~Mujhe usse bhulana hoga~ by Rahim

by dead heart on September 14, 2010, 08:48:29 AM
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Yeh nazm gehri nahin hai mager ehsaas gehre hai..
Inn dino main jo khud se kehta rehta hoon, bas wohi likha hai..

Mujhe ab uss shaks ko bhulana hoga,
Uske bina hi zindagi ko chalana hoga..

Jo barr gaya raah-e-zindagi mujhe chorr kar,
Mujhe uss shaks ko zindagi se mitana hoga..

Jo khush reh sakta mujhe ashkon main dekh kar,
Muskura sakta hoon uske bin; yeh mujhe dikhana hoga..

‘Khamosh’ ne toh bahaut chaha tha mager usse qadr na hui,
Dil main qaid uski yaadon ko bhi ab mujhe dafnana hoga..

Ek nayi shuruwat karna chahta hoon zindagi ki uske bina,
Sach hai yaaron; mujhe ab uss shaks ko bhulana hoga..


~Rahim~
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«Reply #1 on: September 14, 2010, 09:07:14 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on September 14, 2010, 08:48:29 AM
Yeh nazm gehri nahin hai mager ehsaas gehre hai..
Inn dino main jo khud se kehta rehta hoon, bas wohi likha hai..

Mujhe ab uss shaks ko bhulana hoga,
Uske bina hi zindagi ko chalana hoga..

Jo barr gaya raah-e-zindagi mujhe chorr kar,
Mujhe uss shaks ko zindagi se mitana hoga..

Jo khush reh sakta mujhe ashkon main dekh kar,
Muskura sakta hoon uske bin; yeh mujhe dikhana hoga..

‘Khamosh’ ne toh bahaut chaha tha mager usse qadr na hui,
Dil main qaid uski yaadon ko bhi ab mujhe dafnana hoga..

Ek nayi shuruwat karna chahta hoon zindagi ki uske bina,
Sach hai yaaron; mujhe ab uss shaks ko bhulana hoga..


~Rahim~

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«Reply #2 on: September 14, 2010, 09:07:54 AM »
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Shukriya Rawat jee..!
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«Reply #3 on: September 14, 2010, 09:32:00 AM »
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wah rahim ji bahot bahot khoob....
umda ehsaas he is ghazal me....

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«Reply #4 on: September 14, 2010, 11:19:56 AM »
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Rahim ji bahut khoob ,lajawaab.
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«Reply #5 on: September 14, 2010, 11:21:30 AM »
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wah ji gehraaai itni ki me doob gaya...bahut khoob ...achh alaga apko padhkar....likhte rahiye
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«Reply #6 on: September 14, 2010, 07:21:40 PM »
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Shukriya Devangi jee, Abhi jee aur Suresh jee..
Teh dil se shukriya!
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«Reply #7 on: September 14, 2010, 07:50:04 PM »
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Bahut khoob rahiim ji.....
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«Reply #8 on: September 15, 2010, 09:12:41 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hai Rahim bhai aapne.. bahut hi pyaara ... bahut achcha laga padh ke...!!!

se dost hum bhi teri khushi ke liye duwa karenge,
teri muskaan laut aaye hum iski kaamna karenge,

mumkin nahi hai kisi ke hothon me muskaan sajana,
par mere dost tujhe hasaane ki koshish jarur karenge,

hasta huwa tera chehra, khilkhilaate tere honth,
unhe waapas lane ke liye khuda se duwa jarur karenge...
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«Reply #9 on: September 15, 2010, 10:26:02 AM »
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Shukriya Shihab bhaijan, Geet di aur Kapil Dost..bahaut bahaut shukriya..

Kapil Dost, bahaut dil choone wali lines kahi apne..! Applause Applause

Sabhi ka shukriya.
Sada khush rahein.!
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«Reply #10 on: September 15, 2010, 10:43:42 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Bhai Rahim!!!!

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Peshkash!!!

Aakhri Ashaar Zindagi Ko Naye Maayne Dete Hue Nazar Aayi..

"Ek Nayi Shuruwaat Karna Chaahta Hoon Zindagi Ki uske Bina
 Sach Hai yaaron, Mujhe Uss Shaks Ko Bhoolna Hoga"

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«Reply #11 on: September 15, 2010, 10:56:10 AM »
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Khwaish dost, apko pasand ayi yeh humare liye bahaut hai..Shukriya Dost..Haan ek naye mayne dena chahta hoon main zindagi ko..!
Khush rahein!
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