Na Mil Payegi Manzil -Panna 2:Miscellaneous Shayri

madhuwesh

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«Reply #15 on: March 14, 2010, 01:40:48 AM »

Wah wah Riyaz bhai,very touching and mindblowing creation.bahut khoobsurat gazal hai.keep it up.sori bhai for late comment. Hats off to you!


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riyaz106

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Re: Na Mil Payegi Manzil

«Reply #16 on: March 15, 2010, 10:00:00 AM »

Bahut bahut shukriya Madhu didi. Meri ghazal aapko pasand aai mere liye khushi ki baat hai. Aage bhi aapse hausala afzai ki ummeed rahegi. Aur... ye sori kah se sharminda mat kijiye. Aap comment karein ye aapki mehrbani hai.

Quote from: madhuwesh on March 14, 2010, 01:40:48 AM

Wah wah Riyaz bhai,very touching and mindblowing creation.bahut khoobsurat gazal hai.keep it up.sori bhai for late comment. Hats off to you!


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Re: Na Mil Payegi Manzil

«Reply #17 on: March 23, 2010, 11:59:05 PM »

Bahut khoobsurat ghazal likhi hai aapne Riyaz ji...!!! Clapping Smiley

Quote from: riyaz106 on March 10, 2010, 12:14:45 PM

GHAZAL

Ghayal hue hum bhi wo kaha.n dekh raha hai
Bas apne hi zakhmon ke nisha.n dekh raha hai

Us shakhs ko ulfat mein na mil payegi manzil
Is raah mein jo sood-o-ziya.n dekh raha hai Sood-o-ziyan = Profit & Loss

Khushiyon ne diye dokhe use itne ke wo ab
Har simt fazaaon mein khizaa.n dekh raha hai

Afsos hai too apne usoolon ko bhulaa kar
Ghairon ke tareeqon mein amaa.n dekh raha hai Amaan = Safety

Ladte hue firqon mein sulah usne karaai Firqon = Groups
Ab jaltaa hua apna makaa.n dekh raha hai

Riyaz “Ashna”


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riyaz106

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Re: Na Mil Payegi Manzil

«Reply #18 on: March 24, 2010, 01:35:14 AM »

Kapil ji aapka bahut shukriya ke aapko meri ghazal pasand aai.

Quote from: klaskar on March 23, 2010, 11:59:05 PM

Bahut khoobsurat ghazal likhi hai aapne Riyaz ji...!!! Clapping Smiley


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