*Mukhaute Mausmee*

by malli on February 11, 2010, 02:48:39 AM
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Ek Hi Thi Us Bichare Mein Kami
Yogya Tha Sab Se Adhik Vo Aadmi

Chuk Gaya Hai Waqt Wade Ka Magar,
Kyu Nazar Phir Bi Dagar Per Hai Jami

Mat Kaho Din Hai Andheri Raat-sa,
Mazra Hai Yeh Kisi Ka Bhahmi

Band Ker Do Swar Sabhi Vidroh Ke,
Hai Yahan Aapath Ke Din Kayami

Waqt Ne Bad-shakal Kitna Kar Diya
Aadmi Jaisa Kahan Hai Aadmi?

Hum Barosa "Malli" Kis Per Kare?
Sabne Pehne Hai Mukaute Mausmee
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«Reply #1 on: February 11, 2010, 05:15:38 AM »
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Quote from: malli on February 11, 2010, 02:48:39 AM
Ek Hi Thi Us Bichare Mein Kami
Yogya Tha Sab Se Adhik Vo Aadmi

Chuk Gaya Hai Waqt Wade Ka Magar,
Kyu Nazar Phir Bi Dagar Per Hai Jami

Mat Kaho Din Hai Andheri Raat-sa,
Mazra Hai Yeh Kisi Ka Bhahmi

Band Ker Do Swar Sabhi Vidroh Ke,
Hai Yahan Aapath Ke Din Kayami

Waqt Ne Bad-shakal Kitna Kar Diya
Aadmi Jaisa Kahan Hai Aadmi?

Hum Barosa "Malli" Kis Per Kare?
Sabne Pehne Hai Mukaute Mausmee

Waah ji 'malli'!

"Waqt Ne Bad-shakal Kitna Kar Diya
 Aadmi Jaisa Kahan Hai Aadmi?"

Kyaa hi khoob aur durust bhi!

                  - abd bundeli
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«Reply #2 on: February 11, 2010, 05:26:44 AM »
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[color=greenKYA BAAT HAI    MALLI JI....][/color]



WAQAT NE MAJBOOR KAR DIYA HAI
AADMI KAHAN DIKHTA HAI AB AADMI
BADALTE MAUSAM KI TARAH
PAHENTA HAI MUKHAUTE MAUSAMEE...
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«Reply #3 on: February 11, 2010, 10:32:12 AM »
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Wah Kya Baat Hai Sis.. Ek Dum Naye Andaaz Me Likhi Kavita hai.. Bahut Hi Umda Peshkash.. Applause Applause



**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #4 on: February 11, 2010, 06:07:35 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB MALLI JI Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: February 12, 2010, 02:30:27 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on February 11, 2010, 05:15:38 AM
Waah ji 'malli'!

"Waqt Ne Bad-shakal Kitna Kar Diya
 Aadmi Jaisa Kahan Hai Aadmi?"

Kyaa hi khoob aur durust bhi!

                  - abd bundeli

Thank you ABD ji
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«Reply #6 on: February 12, 2010, 02:31:40 AM »
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Quote from: cara on February 11, 2010, 05:26:44 AM
[color=greenKYA BAAT HAI    MALLI JI....][/color]



WAQAT NE MAJBOOR KAR DIYA HAI
AADMI KAHAN DIKHTA HAI AB AADMI
BADALTE MAUSAM KI TARAH
PAHENTA HAI MUKHAUTE MAUSAMEE...

Thank you Cara sb bahut sahi likha  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #7 on: February 12, 2010, 02:32:43 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on February 11, 2010, 08:32:45 AM
Wah Wah Pyari Behna Kya Khoob Andaz e Bayan Hai
Bahut Achha Likha Hai Behna....
Aakhir Ki 4 Lines To Bas Kamaal Hai
God Job....


Khush Rahiye...


~Shihab~

Thanks Majid dear.... aapko padne mein majbur kiya humne  Giggle Thanks for yr comments brother  Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: February 12, 2010, 02:33:41 AM »
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Quote from: Mann on February 11, 2010, 10:32:12 AM
Wah Kya Baat Hai Sis.. Ek Dum Naye Andaaz Me Likhi Kavita hai.. Bahut Hi Umda Peshkash.. Applause Applause



**~** Mann **~**

Shukriya brother...... Bahut accha laga aapka comments padkar. Aajkal kam pad rahe hai na hamara likha... Is it SO!
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«Reply #9 on: February 12, 2010, 02:34:33 AM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on February 11, 2010, 06:07:35 PM
BAHUT KHOOB MALLI JI Applause Applause Applause

Thanks KA ji  Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: February 12, 2010, 07:20:40 AM »
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Nice Creation Malli JI
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«Reply #11 on: February 12, 2010, 11:24:48 AM »
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Bahut khoob Mali ji,Abd ji,Cara ji,wonderful creation.
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«Reply #12 on: February 15, 2010, 12:51:24 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: February 15, 2010, 02:26:59 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on February 12, 2010, 11:24:48 AM
Bahut khoob Mali ji,Abd ji,Cara ji,wonderful creation.

Thanks Madhu!
        - abd bundeli
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«Reply #14 on: February 26, 2010, 01:36:28 AM »
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Thanks Rishi, @kaash ji, Madhuwesh ji and MB ji
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