~Muskurahat sajata hoon~ by Rahim

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Bada gussa ata hai dil par jab woh kuch mehsoos karta hai mager lavz nahin deta kay main uss ehsaas ko uttar sakoun kagaaz par..
Aj dil udaas hai kyun kay fizaein kisi ki yaad, kisi ki mahek urra kar mujh tak le ayi hai..mager iss dil ne sahi maynon main yeh baat lavzon main nahin uttari..
Main khud iss nazm se itna khush nahin hoon kyun kay jo chahta tha woh shayad sahi tarikke se pura dikha nahin paya..
Bas yeh kehna chahta hoon jo nahin likh paya, woh ankhon se behgaya..

Main muskurahat sajata hoon tanhai chupane kay liye,
Ajnabion ko dil main basata hoon tujhe mitane kay liye..

Barsaat ki bundein mere ashkon ka wajood yaad dilati hai,
Bheegta hoon barsaat main apne ashkon ko dabane kay liye..

Ae zindagi na de kisi ko bhi haath chorrne wala sanaam,
Main khafa hoon tujse aj bhi ek bewaffa dilane kay liye..

Woh bewaffa hi sahi mager uske diye dard ne ek ehsaan kiya hai,
‘Khamosh’ kehta hai shukriya Zalim mujhe ek shayar banane kay liye..

Main muskurahat sajata hoon..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: November 16, 2010, 09:01:02 AM »
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bahut khoob rahim ji....
luved d 2nd one...
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«Reply #2 on: November 16, 2010, 10:21:38 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Bhai Rahim Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: November 16, 2010, 10:28:28 AM »
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  Nice one Rahim ji. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #4 on: November 16, 2010, 11:03:50 AM »
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bahut sundar..Rahim BHai.....kya khoob kaha hai..ek haqiqat yad aati hai mujhe  ise padhkar; share karta hun...apki is line par..

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Ae zindagi na de kisi ko bhi haath chorrne wala sanaam,
Main khafa hoon tujse aj bhi ek bewaffa dilane kay liye..

wo kehete he na ki bar bar kisi ko rulane se achha he ek bar rula do taki dusri bar rone ki sari wajah khatm ho jaaye~ mere samne bhi kisi ne eisa hi socha tha apni haan ko naa kehkar; woh ladki shayad bahut royii hogii..mujhe anhi pata is ladke ne jo kiya wo sahi tha ya galat...aaj sochta hun wo shayad sahi tha...bahut talasha usne us ladki ko par nahi mili or jab mil sakti thi to uski shaadi hone wali thi...

maine bhi use bas yahi kehkar samjhaya ki sachcha pyar sirf kisi ko paa lene se nahi balki wo jaha rahe khush rahe is dua se he...

mujhe maaf karna e khuda mai dar gaya tha judai ka bas sapna dekhkar,
janta hun use bahut rulaya hai maine apni haan ko naa kehkar...
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«Reply #5 on: November 16, 2010, 06:12:53 PM »
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bahut accha likha hai Rahim....aankhiri do lines toh maine baar-baar padhi......
mohabbat ne khuch toh accha diya...dard ko kaagaz par byaan karne ka hunar toh diya....sach likha hai...... Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: November 16, 2010, 06:20:02 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



Quote from: -Rahim- on November 15, 2010, 09:56:28 PM
Bada gussa ata hai dil par jab woh kuch mehsoos karta hai mager lavz nahin deta kay main uss ehsaas ko uttar sakoun kagaaz par..
Aj dil udaas hai kyun kay fizaein kisi ki yaad, kisi ki mahek urra kar mujh tak le ayi hai..mager iss dil ne sahi maynon main yeh baat lavzon main nahin uttari..
Main khud iss nazm se itna khush nahin hoon kyun kay jo chahta tha woh shayad sahi tarikke se pura dikha nahin paya..
Bas yeh kehna chahta hoon jo nahin likh paya, woh ankhon se behgaya..

Main muskurahat sajata hoon tanhai chupane kay liye,
Ajnabion ko dil main basata hoon tujhe mitane kay liye..

Barsaat ki bundein mere ashkon ka wajood yaad dilati hai,
Bheegta hoon barsaat main apne ashkon ko dabane kay liye..

Ae zindagi na de kisi ko bhi haath chorrne wala sanaam,
Main khafa hoon tujse aj bhi ek bewaffa dilane kay liye..

