Naakhudaa dard de ke kidhar jaayegaa...................Mamta Bajpai

by mamta bajpai on July 03, 2011, 06:35:34 AM
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Naakhudaa dard deke kidhar jaayegaa
tootkar zabt e saahil bikhar jaayegaa

tod de bandh ashqoN ke meree qasam
jo chaRhaa hai woh dariyaa utar jaayegaa

thak ke soyaa hai wo neeNd kee god me
kaarvaaN dard kaa bhee guzar jaayegaa

chhaaNv raahat kee zulfoN me mil jaayegee
do ghadee jo tu inme thahar jaayegaa

kaisee manzil kahaaN kaa safar ,ek din
tinkaa tinkaa hawaa me bikhar jaayegaa

Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #1 on: July 03, 2011, 07:33:33 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: July 03, 2011, 08:12:02 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: July 03, 2011, 09:08:25 AM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on July 03, 2011, 06:35:34 AM
Naakhudaa dard deke kidhar jaayegaa
tootkar zabt e saahil bikhar jaayegaa

tod de bandh ashqoN ke meree qasam
jo chaRhaa hai woh dariyaa utar jaayegaa

thak ke soyaa hai wo neeNd kee god me
kaarvaaN dard kaa bhee guzar jaayegaa

chhaaNv raahat kee zulfoN me mil jaayegee
do ghadee jo tu inme thahar jaayegaa

kaisee manzil kahaaN kaa safar ,ek din
tinkaa tinkaa hawaa me bikhar jaayegaa

Mamta Bajpai

Waah Waah Waah!!!!!

Kya Baat Hai Mamtaji..Har Ek A'shaar lajawaab!!!

"Thak Ke Soya Hai Woh Neend Ki God mein
Karvaan Dard Ka Bhi Guzar Jaayega

Chaav Raahat Ki zulfon Mein Mil Jayegi
Do Ghadi Jo Tu Inme Tehar Jaayega"

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«Reply #4 on: July 05, 2011, 04:25:08 PM »
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very-very nice mamta ji Applause Applause
Quote from: mamta bajpai on July 03, 2011, 06:35:34 AM
Naakhudaa dard deke kidhar jaayegaa
tootkar zabt e saahil bikhar jaayegaa

tod de bandh ashqoN ke meree qasam
jo chaRhaa hai woh dariyaa utar jaayegaa

thak ke soyaa hai wo neeNd kee god me
kaarvaaN dard kaa bhee guzar jaayegaa

chhaaNv raahat kee zulfoN me mil jaayegee
do ghadee jo tu inme thahar jaayegaa

kaisee manzil kahaaN kaa safar ,ek din
tinkaa tinkaa hawaa me bikhar jaayegaa

Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #5 on: July 05, 2011, 06:59:30 PM »
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Shukriyaa Kamal!
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«Reply #6 on: July 07, 2011, 01:24:31 AM »
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Khwaish jee bahut bahut shukriyaa........aap kee houslaa afzai hameshaa se meri kalam ko sabaat detee rahee hai..........behad shukriyaa!
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«Reply #7 on: July 07, 2011, 03:49:27 PM »
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Mamtaa Jee Aadaab!


Deri se aane ke liye mazarrat chahte hai... Usual Smile
Badi khoob kalaamoN se bazm ko roshan karti hai
aap...... Usual Smile

Aur aap ki yeH kalaam bhi bahut umdaa rahi...
Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe...

Humari daad O mubarakbaad kabul kijiye,


Quote from: mamta bajpai on July 03, 2011, 06:35:34 AM
Naakhudaa dard deke kidhar jaayegaa
tootkar zabt e saahil bikhar jaayegaa

Achcha matla hai daad Usual Smile         

tod de bandh ashqoN ke meree qasam
jo chaRhaa hai woh dariyaa utar jaayegaa

Kia kahne waaH jee Waah bahut khoob daad daad daad Usual Smile         

thak ke soyaa hai wo neeNd kee god me
kaarvaaN dard kaa bhee guzar jaayegaa

Masha Allah kia kahne aapke gehre khayaal aur andaaz e
bayaaN ke .... Bahut umdaa aur gehra sher kaha hai jee daad Usual Smile         

chhaaNv raahat kee zulfoN me mil jaayegee
do ghadee jo tu inme thahar jaayegaa

Waah jee waah bahut khoob, behad shayaraana sher hai daad Usual Smile         

kaisee manzil kahaaN kaa safar ,ek din
tinkaa tinkaa hawaa me bikhar jaayegaa

Bahut khoob Mamtaa jee daad daad daad Usual Smile         

Mamta Bajpai

Waah Mamtaa jee dil shaad kar diyaa aapne.. Umdaa kalaam se
Hum jab bhi shayari ke bare meiN sochte hai to khayaal ko gehra banate banate humari kalam ruk jati hai... Par aapki yeH kalaam itni aasaani se gehri baateN kah gayi ke kia kaheN Usual Smile

Humari dheroN daad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye.... Aate rahiye....

Khush O aabaad rahiye....
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile
         
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«Reply #8 on: July 10, 2011, 01:51:09 PM »
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Parwaaz jee! humaare kalaam ko apnaa qeematee waqt dene or houslaa afzai kaa behad shukriyaa...........bas aap se yahee ek shikaayat banee rahtee hai keh humaaraa har kalaam itanaa khushqismat nahee hotaa keh woh aap kaa nazar nawaaz bane............
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«Reply #9 on: July 10, 2011, 02:06:48 PM »
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PREM KARU K LAGAN KARU AMA ATVAYO,
VAT KARU K MULAKAT KARU AMA ATVAYO,
CHOKRI JOI NE PASAND NAPASAND MA ATVAYO,
TAMARI SAYARI VANCHINE ANE SAMAJVAMA ATVAYO,
SAMAJ AVI TO TAMNE MALU K NA MALU AMA ATVAYO,
ANT MA MUNJVAN BAJUMA MUKI POST KARU 6U AA SHAYARI,
TAMNE GAMSE K NAI A BABATE HU FARI ATVAYO Applause Giggle Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: July 10, 2011, 02:11:52 PM »
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Snehl jee! aap kee baateN kuchh to samajh paayee or kuchh nahee.........
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«Reply #11 on: July 10, 2011, 08:47:06 PM »
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bahut khub mamtaji.. Kya ghazab likha hai aapne..
-GUMboy...
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«Reply #12 on: July 11, 2011, 01:30:44 AM »
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Thanks GUMboy!
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«Reply #13 on: July 11, 2011, 02:55:40 AM »
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Bas aap likhti jaye. .. hum to padna chahte hai.

Sukriya.
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«Reply #14 on: July 11, 2011, 05:32:23 AM »
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Mkv aap parhate jaayen or isee tarah houslaa barhaate jaayen.......yaqeen jaaniye ye kalam rukegee naheen...
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