Nahin hai mujhe hosh mera Lekin mein madhosh nahin

by Ricky on May 30, 2007, 10:46:43 PM
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thycreator
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«Reply #15 on: June 07, 2007, 06:54:36 PM »
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Kyu.....sahi nahi kaha maine???

Tu hans pada sun bat meri, koshish meri safal hui,
Shayar hue hum aaj hi, har bat meri ghazal hui....Winking
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«Reply #16 on: June 10, 2007, 07:48:33 AM »
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bahoot khoob Creator ji!!
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«Reply #17 on: June 10, 2007, 06:28:49 PM »
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Thanks again pooja, sirf tareef hi........kabhi toh jawab bhi mile.....Usual Smile

Kabhi toh hum bhi sune haal-e-dil tumse,
Dosti mein itni doori acchi nahi hoti.....Usual Smile
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«Reply #18 on: June 10, 2007, 08:34:34 PM »
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Usual Smile  


Muskurate rahiye... raste chahe kitne ho tang..
Guzariye shokhi sae.. Mile jo pal kuch dost ke sang. .. !!
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«Reply #19 on: June 11, 2007, 05:14:32 AM »
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Kuch pal dost ke sung he, yaadein ban jaata hai
Dost bichar jaaate hai, yandon ka hi sung rah jaata hai
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«Reply #20 on: June 11, 2007, 09:24:30 AM »
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Wah Ricky ji............Pooja......chalo kuch toh likha..

Milna bichadna toh dunia ka dastoor raha hai,
Tere dil se mera dil phir bhi kahan door raha hai..
Kabhi na mil sake hum dono ab talak dekho,
Phir bhi naam se tere chere pe ye noor raha hai..Winking
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«Reply #21 on: June 11, 2007, 10:55:55 AM »
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Usual Smile.. Wah Amit.. very nice !
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«Reply #22 on: June 11, 2007, 11:29:14 AM »
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marvelous all of u..

A great work by all of u.. seniours ki mehfil bahoot rageen saji hai...

I must say.. sabne itna acha likha hai ki lata hai ki ------- Koi hosh mein nahi hai par sab madhosh nahi hai !

best wishes
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«Reply #23 on: June 11, 2007, 07:02:40 PM »
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Thanks a lot ricky n deepika.....
deepika..

Wo din the alag, wo shaamein aur thi,
Jab yoindia pe hum mehfilein sajate the,
Ek se ek the fankaar uss jamane mein,
Jo har bat ko dil khol kar sunate the,
Mehfilein ab bhi sajti hai, log ab bhi aate hain,
Par jane kyu mehfil mein jaan dal na paate hain.
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«Reply #24 on: June 11, 2007, 07:38:29 PM »
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Ya..

Kuch kuch aisa hai.. per jald hi sanvar jayega!
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«Reply #25 on: June 12, 2007, 04:06:55 AM »
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Quote from: "thycreator"
Thanks a lot ricky n deepika.....
deepika..

Wo din the alag, wo shaamein aur thi,
Jab yoindia pe hum mehfilein sajate the,
Ek se ek the fankaar uss jamane mein,
Jo har bat ko dil khol kar sunate the,
Mehfilein ab bhi sajti hai, log ab bhi aate hain,
Par jane kyu mehfil mein jaan dal na paate hain.


u r most welcme

umeed pe duniya kayam hai
kal jo jo the nazaare woh phir aayenge
aapn logo ki mehfil se loh jali hai
 kal yahin aashiyaane bhi jal jaayenge

kal is mehfil mein Aashiyaane bhi jal jaayenge
karenge bayan sab is tarah apne jazbaato ko jaheer
kahin hogi aankehe nam tho kahin Dil milenge
jo ab tak chupi thi unke seene mea woh alfazo mea bayan kar jaayenge

Believe & extra effort makes every thing possible !

Divya
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«Reply #26 on: June 12, 2007, 04:50:36 PM »
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Thanks divya ji......n nice one from you....
Ricky ji......ummeed hai ki phir sab pehle sa hoga...

Hum ye jante hain ki bahar phir se aayegi,
Iss fiza ko phir wahi khushbo mehekayegi,
Issi ummeed par hum yahan phir se aaye hain,
Dekhen apni koshish kitni rang laayegi....Usual Smile
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«Reply #27 on: July 25, 2007, 02:01:48 AM »
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Quote from: "Ricky"
In English Script:

   
    Bin maye beheke mere kadam,
        Lekin mein madhosh nahin hun !!

        Dikhe anjane saare jaane chehre,
        Lekin mein madhosh nahin hun !!

        Jab Tab tham jaye soch meri,
        Lekin mein madhosh nahin hun !!

        Har dooje pal beheke dhadkan meri,
        Lekin mein madhosh nahin hun !!

        Khali jaise sare jazb mere,
        Lekin mein madhosh nahin hun !!

        Nihare ek-tak uss chhor anhken meri,
        Lekin mein madhosh nahin hun !!

        Daure hai siharan yun jism mere,
        Lekin mein madhosh nahin hun !!

        Nahin hai mujhe hosh mera,
        Lekin phir bhi mein madhosh nahin hun !!


Now in Devnagri script

    बिन मय बहकें मेरे क़दम,
        लेकिन मैं मदहोश नहीं हूं |

        दिखे अनजाने सारे जाने चेहरे,
        लेकिन मैं मदहोश नहीं हूं |

        जब तब थम जाये सोच मेरी,
        लेकिन मैं मदहोश नहीं हूं |

        हर दूजे पल बहके धङकन मेरी,
        लेकिन मैं मदहोश नहीं हूं |

        ख़ाली जैसे सारे जज्ब़ मेरे,
        लेकिन मैं मदहोश नहीं हूं |

        निहारे एक-टक उस छोर आंखे मेरी,
        लेकिन मैं मदहोश नहीं हूं |

        दौङे है सिहरन यूं जिस्म मेरे,
        लेकिन मैं मदहोश नहीं हूं |

        नहीं है मुझे होश मेरा ,
        लेकिन फिर भी मैं मदहोश नहीं हूं |


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Aaj hum aapka sab postings pada aur enjoy kiya
and this devnagri script.. something i really want to do
but each time failed..

Nice 1 Ricky ji... Daad kabul kijiyega...
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«Reply #28 on: July 25, 2007, 10:18:50 AM »
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Shukriya Roja,
Acchha laga  Ki tumne meri poems ko saraha !
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«Reply #29 on: July 25, 2007, 02:37:48 PM »
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Rickyji maine aapki tahreer bahut lagan se padhi
aap bahut achha likhte hai.I really enjoyed gr8 work.
God bless you
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