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kabhi tum meri zindagi hua karti thi,
aaj jeene ke liye tumko hi bhoolana hai,
kabhi tumhaare kareeb aane ko tadapte the hum,
aaj khud se humein ladke tumse duur jaana hai,

sambhaala tha khud se jyaada tumhaare har cheez ko,
aaj mujhe tumhaari har nishaani ko mitaana hai,
likhe the kai geet tumhaare naam se kabhi,
aaj har geet se tumhaara naam mitaana hai,

tamanna hai meri ki mujhe ek baar fir se jeena hai,
tumhaari yaadon ko mitaa ke naya jahaan basaana hai,
kisi ki mohabbat me ek baar fir se behek jaana hai,
kisi ko apna banaake uske saath mujhe muskuraana hai,

ab nahi chaahta main rehna bandhke tumhaare yaadon se,
mujhe kisi bhi tarha khud ko azaad karaana hai,
bhoolaake tumhaare saath beete har lamhe ko,
mujhe ek naye sire se apne jeewan ko sajaana hai,

haan ab mujhe mere kisi apne ka saath nibhaana hai,
kisi ki sachchi mohabbat me ab mujhe mit jaana hai,
nahi seh sakta main ab dard bewafaai ka o sanam,
mujhe ab fir se sirf apne liye muskuraana hai,

haan mujhe ab firse is zindagi ko jeena hai,
kisi ka ban ke apna uski mohabbat me lut jana hai....


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«Reply #1 on: October 25, 2010, 03:49:09 AM »
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ALL THE BEST KAPIL JI FOR UR EFFORTS AND BEST WISHES FOR UR NEW LIFE....
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Haan sahi kaha tumne k ab tum sambhal gaye ho
Beete kal se ab tum aazaad ho gaye ho
Nai zindagi naya pyaar baahein failaye bula raha
Ab tumhe sab bhulke uske kareeb jana hai

Bht jee liye tum uske diye dard me tanhai me
Ab tumhe fir kisiko apne dil me basana hai
Bhulke apna pehle pehle pyaar ka jakhm
Tumhe fir se apne ruthe dil ko mananan hai

Saja k phool uski zulfon me ab tumhe ee mere dost
Sukha hua ye pyaar ka gulshan khilana hai
Sachche pyaar me khoke tumhe apne har dard bhulke
Apne jeewan sathi ka ab har rangeen sapna sajana hai…!!!
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«Reply #2 on: October 25, 2010, 06:29:14 AM »
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Thank you so much Kasak ji for your best wishes... bahut bahut shukriya ji... aur aapke wish karne ka tarika mujhe bahut bahut pasand aayaa... main aapka dil se shukriya adaa karta hoon...

main apne ansuon ko chhupaake use hasaane ki koshish karunga,
main sari duniyaa ko bhulaake use bepanah mohabbat karunga,

kya hua agar chot khai thi maine kabhi mohabbat me,
usko main kabhi us chot ka ehsaas na hone dunga,

main usko itna pyar dunga ki wo sochegi bas mere baare me,
ab main apni saari khushiyaan bas usi ke naam kar dunga,

aasan nahi hoga mujhse kisi aur ko chaahna bhoolaake kisiko,
par main mitaake puaarne har nishaani ko bas usse pyar karunga...
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«Reply #3 on: October 25, 2010, 06:49:17 AM »
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most welcome kapil ji.......have a wonderful life ji.....all the best 1s again..bht acchha likha hai aapne bas yunhi karna bhi......
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«Reply #4 on: October 25, 2010, 06:57:11 AM »
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Thank you so much hai ji.. I will try my best....!!!
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«Reply #5 on: October 25, 2010, 07:20:04 PM »
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kisi ko bhulaane ka use ehsaas dilaane ka andaaz badhiya se likha hai Kapil bhai aapne.. bahut badhiya...

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«Reply #6 on: October 25, 2010, 07:58:04 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 24, 2010, 09:49:14 PM

kabhi tum meri zindagi hua karti thi,
aaj jeene ke liye tumko hi bhoolana hai,
kabhi tumhaare kareeb aane ko tadapte the hum,
aaj khud se humein ladke tumse duur jaana hai,

sambhaala tha khud se jyaada tumhaare har cheez ko,
aaj mujhe tumhaari har nishaani ko mitaana hai,
likhe the kai geet tumhaare naam se kabhi,
aaj har geet se tumhaara naam mitaana hai,

tamanna hai meri ki mujhe ek baar fir se jeena hai,
tumhaari yaadon ko mitaa ke naya jahaan basaana hai,
kisi ki mohabbat me ek baar fir se behek jaana hai,
kisi ko apna banaake uske saath mujhe muskuraana hai,

ab nahi chaahta main rehna bandhke tumhaare yaadon se,
mujhe kisi bhi tarha khud ko azaad karaana hai,
bhoolaake tumhaare saath beete har lamhe ko,
mujhe ek naye sire se apne jeewan ko sajaana hai,

haan ab mujhe mere kisi apne ka saath nibhaana hai,
kisi ki sachchi mohabbat me ab mujhe mit jaana hai,
nahi seh sakta main ab dard bewafaai ka o sanam,
mujhe ab fir se sirf apne liye muskuraana hai,

haan mujhe ab firse is zindagi ko jeena hai,
kisi ka ban ke apna uski mohabbat me lut jana hai....


