mujhse hi naraz mila

by samnoj on September 06, 2013, 09:30:52 PM
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jo kai barso pahle likha tha
wo aaj bhi taza mila
panno ki aad me mujhe
koi aaj bhi jhankta mila
sukhe hue lafzo me
koi mujhe rota mila
tahri hui kuch kataro me
raah koi takta mila
her shair ke aakhir me
mujhe koi sisakta mila
her lafz ki duri me
mujhe koi pukarta mila
likhna tha aasaan jo
padhna wo mushkil laga
mera likha her lafz mujhko
mujhse hi naraaz mila
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«Reply #1 on: September 06, 2013, 10:42:59 PM »
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panno ki aad me mujhe
koi aaj bhi jhankta mila

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«Reply #2 on: September 06, 2013, 10:48:17 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: September 06, 2013, 11:14:39 PM »
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thanx hasan ji n hriday ji
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«Reply #4 on: September 06, 2013, 11:21:27 PM »
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Bahut khoob.
jo kai barso pahle likha tha
wo aaj bhi taza mila
panno ki aad me mujhe
koi aaj bhi jhankta mila
sukhe hue lafzo me
koi mujhe rota mila
tahri hui kuch kataro me
raah koi takta mila
her shair ke aakhir me
mujhe koi sisakta mila
her lafz ki duri me
mujhe koi pukarta mila
likhna tha aasaan jo
padhna wo mushkil laga
mera likha her lafz mujhko
mujhse hi naraaz mila
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«Reply #5 on: September 06, 2013, 11:26:56 PM »
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waah bahut khoob.............. Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: September 06, 2013, 11:42:13 PM »
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kya baat hai, bahot khoob  Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
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«Reply #7 on: September 07, 2013, 10:25:17 AM »
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thanx ravi ji, miraj ji n iqtedar ji
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«Reply #8 on: September 07, 2013, 10:28:40 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: September 07, 2013, 11:02:32 AM »
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«Reply #10 on: September 07, 2013, 01:01:33 PM »
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mastammmmmmmmmmmm masttttttttttt samnoj .....
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«Reply #11 on: September 07, 2013, 03:02:21 PM »
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jo kai barso pahle likha tha
wo aaj bhi taza mila
panno ki aad me mujhe
koi aaj bhi jhankta mila
sukhe hue lafzo me
koi mujhe rota mila
tahri hui kuch kataro me
raah koi takta mila
her shair ke aakhir me
mujhe koi sisakta mila
her lafz ki duri me
mujhe koi pukarta mila
likhna tha aasaan jo
padhna wo mushkil laga
mera likha her lafz mujhko
mujhse hi naraaz mila


Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Aur Gehre Ehsaas..

Bahut Khooob Samnoj ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: September 07, 2013, 05:56:19 PM »
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thanx saini sir, nandbahu ji, madam ji n khawahish ji
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