Na hua hamse..

by nashwani on July 02, 2013, 01:30:33 PM
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Arghya De
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«Reply #15 on: July 03, 2013, 12:07:35 AM »
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Splendid Sir !  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

I became spellbound after went through your Composition . Hats off to you! 2 Giggle
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«Reply #16 on: July 03, 2013, 01:50:24 AM »
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Splendid Sir !  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

I became spellbound after went through your Composition . Hats off to you! 2 Giggle

Pasand karne ka tahe dil se shukriya arghya jee..happy9
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«Reply #17 on: July 03, 2013, 07:14:50 AM »
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Chahto.N ka ikrar na hua hamse,,
    Phir kisi se pyar na hua hamse..

Uljhano.N ke saarthi kehlate the,,
     Ek wo rath sawaar na hua hamse..

Wo iss kahani ka ateet ban jaye.N,,
    Kee koshish hazaar, na hua hamse..

Ganga, jamuna sab paar kar li bas,,
    Ansuo.N ka dariya paar na hua hamse..

Yado.N ka rishta tha unse hamara,,
    Aaye isme daraar, na hua hamse..

Dil qaid raha unke intezaar me,,
    Khule aazadi ke dwar, na hua hamse..

Padhi darzano.N kitabe.N hamne,,
    Samajh aye ishq ka saar, na hua hamse..!!! Ñ


bahut badiya.
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«Reply #18 on: July 03, 2013, 01:02:15 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
just awesome nashwani ji. bahut achcha likhe ho aap. is khoobsurat kalaam par hazaron dili daad aur yeh do sher bahut khoob rahe.


Wo iss kahani ka ateet ban jaye.N,,
    Kee koshish hazaar, na hua hamse..

Ganga, jamuna sab paar kar li bas,,
    Ansuo.N ka dariya paar na hua hamse..
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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nashwani
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«Reply #19 on: July 03, 2013, 02:09:12 PM »
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bahut badiya.

Thankyou ! suman jee..Apko bade dino baad yaha dekh ke achha laga ma'am..happy9
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«Reply #20 on: July 03, 2013, 02:10:08 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
just awesome nashwani ji. bahut achcha likhe ho aap. is khoobsurat kalaam par hazaron dili daad aur yeh do sher bahut khoob rahe.


Wo iss kahani ka ateet ban jaye.N,,
    Kee koshish hazaar, na hua hamse..

Ganga, jamuna sab paar kar li bas,,
    Ansuo.N ka dariya paar na hua hamse..
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahut shukriya aqsh jee..happy9
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«Reply #21 on: July 03, 2013, 09:09:01 PM »
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behtareeennnn ... kyaa kehne Nashwani ji... bahut achchaa lagaa padh ke.. bahut khoob likha hai aapne.....!!!
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«Reply #22 on: July 05, 2013, 01:21:17 AM »
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behtareeennnn ... kyaa kehne Nashwani ji... bahut achchaa lagaa padh ke.. bahut khoob likha hai aapne.....!!!


Thankyou ! a looottttt hriday jee..happy9
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«Reply #23 on: July 05, 2013, 01:26:57 AM »
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Thankyou ! ravi jee..happy9
Ur Welcome Jee.
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