Na-jaanay kis khuda (by vb)

by vb on April 12, 2014, 10:22:43 PM
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Kuch ashq jo noha kanaaN thay, pee liyay men ne
Khauf-e-fasaad-e-khalq say lab, see liyay men ne


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«Reply #1 on: April 13, 2014, 04:21:57 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
wah wah bohut hi umda waaaahhhhhhhhhhh
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«Reply #3 on: April 13, 2014, 10:14:17 AM »
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wah Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: April 13, 2014, 12:53:23 PM »
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Waah-waah,,,,,,,
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«Reply #5 on: April 13, 2014, 06:14:14 PM »
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Quote from: vb on April 12, 2014, 10:22:43 PM

Na-jaanay kis khuda ki baat karti ho? meri JaanaN!

Khudaara naam mat lena, tum us ka saamnay meray
Tumhara he khuda hay wo, tum apnay paas he rakho
Haqeeqat ki sittam aaraai  say moom more kar apna
Hamesha us k jhootay aasron par aas he rakho

Tumhara us say kya lena hay tum he jaanti ho par
Hazoor-e-ghaib men, main ne bhi to ik iltejaa ki thi
Dua ki thi k meray baazoovon ko tum sahaaraa do
Tumhaari chashm-e-tar k ashk chunenay ki dua ki thi

Hamaary paas rehnay ki zaroorat hi usay kya hay?
Agar wo dil ki nanhi iltejaain sun nahi sakta
Meri mad-hoshe baanhon kay sahaaray ab bhe veeraaN hen
Tumhaari chashm-e-tar kay nanhay aansoo chun nahi sakta

Wo jo maasoom jazbay khud ata karta hay seenon ko
Usay kya dil ki duniya lootnay men chain aata hay?
Na-jaanay naaz ku kar hay usay apni khudaai par
Hamesha chaahaton say dushmani ku kar nibhaata hay?

Tumhen bhe pyar hota mujh say tu tum khul k keh deti
Nahi kuch jhoot ki oqaat chaahat ki shareeyat men
Javaani thi tu dil ko aasraa bhe thaa khudaai ka
Mera tu uth gaya hay us say ab eemaaN haqeeqat men

Meri in talkh baton ki haqeeqat hay tu itni hay
Main us kay shukr kay jhootay taraanay gaa nahi sakta
Mujhay is jhoot ki duniya say nafrat hay, tu nafrat hay
Buhat phela chukka hoon daaman ab phela nahi sakta


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achi takhleeq hy, khudaa ko samjha nhi kabhee aap ne vb jee,
well aap ne apna point of view sacha byan kiya hai, bohat c daad
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«Reply #6 on: April 14, 2014, 12:39:51 PM »
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वाह....वाह....वाह.....
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«Reply #7 on: April 14, 2014, 05:35:37 PM »
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shukriya aap sub ka ...

mohtarma laibaa sahiba! hum waqai nahi samjhay. wo khaaliq ho kar hamen nahi samjha tu hum makhlooq ho kar kaisay or kyun samjhen? ... aur agar wo hamen samajhta hay tu phir hamari ye baten us k liyay expected hon ge ...

khair.. shukriya aap ka k daad di aap nay...

dua go

ahqar-vb jee
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«Reply #8 on: April 14, 2014, 05:40:50 PM »
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salam vb g
khaaliq apni takhleeq ko samjhta hai
bilkul aise jese aapko apni nazm takhleeq kerte waqt ye pta tha ke iss men beher ki kitni ghalatiyan hen , Usual Smile
jo rab ko na samjhe woh khud ko kia samjhe ga
ye meri soch hai hai is se kisi ka mutafiq hona zaroori nhiN
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«Reply #9 on: April 14, 2014, 06:38:40 PM »
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Quote from: laaiba on April 14, 2014, 05:40:50 PM
salam vb g
khaaliq apni takhleeq ko samjhta hai
bilkul aise jese aapko apni nazm takhleeq kerte waqt ye pta tha ke iss men beher ki kitni ghalatiyan hen , Usual Smile
jo rab ko na samjhe woh khud ko kia samjhe ga
ye meri soch hai hai is se kisi ka mutafiq hona zaroori nhiN

Mohtarma laaiba sahiba! w/salam

hum nazm likhtay hen to usay ghaltiyoN say saaf rakhnay ki koshish kartay hen, jaisay k ye nazm hay. aap ko ghaltiaN nazar aa rahi hen to batain, hum isay theek karny ki koshish karen gay.. aur agar hum say ghaltian reh jaati hen ya kuch jaan boojh kar kartay hen, tu us k zimadar bhi hum khud hotay hen, bechari nazm ko is par qasoorvaar nahi thehraatay...

ghalatiyoN ki nishan-dahi ki darkhwast hay...

dua-go
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«Reply #10 on: April 14, 2014, 07:42:39 PM »
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Quote from: vb on April 14, 2014, 05:35:37 PM
shukriya aap sub ka ...

mohtarma laibaa sahiba! hum waqai nahi samjhay. wo khaaliq ho kar hamen nahi samjha tu hum makhlooq ho kar kaisay or kyun samjhen? ... aur agar wo hamen samajhta hay tu phir hamari ye baten us k liyay expected hon ge ...

khair.. shukriya aap ka k daad di aap nay...

dua go

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«Reply #11 on: April 14, 2014, 09:14:07 PM »
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VB I don't appreciate such poetries.
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«Reply #12 on: April 14, 2014, 09:43:27 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on April 14, 2014, 07:42:39 PM
Naoozbillah Min Zaalik...
bohat mazrat ke sath aqsh g vb g ne yahan shirk ka irtikab nhi kiyaa,to naaoozbillah q,
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«Reply #13 on: April 14, 2014, 09:50:54 PM »
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Quote from: vb on April 14, 2014, 06:38:40 PM
Mohtarma laaiba sahiba! w/salam

hum nazm likhtay hen to usay ghaltiyoN say saaf rakhnay ki koshish kartay hen, jaisay k ye nazm hay. aap ko ghaltiaN nazar aa rahi hen to batain, hum isay theek karny ki koshish karen gay.. aur agar hum say ghaltian reh jaati hen ya kuch jaan boojh kar kartay hen, tu us k zimadar bhi hum khud hotay hen, bechari nazm ko is par qasoorvaar nahi thehraatay...

ghalatiyoN ki nishan-dahi ki darkhwast hay...

dua-go

vb g aapne reply ko padhiye gaa iss mein jawab ke khaliq ko apni takhleeq per b naaz hota hai ,
yahan maine aapki aik purani nazm jis per aapka reply tha ke iss men beshumar beher ki ghalatiyan hen ka hawala dia thaa,
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«Reply #14 on: April 14, 2014, 10:05:04 PM »
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Quote from: laaiba on April 14, 2014, 09:50:54 PM
vb g aapne reply ko padhiye gaa iss mein jawab ke khaliq ko apni takhleeq per b naaz hota hai ,
yahan maine aapki aik purani nazm jis per aapka reply tha ke iss men beshumar beher ki ghalatiyan hen ka hawala dia thaa,



or jisay apni takhleeq par naaz ho, wo apni takhleeq kay sath kya he khoob salook karta hay...

Quote from: laaiba on April 14, 2014, 09:43:27 PM
bohat mazrat ke sath aqsh g vb g ne yahan shirk ka irtikab nhi kiyaa,to naaoozbillah q,

nazm hata di hay hum ne.... shukriya...

ahqar-vb jee
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