"Najar aayegi" ......................PWFS

by pankajwfs on August 06, 2012, 05:16:05 PM
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Jikr-e-wafa hoga to meri tasveer najar aayegi,
Apne reestoN me chupee ek lakeer ubhar aayegi.

Mere baad jab bhi nai duniyaa sajaaogi kabhee,
Tujhme us sakhs ko meree taaseer najar aayegi.

Tum jab bhi naya aasiyaaN banaaogi kabhi bhee,
Mere khwaaboN ki har ek taameer najar aayegi.

YuN to chale gaye bahut door tum mujhse kahiN,
Mud ke dekhogi to apni hi takseer najar aayegi.

Na samajh meree awaargee ka sila hai ye wajood,
Gaur se dekho in pairoN me Zanzeer najar aayegi.

yuN to likh deta huN jo jee me aata hai 'pankaj',
Har lafz me tere ehsaas kee Tehseer najar aayegi.

(PWFS 06/08/2012 time 10:47 PM)
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«Reply #1 on: August 06, 2012, 05:21:13 PM »
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bahut khub b ahut hi lajawab behad umda qalaam pankaj ji
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«Reply #2 on: August 06, 2012, 05:44:57 PM »
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2,4,5th and last sher khoob kaha

waah wah wah..Pankaj jee
kya baat hai.

Bahut badhiya ghajal pesh kee hai.

dili mubaarakbaad kubool kare.
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«Reply #3 on: August 06, 2012, 05:58:06 PM »
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Quote from: pankajwfs on August 06, 2012, 05:16:05 PM
Jikr-e-wafa hoga to meri tasveer najar aayegi,
Apne reestoN me chupee ek lakeer ubhar aayegi.

Mere baad jab bhi nai duniyaa sajaaogi kabhee,
Tujhme us sakhs ko meree taaseer najar aayegi.

Tum jab bhi naya aasiyaaN banaaogi kabhi bhee,
Mere khwaaboN ki har ek taameer najar aayegi.

YuN to chale gaye bahut door tum mujhse kahiN,
Mud ke dekhogi to apni hi takseer najar aayegi.

Na samajh meree awaargee ka sila hai ye wajood,
Gaur se dekho in pairoN me Zanzeer najar aayegi.

yuN to likh deta huN jo jee me aata hai 'pankaj',
Har lafz me tere ehsaas kee Tehseer najar aayegi.

(PWFS 06/08/2012 time 10:47 PM)


Bahut Bahut Khooooob Pankaj Ji..

Lajawaab!!! Yoindia Ki Iss Mehfil Mein Aap mere Chuninda Pasandida Shayaron Mein Ek Ho...

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«Reply #4 on: August 06, 2012, 06:10:13 PM »
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bahut khoob pankaj ji..

wah dil khush ho gaya padhkar... Usual Smile

dhero daad.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: August 06, 2012, 09:42:03 PM »
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Quote from: pankajwfs on August 06, 2012, 05:16:05 PM
Jikr-e-wafa hoga to meri tasveer najar aayegi,
Apne reestoN me chupee ek lakeer ubhar aayegi.

Mere baad jab bhi nai duniyaa sajaaogi kabhee,
Tujhme us sakhs ko meree taaseer najar aayegi.

Tum jab bhi naya aasiyaaN banaaogi kabhi bhee,
Mere khwaaboN ki har ek taameer najar aayegi.

YuN to chale gaye bahut door tum mujhse kahiN,
Mud ke dekhogi to apni hi takseer najar aayegi.

Na samajh meree awaargee ka sila hai ye wajood,
Gaur se dekho in pairoN me Zanzeer najar aayegi.

yuN to likh deta huN jo jee me aata hai 'pankaj',
Har lafz me tere ehsaas kee Tehseer najar aayegi. tahreer hogaa shayad icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent

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«Reply #6 on: August 06, 2012, 11:35:49 PM »
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Bahut khoob
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«Reply #7 on: August 07, 2012, 01:09:57 AM »
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waah waah pankaj jee badee khoobssora ghazal pesh kee hai bahut bahut mubarakbad
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«Reply #8 on: August 07, 2012, 03:35:46 AM »
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bohut khub pankaj bhai
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«Reply #9 on: August 07, 2012, 05:21:13 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause   bahut sunar, bahut khoobsurti se ehsaason ko jod ke kavita ka roop diya hai aapne... bahut khoob likha hai Pankaj ji...!!!
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«Reply #10 on: August 07, 2012, 08:01:03 AM »
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bahut khub b ahut hi lajawab behad umda qalaam pankaj ji
Soudagar ji qalaam ko pasand karne ke liye aapka tahedil se sukriya ataa karta hoon.......
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«Reply #11 on: August 07, 2012, 10:03:02 AM »
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kya baat hai Pankaj Ji
jahan bhi dekhoge meri tasveer nazar aayegi
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«Reply #12 on: August 07, 2012, 10:08:43 AM »
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Pankaj ji...bahot hi achcha likha hai.....aur 5th para ki second line..."Gaur se dekho in pairo me zanjeer nazar ayegi"--bahot khubsoorat hai

Sach me rishte itni asaani se nahi juda hote
unka kuch hissa alag hote waqt ham me reh jata hai
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«Reply #13 on: August 07, 2012, 12:45:46 PM »
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WAh Wah Pankaz Ji BAhut Khoobsurat peshkash BAddai ho
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«Reply #14 on: August 08, 2012, 06:13:27 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on August 06, 2012, 05:44:57 PM
2,4,5th and last sher khoob kaha

waah wah wah..Pankaj jee
kya baat hai.

Bahut badhiya ghajal pesh kee hai.

dili mubaarakbaad kubool kare.

Haunsla afzaai aur qalaam ko pasand karne ke liye bahut bahut sukriya Mukesh ji....
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