nahin biktey

by sana Afroz on November 12, 2014, 04:34:46 PM
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qurbatein bikti hain,jazbe nahin biktey aye dost !!
lafz to bikte hain, lahjey nahin biktey aye dost !!

bikne ko  bikti hai  har cheez  zamaane mein magar,
rooh parwar bhi hon lamhey nahin biktey aye dost !!
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«Reply #1 on: November 12, 2014, 05:31:53 PM »
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Bohat khub sana wlcm to yoindia family
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«Reply #2 on: November 12, 2014, 07:00:55 PM »
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Good one.
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«Reply #3 on: November 12, 2014, 07:24:56 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya aap hazraat ka.
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«Reply #4 on: November 12, 2014, 09:43:04 PM »
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bahut khoobsurat sher hai, dheron daad. welcome to yoindia family.
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«Reply #5 on: November 13, 2014, 12:01:16 AM »
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Shukriya Surindran ji
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«Reply #6 on: November 13, 2014, 01:10:23 AM »
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Yunhi Likhte Rahein Mehfil Sajaate Rahein,.
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«Reply #7 on: November 13, 2014, 07:55:09 AM »
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Quote from: sana Afroz on November 12, 2014, 04:34:46 PM
qurbatein bikti hain,jazbe nahin biktey aye dost !!
lafz to bikte hain, lahjey nahin biktey aye dost !!

bikne ko  bikti hai  har cheez  is zamaane mein,
rooh parwar bhi hon lamhey nahin biktey aye dost !!

Mohtarma sana Afroz sahiba! salam

buhat khoobsurat qata inayat farmaya aap ne... daad qabool kejay..

teesray misra wazan men nahi hay... agar aap chahen tu isay esay bhi keh sakti hen..

"bikne ko  bikti hai  har cheez  zamaane mein magar"

baaki aap behter samajhti hen...

ek cheez poochhna chahen gay k kia aap beher waghera ka ilm rakhti hen? agar rakhti hen tu kis qadar? poochnay ki waja sirf ye hay, k isi beher men ek aur ghazal bhi aap ne pesh ki hay, us men bhi sirf ek misra men wazan ka masla hay aur baaki tamam durust...

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«Reply #8 on: November 13, 2014, 08:06:55 AM »
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Shukriya vb  shb ....
mujhey fun e shayri ka koi ilm nahin hai wo to main shauqiya likhti hoo. Darasl mai chemistry teacher hoon ..is liye bahut radeef qafiya nahin mila paati hoon bus thora mashq kar leti hoon ...agar aap meri islaah karte rahe to main bhi qamyaab shayra ban sakti hoon kynk lagta hai k aap is fun ka achcha khada ilm rakhtey hain....
 duaon Mein yaad rakhiyega ....
.  ALLAH HAFIZ..
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«Reply #9 on: November 13, 2014, 09:51:02 AM »
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Mohtarma sana Afroz Sahiba! salam

ye jaan ker khushi hui, k hum ek suljhay huay insaan se bat kr rahay hen..

pehli derkhawast tu ye kerna chahen gay k hamari raayay, hatami nahi hoti... zahir hay k hum khud shagird hen aur seekhtay rehtay hen... so zaroori nahi k aap hamari her baat se itefaaq karen ku k hum khud ghalat bhi ho saktay hen.. albata, hum ye yaqeen-dahaani kerva saktay hen, k hum jo bhe mashwara den gay, khaloos-e-niyat se den gay..

aap ne "kaamyaab shayra" banena hay, or hamen yaqeen hay k inshallah ek din esa zaroor ho ga ku k aap "fitri shayara" hen... albata, ek baat jo hum ne note ki hay wo ye k "kaamyab shayar" do (2) tarah k hotay hen...

ek wo jo hamaari tarah boorha damaagh rakhtay hen, aur ilm-e-arooz (yaani shayari k ilm) ki paabandi laazmi samajhtay hen.. wo sher bhe kehtay hen, tu buhat napa-tula aur mayaari hota hay.. is qisim k shayar, aam taur pr kaamyaab shayar tu hotay hen, magar mashehoor shayar nahi hotay

doosray wo shayar hotay hen, jo behter likh letay hen.. qavaaneen ki pabandi nahi kertay, jadeed shayari kertay hen... ye log mash-hoor honay ky liyay kitaben bhi khoob print kerva letay hen.. aur mash-hoor bhe ho jatay hen..

so "kaamyaab shayara" se aap ki kia muraad hay, ye tu hum nahi jantay, lekin hamen umeed hay k jald hum aap ko kisi muqaam per dekhen gay... aap ki shayari jazbaat rakhti hay.. so zaroor logon k dil per asar keray ge...

hamaari duaain aap k sath hen..

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«Reply #10 on: November 13, 2014, 09:59:38 AM »
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Shukriya vb shb ..
mujhey shohrat dene wali nahin dil o dimagh ko choo lene wali shayri karni hai . Meri sabse bari kaamyabi tab hogi jab merey jazbey logon k zahnon aur dilon Mein jazb kar jayein.
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sana afroz...
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«Reply #11 on: November 13, 2014, 12:07:54 PM »
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«Reply #12 on: November 13, 2014, 01:04:46 PM »
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bahut khoob  vb shb MASHALLAH!!!!
Bahut khoobsoorat ijhar tha khayalat ka , ye qalam ka hi jadoo hai k ham kuch na kahtey huye bhi bahut kuch kah jate hain ...
aap zamane se kafi mayus lagtey hain.
ye to sach hai baharhal k yahan fuqdaan hai sukhan sanashon ka.


ANJAM US K HATH HAI ,
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BHEEGE HUYE PARON SE HI,
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«Reply #13 on: November 13, 2014, 03:32:22 PM »
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Bahut:clapping: khoob 

murde  bhi bik jate hai bazaro me....

Afsos sang dil koi nhi milta jaan bhi lutane pe

   ......~m.a~.....
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«Reply #14 on: November 13, 2014, 03:33:41 PM »
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Bahut:clapping: khoob 

murde  bhi bik jate hai bazaro me....

Afsos sang dil koi nhi milta jaan bhi lutane pe

   ......~m.a~.....
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