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Nahi chahti mai ki mashoor ho jaun
Tammana bas itni si ki kuch der ke liye sahikhusi me chur ho jaun
Nahi chahti mai chuna AAsmaan ki bulandi ko
Tammana bas itni ki kisi ke aankhon ka noor ban jaun
Nahi chahti mai banana kisi ke dard ka sabab
Tamanna bas itni ki dard dene walon ke liye..
kabhi na sukhne wala nasoor ban jaun
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salil2002
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«Reply #3 on: May 06, 2009, 09:58:52 AM » |
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Nahi chahti mai ki mashoor ho jaun
Tammana bas itni si ki kuch der ke liye sahikhusi me chur ho jaun
Nahi chahti mai chuna AAsmaan ki bulandi ko
Tammana bas itni ki kisi ke aankhon ka noor ban jaun
Nahi chahti mai banana kisi ke dard ka sabab
Tamanna bas itni ki dard dene walon ke liye..
kabhi na sukhne wala nasoor ban jaun
wooh kya andaaz-e-bayaan hai
mere dard ko samjhe koi mein yeh nahin chahta
dekhna mujhko yeh hai kii woh kitna dard dega |
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«Reply #4 on: May 06, 2009, 10:00:42 AM » |
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«Reply #5 on: May 06, 2009, 10:07:19 AM » |
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Bahut Khoob Jannat Ji
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SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #6 on: May 06, 2009, 03:19:45 PM » |
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Very good Jannat Ji
SARVESH RASTOGI
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Talat
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«Reply #7 on: May 06, 2009, 05:51:04 PM » |
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Nahi chahti mai ki mashoor ho jaun
Tammana bas itni si ki kuch der ke liye sahikhusi me chur ho jaun
Nahi chahti mai chuna AAsmaan ki bulandi ko
Tammana bas itni ki kisi ke aankhon ka noor ban jaun
Nahi chahti mai banana kisi ke dard ka sabab
Tamanna bas itni ki dard dene walon ke liye..
kabhi na sukhne wala nasoor ban jaun
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«Reply #9 on: May 06, 2009, 05:52:11 PM » |
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wooh kya andaaz-e-bayaan hai
mere dard ko samjhe koi mein yeh nahin chahta
dekhna mujhko yeh hai kii woh kitna dard dega
Nice one Salil |
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jannatjahan
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«Reply #10 on: May 07, 2009, 10:10:40 AM » |
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wooh kya andaaz-e-bayaan hai
mere dard ko samjhe koi mein yeh nahin chahta
dekhna mujhko yeh hai kii woh kitna dard dega
Hmmmm Lagta hai kuch jyada pasand aa gaya Jo nahi hai dard seene me dard ki baat kyun karta hai lagta hai tu bhi kisi ke pyaar me hai..isliye AAhein bharta hai |
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«Reply #11 on: May 07, 2009, 10:13:45 AM » |
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haan aisa hi hai kucchh samajh lo
na dard hai mujhme na mein dard kii baat karta hoon
zazbaaton ka samandar hai mere bheetar,ashqon k moti nikal rakhta hoon
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«Reply #12 on: May 07, 2009, 10:25:31 AM » |
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haan aisa hi hai kucchh samajh lo
na dard hai mujhme na mein dard kii baat karta hoon
zazbaaton ka samandar hai mere bheetar,ashqon k moti nikal rakhta hoon
Apne zazbaaton ko byan kar ke dekh
mohabbat se tere ashqon ko tham na lun to kehna |
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«Reply #13 on: May 07, 2009, 10:37:01 AM » |
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Bohot Khoob Jannat
Thanks Dear celmira  |
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«Reply #14 on: May 11, 2009, 03:36:20 PM » |
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JJ,
Wah jee wah, kya ashaar likhe hain, ek tez dhar shayiri... Bahut achhee...
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on eTI community..