*****HRIDAY*****
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 24, 2010, 09:49:14 PM

kabhi tum meri zindagi hua karti thi,
aaj jeene ke liye tumko hi bhoolana hai,
kabhi tumhaare kareeb aane ko tadapte the hum,
aaj khud se humein ladke tumse duur jaana hai,

sambhaala tha khud se jyaada tumhaare har cheez ko,
aaj mujhe tumhaari har nishaani ko mitaana hai,
likhe the kai geet tumhaare naam se kabhi,
aaj har geet se tumhaara naam mitaana hai,

tamanna hai meri ki mujhe ek baar fir se jeena hai,
tumhaari yaadon ko mitaa ke naya jahaan basaana hai,
kisi ki mohabbat me ek baar fir se behek jaana hai,
kisi ko apna banaake uske saath mujhe muskuraana hai,

ab nahi chaahta main rehna bandhke tumhaare yaadon se,
mujhe kisi bhi tarha khud ko azaad karaana hai,
bhoolaake tumhaare saath beete har lamhe ko,
mujhe ek naye sire se apne jeewan ko sajaana hai,

haan ab mujhe mere kisi apne ka saath nibhaana hai,
kisi ki sachchi mohabbat me ab mujhe mit jaana hai,
nahi seh sakta main ab dard bewafaai ka o sanam,
mujhe ab fir se sirf apne liye muskuraana hai,

haan mujhe ab firse is zindagi ko jeena hai,
kisi ka ban ke apna uski mohabbat me lut jana hai....


*****HRIDAY*****



Bahut khoob likha hai kapil ji maaf kijiyega kuch likhna chahungi main bhi...


Kaise bhula doge tum merre pyar ko,
kyun todna chahte ho tum merre intezar ko,

pehle dil mein uthti thi kya vo tadap beimaani thi,
jo aaj bandhan ki khaatir thukra rahe ho merre aetbaar ko,

mita doge tum merre naam se saje geeto ko,
ye faisla kar beijazzat kiya hai tumne mhbt k iqtidar ko,

baate karte ho naya jahana basane ki sang kisi aur k muskurane ki,
merri kya galti thi jo maine lutaya tumpe apni chaht k khumaar ko,

tum tou saja loge naya aashiya kisi gair k sang..
main kaise bhulau us shaam,us raat aur hamari mhbt k us izhaar ko.........




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«Reply #7 on: October 26, 2010, 10:24:56 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Bhai...!!!

Quote from: Intezar on October 25, 2010, 07:20:04 PM
kisi ko bhulaane ka use ehsaas dilaane ka andaaz badhiya se likha hai Kapil bhai aapne.. bahut badhiya...

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«Reply #8 on: October 26, 2010, 10:28:04 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Geet ji aur bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne....  abhi kuch ban nahi paa raha to jawaab nahi likh raha hoon.. main jald hi koshish karunga iska jawaab likhne ka .. ek baar fir se main aapka tahe dil se shukriya karta hoon...!!!

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Bahut khoob likha hai kapil ji maaf kijiyega kuch likhna chahungi main bhi...


Kaise bhula doge tum merre pyar ko,
kyun todna chahte ho tum merre intezar ko,

pehle dil mein uthti thi kya vo tadap beimaani thi,
jo aaj bandhan ki khaatir thukra rahe ho merre aetbaar ko,

mita doge tum merre naam se saje geeto ko,
ye faisla kar beijazzat kiya hai tumne mhbt k iqtidar ko,

baate karte ho naya jahana basane ki sang kisi aur k muskurane ki,
merri kya galti thi jo maine lutaya tumpe apni chaht k khumaar ko,

tum tou saja loge naya aashiya kisi gair k sang..
main kaise bhulau us shaam,us raat aur hamari mhbt k us izhaar ko.........




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«Reply #9 on: October 26, 2010, 11:16:47 AM »
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kya bat hai bahut bahut khoob kapil jii

Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 24, 2010, 09:49:14 PM


sambhaala tha khud se jyaada tumhaare har cheez ko,
aaj mujhe tumhaari har nishaani ko mitaana hai,
likhe the kai geet tumhaare naam se kabhi,
aaj har geet se tumhaara naam mitaana hai,


*****HRIDAY*****

anu ji badhiya replyy maja ayaa...

