~*~Nam hai dil..ankhein nahin..~*~by Rahim

by dead heart on July 09, 2011, 04:03:38 PM
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Nakamyabi chhakhi hai aj phir maine,
Nam hai dil mera, ankhein nahin..

Ghirte paaton ki zindagian bikhar jati hai,
Mar jate hai paate, shakaein nahin..

Kyun mujhe devdaas tum bulate ho yaar,
Kya tumhare paas rulane layak yaadein nahin..?

Umeed na lagana mujse kalam-e-mohobat ki,
Mere paas tum jaise khazanein nahin..

Woh puchta hai kaise muskura lete ho ‘Khamosh’
Kaha muskurate hue bas itna maine,
‘Toofan main sab bikhar jata hai, chat’tanein nahin..’

Aj phir seekhaya zindagi ne sabak nakamyabi kay sabab,
Mager garv hai mujhe..kay nam hai dil mera, ankhein nahin..!

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: July 09, 2011, 04:10:37 PM »
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Waah bbahut bahut bahut aur bahut hi khoob rahiim isi ko asal mayine mein zindgi jina kehte hai nakamyabi se darkar nhi balki uska datkar saamna karna chahiye...
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«Reply #2 on: July 09, 2011, 06:02:08 PM »
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bahut khub rahim bhai.. Mere dil ki baat aapne keh daali.. Bahut pasand aayi mujhe..
-GUMboy...
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«Reply #3 on: July 09, 2011, 06:55:52 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: July 09, 2011, 11:58:03 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on July 09, 2011, 04:10:37 PM
Waah bbahut bahut bahut aur bahut hi khoob rahiim isi ko asal mayine mein zindgi jina kehte hai nakamyabi se darkar nhi balki uska datkar saamna karna chahiye...
Teh teh dil se shukriya Geet di..
Aur apne sahi kaha.. Zindagi ek imtehan hai,
aur imtehanon ko ghir kay nahin, larrke kay
pass kiya jata hai..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #5 on: July 10, 2011, 12:06:38 AM »
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Quote from: GUMboy on July 09, 2011, 06:02:08 PM
bahut khub rahim bhai.. Mere dil ki baat aapne keh daali.. Bahut pasand aayi mujhe..
-GUMboy...
Ohh..
Well, apka teh teh dil se shukriya dost..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #6 on: July 10, 2011, 12:10:30 AM »
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Quote from: sarfira on July 09, 2011, 06:55:52 PM
khub
Shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #7 on: July 20, 2011, 08:46:31 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khooob Bhai Rahim!!!

Gehre Jazbaaton Se Bharpoor..

Bahut Ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: July 20, 2011, 08:55:54 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on July 20, 2011, 08:46:31 AM
Bahut Bahut Khooob Bhai Rahim!!!

Gehre Jazbaaton Se Bharpoor..

Bahut Ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Teh teh dil se shukriya Khwaish dost..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #9 on: July 20, 2011, 10:44:42 PM »
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Waah Waah Kya baat hai Bahooot Bahoot Khoob Bro , Bahoot Hi Umda Jazbaat se barpoor aur bahoot bahoot Umda peshkash...  Applause Applause Applause Applause

~Divya~
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«Reply #10 on: July 21, 2011, 01:20:42 AM »
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Mast rachna hai Rahim-bhai....yu he likhte raho achha lagta hai..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: July 21, 2011, 04:20:40 AM »
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uffffffffff Rahim kya mast lkha hai..behtareennnnn
simple words yet so deep feelings...dil me itne sare ehsaas jagati hai tumhari kalam....jaise hamare hi dil ki halat bayaan karti ho...
bht gehre chhuti hai yumhari kalam har ek dil ko Rahim bhai....keep it up.... God bless bhai...
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«Reply #12 on: July 22, 2011, 10:56:46 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on July 20, 2011, 10:44:42 PM
Waah Waah Kya baat hai Bahooot Bahoot Khoob Bro , Bahoot Hi Umda Jazbaat se barpoor aur bahoot bahoot Umda peshkash...  Applause Applause Applause Applause

~Divya~


Teh teh dil se shukriya Divya di..
Haan jazbaaton se bhara tha maine..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #13 on: July 22, 2011, 10:57:24 PM »
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Quote from: ANAAM on July 21, 2011, 01:20:42 AM
Mast rachna hai Rahim-bhai....yu he likhte raho achha lagta hai..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Teh teh dil se shukriya Anaam di..
Ap bas yunhi saath dete rahiyega..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #14 on: July 22, 2011, 10:58:38 PM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 21, 2011, 04:20:40 AM
uffffffffff Rahim kya mast lkha hai..behtareennnnn
simple words yet so deep feelings...dil me itne sare ehsaas jagati hai tumhari kalam....jaise hamare hi dil ki halat bayaan karti ho...
bht gehre chhuti hai yumhari kalam har ek dil ko Rahim bhai....keep it up.... God bless bhai...
Oye hoye aj toh dil khush hogaya..
Ik arse baad apko apni kisi post pe
dekh raha hoon..
Teh teh dil se shukriya di..
Bas yunhi saath dete rahiye..
Khush rahiye..!
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