-.Na Jaane q.-

by Tosha on September 24, 2006, 07:33:10 AM
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Jab zindgi main koi dilbar na tha
Hum khumar-e-ishq ke sertaj hua kerte hai
Aaj bepenha pyaar kerne wala saathi hai mila
To hum daard aur sirf daar main shayari kiya kerte hai.
Asa nahi ko wo hamse pyaar ke baaten nahi kiya kerte hai
Phir bhi is pyaar ko hum daard main bayan kerte hai
Khud ke baat khud samajs nahi pa rahe hai hum
Dil kush main phir bhi najaane kya hai gum
e-dost agar jo tumhe kuch samajh main aa sake
ek pyaar bhara khet likh dena zara
ek gyaan se kahi mahefuz na rahe jayen hum
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«Reply #1 on: September 24, 2006, 06:09:24 PM »
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Tosha, are you sure that you wanted it in Poetry for FUN ? I think it fits more miscellenous section.

Also, I think in last line you wanted to say Mehroom
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«Reply #2 on: October 07, 2006, 11:32:28 AM »
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last line me mehroom hona chahiye
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«Reply #3 on: October 09, 2006, 05:34:28 PM »
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very  nice  Tosha...........
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«Reply #4 on: December 16, 2006, 11:32:39 AM »
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Jab zindgi main koi dilbar na tha
Hum khumar-e-ishq ke sertaj hua kerte hai
Aaj bepenha pyaar kerne wala saathi hai mila
To hum daard aur sirf daar main shayari kiya kerte hai.
Asa nahi ko wo hamse pyaar ke baaten nahi kiya kerte hai
Phir bhi is pyaar ko hum daard main bayan kerte hai
Khud ke baat khud samajs nahi pa rahe hai hum
Dil kush main phir bhi najaane kya hai gum
e-dost agar jo tumhe kuch samajh main aa sake
ek pyaar bhara khet likh dena zara
ek gyaan se kahi mahroom na rahe jayen hum

Lo ji correction ker diya ... Thanx a lot for telling me ... i did want to day Mahroom  :razz:

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«Reply #5 on: December 16, 2006, 11:33:04 AM »
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Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
very  nice  Tosha...........


Thanx Waheed!!
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«Reply #6 on: December 16, 2006, 10:35:54 PM »
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Bohot achche Tosha !!
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«Reply #7 on: December 16, 2006, 10:48:26 PM »
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thanx ji!!
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«Reply #8 on: December 18, 2006, 03:46:41 PM »
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Mere
Sulagte huntun ne
Jab shame tanhai main
tumhare larazte huntun se
Ehsase zindagi piya thaa
Too yun laga tha ke
Zidagi ki sari raanaanyan
Unhi lamhaat main
Pinhan theen
Lekin
Shabe tanhai main
Mahsuus huta hai ke
Zindiga ka sara karb thaa
Jo
Un lamhaat main piya thaa
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«Reply #9 on: December 18, 2006, 03:49:52 PM »
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nice jave Ji!!
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«Reply #10 on: December 18, 2006, 05:20:32 PM »
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hey...nice one yaar!!!!

"Aksar aisa hota hai zindagi ki raahon me,
 sab kuch hote huye bhi lagti kuch kami hai,
 khushiyan hoti hain par unme wo baat nahi,
 zindagi lagti hai kuch adhoori adhoori si,
 dil har khushi k baad bhi dard bhari shayri karta hai,
 kyonki shayad shayri ka matlab hi dard hota hai,
 ek ankahi si baat,ek na samajh aane wali baat,
 zindagi hai,ye sab to bas chalta hi rehta hai."
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«Reply #11 on: December 18, 2006, 05:31:47 PM »
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that was awesome nidhi ji.....
very well said
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«Reply #12 on: December 18, 2006, 05:34:06 PM »
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Le kar hum dusro ki hasi kya kare,
jo apni nahi woh kushi kya kare,
tanha jine se behtar hai mar jai hum,
jab saath aapka nahi to zindagi jeekar kya kare..
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«Reply #13 on: December 18, 2006, 05:48:39 PM »
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thx ankur,and very nice one by u 2.
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«Reply #14 on: December 18, 2006, 05:56:04 PM »
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very  nice  Nidhi........Ankur.............
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