se darti hoon
Badnam hone se kapti hoon

Jahan bhi mai jati hoon tum aate ho
Tumhi bolo kyon yun tarsate ho
Pyar kya hota hai na janu mai
Bato mein teri na aaun mai

Mujhe tum na yun chhera karo
Akele mein na yun bulaya karo


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aapka likhne ka ek naya andaz. very very good. bahut acha laga padkar. mubarak
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«Reply #3 on: January 18, 2013, 12:49:43 PM »
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really you have written it so beautifully. dheron daad
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«Reply #4 on: January 18, 2013, 01:04:15 PM »
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very nice nandji
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«Reply #5 on: January 18, 2013, 03:26:23 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: January 18, 2013, 03:29:09 PM »
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Mujhe tum na yun chhera karo
Akele mein na yun bulaya karo

Mai hoon larki seedhi gaon ki
Tumahre hoon mai kis kam ki
Dil mera nada bhola sa hai
Chhalava na koi janta hai

Meri sakhiya mujhe hain sab chherti
Tera nam leke tang karti
Sakhiyo ke tano se darti hoon
Badnam hone se kapti hoon

Jahan bhi mai jati hoon tum aate ho
Tumhi bolo kyon yun tarsate ho
Pyar kya hota hai na janu mai
Bato mein teri na aaun mai

Mujhe tum na yun chhera karo
Akele mein na yun bulaya karo




good composition,sir
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«Reply #7 on: January 18, 2013, 05:56:58 PM »
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beautiful ! badi saadgi hai alfaaz mein . daad .
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«Reply #8 on: January 18, 2013, 08:59:57 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: January 19, 2013, 01:29:37 AM »
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aapka likhne ka ek naya andaz. very very good. bahut acha laga padkar. mubarak
thanx suman ji
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«Reply #10 on: January 19, 2013, 01:30:05 AM »
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really you have written it so beautifully. dheron daad
thanx aqsh ji
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«Reply #11 on: January 19, 2013, 01:30:26 AM »
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very nice nandji
thanx azad ji
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«Reply #12 on: January 19, 2013, 01:30:49 AM »
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bahut sunder
thanx saini ji
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«Reply #13 on: January 19, 2013, 01:31:22 AM »
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good composition,sir
thanx marhoom ji
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beautiful ! badi saadgi hai alfaaz mein . daad .
thanx siddiqui ji
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