Woh bewaffa hi sahi mager uske diye dard ne ek ehsaan kiya hai,
‘Khamosh’ kehta hai shukriya Zalim mujhe ek shayar banane kay liye..

Main muskurahat sajata hoon..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #7 on: November 16, 2010, 07:41:09 PM »
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Manzil-e-Ishq jee, Khwaish dost, Tamanna jee, Anaam di..
Ap sabhi ka teh dil se shukriya..!
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«Reply #8 on: November 16, 2010, 07:56:33 PM »
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Quote from: Nikhaar on November 16, 2010, 06:12:53 PM
bahut accha likha hai Rahim....aankhiri do lines toh maine baar-baar padhi......
mohabbat ne khuch toh accha diya...dard ko kaagaz par byaan karne ka hunar toh diya....sach likha hai...... Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Shukriya Nikhaar di..
Teh dil se..!
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«Reply #9 on: November 16, 2010, 07:59:39 PM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on November 16, 2010, 11:03:50 AM
bahut sundar..Rahim BHai.....kya khoob kaha hai..ek haqiqat yad aati hai mujhe  ise padhkar; share karta hun...apki is line par..

wo kehete he na ki bar bar kisi ko rulane se achha he ek bar rula do taki dusri bar rone ki sari wajah khatm ho jaaye~ mere samne bhi kisi ne eisa hi socha tha apni haan ko naa kehkar; woh ladki shayad bahut royii hogii..mujhe anhi pata is ladke ne jo kiya wo sahi tha ya galat...aaj sochta hun wo shayad sahi tha...bahut talasha usne us ladki ko par nahi mili or jab mil sakti thi to uski shaadi hone wali thi...

maine bhi use bas yahi kehkar samjhaya ki sachcha pyar sirf kisi ko paa lene se nahi balki wo jaha rahe khush rahe is dua se he...

mujhe maaf karna e khuda mai dar gaya tha judai ka bas sapna dekhkar,
janta hun use bahut rulaya hai maine apni haan ko naa kehkar...
Abhi jee,
Shukriya bhai..
Apne adhura adhura sunaya hai..
Mager bahaut maza aya iss main bhi..
Apki do lines bahaut pasand ayi...
Applause Applause

Do lines yaad agayi:

Yeh har roz ka dard mujhe bada tadpata hai Zalim,
Koi aisa dard do kay meri aas toot jaye..
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«Reply #10 on: November 18, 2010, 09:54:27 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on November 16, 2010, 07:59:39 PM
Abhi jee,
Shukriya bhai..
Apne adhura adhura sunaya hai..
Mager bahaut maza aya iss main bhi..
Apki do lines bahaut pasand ayi...
Applause Applause

Do lines yaad agayi:

Yeh har roz ka dard mujhe bada tadpata hai Zalim,
Koi aisa dard do kay meri aas toot jaye..



kuchh cheeze adhoore hi poori lagti hain..dost..

kya khoob kaha he apne..do lines me..
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«Reply #11 on: November 18, 2010, 06:22:41 PM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on November 18, 2010, 09:54:27 AM
kuchh cheeze adhoore hi poori lagti hain..dost..

kya khoob kaha he apne..do lines me..
Sahi baat hai..Koi aksar kehta tha kay kuch baat ankahi rehne do..
bas aj humari kahani hi ankahi rehgayi..
bahaut shukriya bhai!
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«Reply #12 on: November 19, 2010, 04:17:13 AM »
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bahut khoob Rahim ji...
tareef ke liye shabd nhi mere pass..bas Kya Baat kya baat..Usual Smile
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kya hua gar wo bewaffa nikla,
toota hai sirf mohabbat ka silsila !!
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«Reply #13 on: November 19, 2010, 07:23:44 PM »
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Quote from: killbill on November 19, 2010, 04:17:13 AM
bahut khoob Rahim ji...
tareef ke liye shabd nhi mere pass..bas Kya Baat kya baat..Usual Smile
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kya hua gar wo bewaffa nikla,
toota hai sirf mohabbat ka silsila !!
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Teh dil se shukriya jee..!
Apki do lines bahaut zadaaaa pasand ayi mujhe..!
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«Reply #14 on: November 20, 2010, 10:58:07 AM »
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shukriya rahim ji...
aapki tarz pr kuch lines maine b likh diya tha:)
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