NAKAMIYON SE NISBAT.........MAMTA BAJPAI

by mamta bajpai on June 20, 2010, 06:26:21 PM
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NAKAMIYON SE MERI NISBAT HAI MUJHSE PAHALE
AAGE CHALI SITAMGAR TAQDEER MUJH SE PAHALE

PATTHAR HUA SARAPA YE ZABTE INTEHA THI
BASTA THA PANKHURI ME DAYARE SANG SE PAHALE

GAME FIRAQ KE QISSE YA NISHATE WASL KI BAATEN
TOO BATA DE TUJHKO KYA SUNANA HAI MUJHSE PAHALE

SAWALON KI ZAD PE TUNE RAKKHA HAI MUJHKO AISE
AKS CHUPA KE AAINA SAWAL KARTA HAI MUJHSE PAHALE
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«Reply #1 on: June 21, 2010, 12:37:01 AM »
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   Nice one Mamta ji. Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: June 21, 2010, 09:53:31 AM »
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Umda takhayyul par mabni achhi poetry hai Mamta ji. Bas iske redeef aur qafia samajhne se qaasir raha. Phir bhi ye lines sabse achhi lagi:

GAME FIRAQ KE QISSE YA NISHATE WASL KI BAATEN
TOO BATA DE TUJHKO KYA SUNANA HAI MUJHSE PAHALE
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«Reply #3 on: June 21, 2010, 08:09:36 PM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on June 20, 2010, 06:26:21 PM
NAKAMIYON SE MERI NISBAT HAI MUJHSE PAHALE
AAGE CHALI SITAMGAR TAQDEER MUJH SE PAHALE

PATTHAR HUA SARAPA YE ZABTE INTEHA THI
BASTA THA PANKHURI ME DAYARE SANG SE PAHALE

GAME FIRAQ KE QISSE YA NISHATE WASL KI BAATEN
TOO BATA DE TUJHKO KYA SUNANA HAI MUJHSE PAHALE

SAWALON KI ZAD PE TUNE RAKKHA HAI MUJHKO AISE
AKS CHUPA KE AAINA SAWAL KARTA HAI MUJHSE PAHALE
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«Reply #4 on: June 22, 2010, 01:36:18 PM »
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Nice One, Mamta Ji,.
Jaise Riyaz Bhai Ne Kaha Hai, Shab-e-Firaaq Waali Lines Touching Hain
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«Reply #5 on: June 22, 2010, 01:47:35 PM »
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BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA TAMANNA JI.
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«Reply #6 on: June 22, 2010, 01:49:30 PM »
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SHUKRIYA RIYAZ JI!
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«Reply #7 on: June 22, 2010, 01:50:30 PM »
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THANKS A LOT AZEEM JI!
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«Reply #8 on: June 22, 2010, 01:51:17 PM »
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SHUKRIYA MANOJ JI.
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«Reply #9 on: June 25, 2010, 09:34:04 AM »
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Good one Mamta Ji
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«Reply #10 on: June 25, 2010, 01:49:43 PM »
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THANKS RAJESHJI!
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«Reply #11 on: June 26, 2010, 03:05:31 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoooooooob Mamta Ji.. Bahut Hi Umda Peshkash Hai.. Lafzon Ka Chunaaw Behad Khubsoorat hai.. Daad Kubool karen.. Applause Applause



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«Reply #12 on: June 26, 2010, 05:09:39 PM »
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SHUKRIYA MANN JI.AAP KI NAWAZISH KA BEHAD SHUKRIYA.
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«Reply #13 on: June 26, 2010, 07:51:59 PM »
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bahoth qoob mamta saheba ,, apke to kya kahene hain ,, hamesha se lajawab ho app ,, zoor-a-qalam aur ziyada .. allah apko khush rakhe ..


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«Reply #14 on: June 26, 2010, 07:56:54 PM »
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thanks a lot Qadeer saheb!aap yoon hi housla afzai karte rahen to zor-e-eqalam or zyada...
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