**Musafir** by Rahim

by dead heart on February 19, 2010, 02:54:03 PM
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Hum sab duniya main musafir hai...Yeh kalam har ek shaks ko dedicate karta hoon...

Phir wohi kanton bhare raaston par musafir chalta raha,
Kisi ki tanhai main ya bewaffai se musafir jalta raha,
Bikharti umeedon se aur toot’te sapnon se musafir tadapta raha,
Phir wohi kanton bhare raaste par musafir chalta raha…

Apna khoon pasina baha kar musafir do paise kamata raha,
Apne bachon ko unhi paison se musafir saste khilone dilata raha,
Bachon ke thukraye khilono ko dekh musafir ander hi ander marta raha,
Phir wohi kanton bhare raaste par musafir chalta raha…

Dinn raat mehnat kar musafir apne parivar ko palta raha,
Khud dal mager biwi bachon ko bhiryani khilata raha,
Par phir bhi biwi bachon ke chote bade taane hi musafir pata raha,
Phir wohi kanton bhare raaston par musafir chalta raha…



~Rahim~
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«Reply #1 on: February 19, 2010, 02:56:57 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Rahim
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«Reply #2 on: February 19, 2010, 02:59:44 PM »
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Shukriya Talat di...
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«Reply #3 on: February 19, 2010, 03:34:30 PM »
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Waah Waah Waah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Rahim Bro... Bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #4 on: February 19, 2010, 03:49:20 PM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI   RAHIM JI.....


"MUSAFIR" HO ZINDAGI KI RAHA MEIN CHALTE RAHENA TERA KAAM HAI
KAB TU MANJIL PE PAHUNCHEGA KAB TERI TAQDEER BADLENGI
YE SOCHNA AUR TAI KARNA MAALIK KA KAAM HAI...
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«Reply #5 on: February 19, 2010, 04:59:14 PM »
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Wah wah Abdul Rahim ji badi achhi nazm likhi hai aapne. Shandaar. Hum sab musaafir hain is duniya mein aur ek din ye safar khatm ho jayega aur sab kuchh chhod kar chale jayenge ek doosri duniya mein. Ye mashaqqatein, ranj, khushi, aish sirf maut tak ke liye hain.
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«Reply #6 on: February 19, 2010, 08:11:36 PM »
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Shukriya Shukriya Shukriya Divya di, Cara jee aur Riyaz saheb...

Nice lines Cara jee..
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«Reply #7 on: February 20, 2010, 08:36:39 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Rahim!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: February 20, 2010, 08:56:26 AM »
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Wah wah Rahim bhai.too good.great creation. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
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«Reply #9 on: February 20, 2010, 12:47:20 PM »
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Shukriya Khwahish jee, Madhu di aur Kaash bhaijan
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