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 25, 2010, 03:49:09 AM
ALL THE BEST KAPIL JI FOR UR EFFORTS AND BEST WISHES FOR UR NEW LIFE....
icon_flower love4 icon_flower  love4icon_flower love4 icon_flower  love4icon_flower

Saja k phool uski zulfon me ab tumhe ee mere dost
Sukha hua ye pyaar ka gulshan khilana hai
Sachche pyaar me khoke tumhe apne har dard bhulke
Apne jeewan sathi ka ab har rangeen sapna sajana hai…!!!
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and geet di apne to teer par teer mare hain isme..wakai bahut badhiya hai~

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Bahut khoob likha hai kapil ji maaf kijiyega kuch likhna chahungi main bhi...


Kaise bhula doge tum merre pyar ko,
kyun todna chahte ho tum merre intezar ko,

pehle dil mein uthti thi kya vo tadap beimaani thi,
jo aaj bandhan ki khaatir thukra rahe ho merre aetbaar ko,
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«Reply #10 on: October 27, 2010, 12:51:06 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Abhi ji...!!!

Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on October 26, 2010, 11:16:47 AM
kya bat hai bahut bahut khoob kapil jii

anu ji badhiya replyy maja ayaa...


and geet di apne to teer par teer mare hain isme..wakai bahut badhiya hai~
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«Reply #11 on: October 27, 2010, 09:13:44 AM »
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maafi chaunga deri ke liye Geet ji... aaj koshish kar ke kuch likh hi liya.. ummeed hai aapko achchi lagegi...

kai saalon se main dekh raha hoon raah tumhaare aane ki,
ruka hoon bahut par ab mujhse aur intezaar nahi hota,

khaayen hain chot maine kai kai baar mohabbat mein,
shayad yahi wajah hai ki ab kisi pe aetbaar nahi hota,

reh reh ke utha_ta hai is dil me dard judaai ka,
shayad yahi wajah hai ki ab mera ikhtiyaar nahi hota,

bharosa uth chuka hai mera is jahaan me waado se,
ab achche to lagte hain log par kisi se pyar nahi hota...


Quote from: brokenbyluv on October 25, 2010, 07:58:04 PM


Bahut khoob likha hai kapil ji maaf kijiyega kuch likhna chahungi main bhi...


Kaise bhula doge tum merre pyar ko,
kyun todna chahte ho tum merre intezar ko,

pehle dil mein uthti thi kya vo tadap beimaani thi,
jo aaj bandhan ki khaatir thukra rahe ho merre aetbaar ko,

mita doge tum merre naam se saje geeto ko,
ye faisla kar beijazzat kiya hai tumne mhbt k iqtidar ko,

baate karte ho naya jahana basane ki sang kisi aur k muskurane ki,
merri kya galti thi jo maine lutaya tumpe apni chaht k khumaar ko,

tum tou saja loge naya aashiya kisi gair k sang..
main kaise bhulau us shaam,us raat aur hamari mhbt k us izhaar ko.........




iqtidar-power,taqat...
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«Reply #12 on: October 27, 2010, 09:18:22 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on October 25, 2010, 07:58:04 PM


Bahut khoob likha hai kapil ji maaf kijiyega kuch likhna chahungi main bhi...


Kaise bhula doge tum merre pyar ko,
kyun todna chahte ho tum merre intezar ko,

pehle dil mein uthti thi kya vo tadap beimaani thi,
jo aaj bandhan ki khaatir thukra rahe ho merre aetbaar ko,

mita doge tum merre naam se saje geeto ko,
ye faisla kar beijazzat kiya hai tumne mhbt k iqtidar ko,

baate karte ho naya jahana basane ki sang kisi aur k muskurane ki,
merri kya galti thi jo maine lutaya tumpe apni chaht k khumaar ko,

tum tou saja loge naya aashiya kisi gair k sang..
main kaise bhulau us shaam,us raat aur hamari mhbt k us izhaar ko.........




iqtidar-power,taqat...




mastam mast reply geet ji bht mast......

Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 27, 2010, 09:13:44 AM
maafi chaunga deri ke liye Geet ji... aaj koshish kar ke kuch likh hi liya.. ummeed hai aapko achchi lagegi...

kai saalon se main dekh raha hoon raah tumhaare aane ki,
ruka hoon bahut par ab mujhse aur intezaar nahi hota,

khaayen hain chot maine kai kai baar mohabbat mein,
shayad yahi wajah hai ki ab kisi pe aetbaar nahi hota,

reh reh ke utha_ta hai is dil me dard judaai ka,
shayad yahi wajah hai ki ab mera ikhtiyaar nahi hota,

bharosa uth chuka hai mera is jahaan me waado se,
ab achche to lagte hain log par kisi se pyar nahi hota...



equally beautiful reply kapil maza aagaya padhke
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«Reply #13 on: October 27, 2010, 09:21:31 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji...!!!

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 27, 2010, 09:18:22 AM
mastam mast reply geet ji bht mast......

equally beautiful reply kapil maza aagaya padhke
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