Najar Atta Hai!!!

by Pooja on July 09, 2009, 10:22:51 PM
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Yah kavita kuch is soch mai likhi gai hai ki insaan bina soche samjhe jab kisi per ankh band kar vishwaas kar leta hai aor lakh aoro ke kahne per bhi ankhein nahi kholta aor dhoke per dhoka kha kar, halaato se ladte hue wapis ek ek baat sochta hai ki yaha to akal aa jaani chaiye thi.. waha nahi to us waqat akal aa jaani chahiye thi.. bas is vicharo ko man main rakhte hu yah shabd man mai aye aor likh diye:



Zindagi ka her hissa ek khwab najar atta hai
Palat kar dekho jab, khud ka andhkaar najar atta hai

Kaise bandhi hui thi patti, Avishwaas ki ankhon per
Khud ka khud per se vishwaas uthta sa najar atta hai

TAb nahi to tab, tab nahi to jab, soch main aye kaya kaya
Apna kitna na samjhdaar hona, najar atta hai

Badal le khud ko Pooja, ya Tadpane ki chor de Adat
Koi aor nahi, Khud ko khud ka he gunhgaar hona najar atta hai

Zindagi ka her hissa ek khwab najar atta hai
Palat kar dekho jab, khud ka andhkaar najar atta hai
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«Reply #1 on: July 09, 2009, 10:27:04 PM »
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Zindagi tumhari thi q apni zaat se kare shikwa

Jo naseeb me tha mila jo na mila kaisa gila......
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«Reply #2 on: July 10, 2009, 06:20:04 AM »
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KYA BAAT HAI POOJA JI.......

DER SE HI SAHI, SAMBHAL TO GAYE,
ANDHKAR MEIN BATAKNE SE NIKAL TO GAYE.
KHUD PE VISHWAAS RAKH HARDAM,
ROSHNI NAZAR AAYEGI, HAR KADAM.
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«Reply #3 on: July 10, 2009, 06:25:47 AM »
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bahut achche di kya khooblikha hai aapne aur topic ka selection bhi bahut badiya hai


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«Reply #4 on: July 10, 2009, 07:58:08 AM »
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Wah Pooja ji wonderful creation,excellent, icon_thumleft
beautiful lines by Cara ji and Dbd. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: July 10, 2009, 08:08:19 AM »
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Nice one indeed Pooja ji
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«Reply #6 on: July 10, 2009, 10:21:23 AM »
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Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Pooja ji and Cera ji.. bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #7 on: July 10, 2009, 11:26:06 AM »
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Bohot Khoob Pooja

Nice one from you Cara Ji
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«Reply #8 on: July 10, 2009, 04:01:27 PM »
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Quote from: cara on July 10, 2009, 06:20:04 AM
KYA BAAT HAI POOJA JI.......

DER SE HI SAHI, SAMBHAL TO GAYE,
ANDHKAR MEIN BATAKNE SE NIKAL TO GAYE.
KHUD PE VISHWAAS RAKH HARDAM,
ROSHNI NAZAR AAYEGI, HAR KADAM.

bahoot khoob kaga Cara ji!!! simpe magar gahre arth liye hue... Thanks!!
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«Reply #9 on: July 10, 2009, 04:02:12 PM »
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Quote from: -Saahil- on July 10, 2009, 06:25:47 AM
bahut achche di kya khooblikha hai aapne aur topic ka selection bhi bahut badiya hai




Thanks Saahil, waise ajj kal to hum apki shayri ke fan ho rahe hai Usual Smile Khush raho!!
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«Reply #10 on: July 10, 2009, 04:03:59 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on July 10, 2009, 07:58:08 AM
Wah Pooja ji wonderful creation,excellent, icon_thumleft
beautiful lines by Cara ji and Dbd. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Shukaria Madhu ji...
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«Reply #11 on: July 10, 2009, 04:05:10 PM »
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Quote from: Dastbardaar on July 09, 2009, 10:27:04 PM
Zindagi tumhari thi q apni zaat se kare shikwa

Jo naseeb me tha mila jo na mila kaisa gila......

sahi kaha wo kahte hai na ki ..
waqat se pahle kismat se jayada
na mila hai na milega!!!

acha laga apne meri likhi lines parri aor Lines likh kar he jawab diya!!
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«Reply #12 on: July 10, 2009, 04:05:42 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on July 10, 2009, 10:21:23 AM
Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Pooja ji and Cera ji.. bahoot Khoob!

Thanks Sophi!!
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«Reply #13 on: July 10, 2009, 04:06:03 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on July 10, 2009, 11:26:06 AM
Bohot Khoob Pooja

Nice one from you Cara Ji

Thank you so much Celmira!!!
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«Reply #14 on: July 10, 2009, 04:43:59 PM »
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Too good and excellent ghazal Pooja Ji
very nice
SARVESH RASTOGI
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