NaFarmaa'N Betay Ka Nohah....................mazHur:Miscellaneous Shayri

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BeAdab Gustakh jab Aulad ho jaye
Chain Sukh Maa'n Baap ka Barbaad ho jaye

Cheen le Budbakht jo Walid ka Sarmaya
Jeete Jee kion Baap na Barbad ho jaye

Aasteen ka Saamp tha, Beta nhi tha woh
Maut aye usko woh Barbad ho jaye

Baap kee jo he Raza Allah kee bhi wohi
Aashkaar is Qaul se Aulad ho jaye

Maa'n ke hee Pairoan talay Jannat He mere Lal
Rah se Bhatka jo too Barbaad ho jaye

Sin Raseeda Baap ke Farzand hein Bazoo
Jo na samjhay Baat ye barbaad ho jaye

Nek o Taabaydar ho Aulad to Wallah
Walideen ka Dil khushi se shaad ho jaye

Kia karein woh Waladeen jab Nakhalaf Beta
Mayel e Jaur o Situm Eejaad ho jaye

Qibla o Ka'aba se kuch Kumtar nhi Maa'n Baap
Kaash Hurmat aashna Aulaad ho jaye

Deen o Dunya Chhin gayee NaKhalf Betay Kee
Baap per jo Mayel e Bedaad ho jaye

Tu ne mera Dil dukhaya to he mere Lal
Hashr tak tu Unsuni Faryaad ho jaye

Kion na ho jaye Pidar phir zinda dar-goara'n
Jab Pisar Badbakht hee Sayyad ho jaye


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Re: NaFarmaa'N Betay Ka Nohah....................mazHur

«Reply #1 on: November 05, 2014, 09:06:20 PM »

mazHur Sahib, Aapne bahut achhee poem likhee hai Janaab, lekin kuchh fundamental issue hai jis se main raazee nahin hoon. Jee aulaad khraab nikal saktee hai, uss mein main maataa zyaadaa pitaa ko dosh doon gaa. Bete yaa betee ko parents kabhi bhi bad duaa nahin dete hain. Iss kaa yeh matlab nahin hai ke main aapko daad nahin de rahaa hoon.
Applause


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Re: NaFarmaa'N Betay Ka Nohah....................mazHur

«Reply #2 on: November 05, 2014, 09:23:41 PM »

Quote from: surindarn on November 05, 2014, 09:06:20 PM

Surindarn sahib ,,,apke tajziyay ka bahut bahut shukriya...
aur daad ke bhi

Baat simple see he ....

WALI KE GHAR SHAITAN BHI PAIDA HO JATAY HEIN,,,
therefore it is not correct to blame parents...as no parent wants his child to turn wicked,,,and on top of it do some ugly act which harms the parents themselves.
I have seen this happening in real life and have experienced myself ..
what to do other than cuss such an Aulaad...
Is se acha he ke woh paida hote hee mar gaya hota!!


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Re: NaFarmaa'N Betay Ka Nohah....................mazHur

«Reply #3 on: November 06, 2014, 01:10:10 AM »

ek rau ke saath is kaduwee sachhaai ke liye


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Re: NaFarmaa'N Betay Ka Nohah....................mazHur

«Reply #4 on: November 06, 2014, 01:43:09 AM »

Quote from: sksaini4 on November 06, 2014, 01:10:10 AM

ek rau ke saath is kaduwee sachhaai ke liye

Dear sksain4 sahib, sachayee kee talkh haqeeqat ko qubool krne ka dili shukriya ada krta hn,.........rau ka tohfa dene ka bhi thanks,....,dua he k aulad ho to nek aur farmanbardar ho warna yehi aulad jaean ho kr sun raseeda maata pita ke leay narkh ban jaati he,,,,,,


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Iftakhar Ahmad

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Re: NaFarmaa'N Betay Ka Nohah....................mazHur

«Reply #5 on: November 06, 2014, 02:38:30 PM »

waaaaaaaaaaaaah behad umda kalaam Mazhur saheb, dheroN daad aur Rau bhi.


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RAJAN KONDAL

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Re: NaFarmaa'N Betay Ka Nohah....................mazHur

«Reply #6 on: November 06, 2014, 06:06:16 PM »

sach belkul sach likha hai jnaab bhoot umda


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mazHur

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Re: NaFarmaa'N Betay Ka Nohah....................mazHur

«Reply #7 on: November 07, 2014, 03:46:48 AM »

Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on November 06, 2014, 02:38:30 PM

waaaaaaaaaaaaah behad umda kalaam Mazhur saheb, dheroN daad aur Rau bhi.

thank you, Iftikhar bhai. Nazm apko pasand aee dil khush hua ke aap aisay kohna mashq shayer ne sharaf e qubiat baksha..
Rau ka tohfa ata karne per mazeed dili shukriya..
Sada Khush rehye.....


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Re: NaFarmaa'N Betay Ka Nohah....................mazHur

«Reply #8 on: November 07, 2014, 03:50:25 AM »

Quote from: RAJAN KONDAL on November 06, 2014, 06:06:16 PM

sach belkul sach likha hai jnaab bhoot umda

apko nazam pasand ayee,,bahut bahut shukriya,,apke comment ka bhi shukria ..aur mazeed shukriya apka aur sab dostoan ka ke unhoan ne apna qeemati waqt de kar meri nazm ko parha aur saraha...

hamesha khush rehye muskurayeee


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mann.mann

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Re: NaFarmaa'N Betay Ka Nohah....................mazHur

«Reply #9 on: November 08, 2014, 09:23:40 AM »

bahut acha likha hai mazhurji.....

sachchai bahut kadwi hai..... par sach to akhir ko sach hi hai..... jis par beeti aur jisne jhela wo hi jan sakta hai....
insan sachai se darta hai aur aankhe band kar leta hai..... aur kahta ki aisa nahin ho sakta......

khub.........


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mazHur

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Re: NaFarmaa'N Betay Ka Nohah....................mazHur

«Reply #10 on: November 08, 2014, 11:18:21 AM »

Quote from: mann.mann on November 08, 2014, 09:23:40 AM

dear mann.mann, aapke tabsaray aur pasandeedagi ka bahut bahut shukriya .....ummeed he k aap ayenda bhi isi tarah hosla afzai karte rehein ge
dhanebad!


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