Mushkil hota hai...

by brokenbyluv on March 05, 2010, 12:36:33 PM
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Aate hai kayi aese chehre zindgi mein,
jinse nazre churana mushkil hota hai,

baste hai itni sadgi se dilo mein,
ki unse dil ko bachana mushkil hota hai,

dekhte hai kuch iss ada se,
ki unse door reh pana mushkil hota hai,

chadhte hai aesa nasha banke sanso mein,
ki unse khud ko chhupana mushkil hota hai,

dikhate hai khuli ankho se kuch aese sapne,
ki phir raato mein khuab sajana mushkil hota hai,

baandh lete hai ek aese rishte ki dor se..
ki kisi aur rishte ko nibhana mushkil hota hai......
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«Reply #1 on: March 05, 2010, 12:40:30 PM »
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Bahut achhi poem likhi hai BBL ji. Bahut pasand aai. Mindblowing, excelent.

Milte hain ek baar magar bahut dino yaad aate hain
Kuchh log aise hote hain jo aankhon me bas jaate hain.
(riyaz)
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«Reply #2 on: March 05, 2010, 12:43:56 PM »
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shukriya riyaz ji aur bahut khoob lines hai...
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«Reply #3 on: March 05, 2010, 01:08:57 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Geetji..

Humesha Ki tarah Bahut Khoobsurat!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: March 05, 2010, 01:23:12 PM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI    BROKENBYLUV JI......

JO BASTE HAI DILO MEIN USKO BHUL PAANA MUSHKIL HOTA HAI
PAL BAR KI JUDAI KE LIYE BHI DIL KA DHARAKNA MUSHKIL HOTA HAI...
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«Reply #5 on: March 05, 2010, 03:06:52 PM »
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tahe dil se shukriya khwaish ji n cara ji..aur bahut sach kaha hai apne cara ji...
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«Reply #6 on: March 05, 2010, 07:42:26 PM »
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Wah Geet-di waah bahut khoobsurat nagma hai aapka.... Applause Applause Applause Applause

Mushkil hota hai Geet-di hatho ko taali bajaane se rokna
Mushkil hota hai tariff karne ko sahi shabdo ko dhundna

Maasha-alla kaise likh leti ho itna achha nagma Geet
Dil mai jagaa deti ho koi anjaani meethi-meethi preet


Quote from: brokenbyluv on March 05, 2010, 12:36:33 PM




Aate hai kayi aese chehre zindgi mein,
jinse nazre churana mushkil hota hai,

baste hai itni sadgi se dilo mein,
ki unse dil ko bachana mushkil hota hai,

dekhte hai kuch iss ada se,
ki unse door reh pana mushkil hota hai,

chadhte hai aesa nasha banke sanso mein,
ki unse khud ko chhupana mushkil hota hai,

dikhate hai khuli ankho se kuch aese sapne,
ki phir raato mein khuab sajana mushkil hota hai,

baandh lete hai ek aese rishte ki dor se..
ki kisi aur rishte ko nibhana mushkil hota hai......
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #7 on: March 05, 2010, 07:47:51 PM »
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Bahut umda peshkash hai aap ki Geet Ji
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #8 on: March 05, 2010, 07:50:24 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya koyal n rajesh ji... notworthy
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«Reply #9 on: March 06, 2010, 05:41:04 AM »
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 MARVELLOUS! ! !
B.B.L. JI.
Quote from: brokenbyluv on March 05, 2010, 12:36:33 PM




Aate hai kayi aese chehre zindgi mein,
jinse nazre churana mushkil hota hai,

baste hai itni sadgi se dilo mein,
ki unse dil ko bachana mushkil hota hai,

dekhte hai kuch iss ada se,
ki unse door reh pana mushkil hota hai,

chadhte hai aesa nasha banke sanso mein,
ki unse khud ko chhupana mushkil hota hai,

dikhate hai khuli ankho se kuch aese sapne,
ki phir raato mein khuab sajana mushkil hota hai,

baandh lete hai ek aese rishte ki dor se..
ki kisi aur rishte ko nibhana mushkil hota hai......
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«Reply #10 on: March 06, 2010, 09:07:27 AM »
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thnx alot suresh ji...
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«Reply #11 on: March 06, 2010, 02:15:27 PM »
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thnx alot shihab ji...
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«Reply #12 on: March 10, 2010, 12:48:05 PM »
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nice poem
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«Reply #13 on: March 11, 2010, 06:26:17 AM »
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thanx spandana ji...
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