Nahin hai mujhe hosh mera Lekin mein madhosh nahin

by Ricky on May 30, 2007, 10:46:43 PM
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«Reply #30 on: July 25, 2007, 05:56:30 PM »
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Rickyji maine aapki tahreer bahut lagan se padhi
aap bahut achha likhte hai.I really enjoyed gr8 work.
God bless you


Thats the true appreciation, when the reader is feeling the warmthness of the poem then only the poet feels the real appreciation.
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«Reply #31 on: July 29, 2007, 08:54:02 AM »
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Tashkeen nahi, dard nahi, aas nahi!
     Ab koi bhi sarmaya mere paas nahi!!
     Ehsaas tha, pehale to na dard-e-muahabbat!
     Ab dard-e-muhabbat hai, to ehsaas nahi!!
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«Reply #32 on: July 29, 2007, 11:27:52 AM »
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nice words. !
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«Reply #33 on: January 17, 2009, 11:06:27 PM »
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Aap ki ye rachna devnagri me dekh bahut achha laga....
Jara bataiye huzoor ye kaise kiya aapne...
kaun se hindi fonts use kiye hain aapne....
yoindia me...
Quote from: Ricky on May 30, 2007, 10:46:43 PM
In English Script:

   
    Bin maye beheke mere kadam,
        Lekin mein madhosh nahin hun !!

        Dikhe anjane saare jaane chehre,
        Lekin mein madhosh nahin hun !!

        Jab Tab tham jaye soch meri,
        Lekin mein madhosh nahin hun !!

        Har dooje pal beheke dhadkan meri,
        Lekin mein madhosh nahin hun !!

        Khali jaise sare jazb mere,
        Lekin mein madhosh nahin hun !!

        Nihare ek-tak uss chhor anhken meri,
        Lekin mein madhosh nahin hun !!

        Daure hai siharan yun jism mere,
        Lekin mein madhosh nahin hun !!

        Nahin hai mujhe hosh mera,
        Lekin phir bhi mein madhosh nahin hun !!

Now in Devnagri script

    बिन मय बहकें मेरे क़दम,
        लेकिन मैं मदहोश नहीं हूं |

        दिखे अनजाने सारे जाने चेहरे,
        लेकिन मैं मदहोश नहीं हूं |

        जब तब थम जाये सोच मेरी,
        लेकिन मैं मदहोश नहीं हूं |

        हर दूजे पल बहके धङकन मेरी,
        लेकिन मैं मदहोश नहीं हूं |

        ख़ाली जैसे सारे जज्ब़ मेरे,
        लेकिन मैं मदहोश नहीं हूं |

        निहारे एक-टक उस छोर आंखे मेरी,
        लेकिन मैं मदहोश नहीं हूं |

        दौङे है सिहरन यूं जिस्म मेरे,
        लेकिन मैं मदहोश नहीं हूं |

        नहीं है मुझे होश मेरा ,
        लेकिन फिर भी मैं मदहोश नहीं हूं |

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«Reply #34 on: January 17, 2009, 11:19:18 PM »
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bahut sunder lika hai aapne.....clap clap clap...

Kaun maanta hai p-kar ki main madhosh hu
Per jab hosh nahi mujhe mera he, to kya hu
Samajhta hu sab, per samajhana chahta nahi
Koi bataye ye aalam kaun sa hai,hosh ya madhosh....
Quote from: ANAAM on January 17, 2009, 11:06:27 PM
Aap ki ye rachna devnagri me dekh bahut achha laga....
Jara bataiye huzoor ye kaise kiya aapne...
kaun se hindi fonts use kiye hain aapne....
yoindia me...
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«Reply #35 on: August 15, 2009, 08:14:06 PM »
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janab shairi to kamal ki karte hain aap. padh kar achha laga  Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #36 on: September 17, 2009, 08:23:24 PM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Ricky ji wonderful creation,beautiful lines by Creator ji,Pooja ji.Anaam ji ,Monali ji aap sabhi ne kamaal ke likhe.excellent Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #37 on: March 11, 2010, 09:51:27 AM »
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