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Naseem-e-Subuh-e-Chaman (NM)

by vb on February 17, 2011, 09:08:07 AM

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Re: Naseem-e-Subuh-e-Chaman (by vb)

«Reply #1 on: February 17, 2011, 12:13:54 PM »

Quote from: vb on February 17, 2011, 09:08:07 AM

Jo khila na tha tu bikhar gayaa
Main dasa huva hun bahaar ka
Aye naseem-e-subuh-e-chaman tu ja
Kisi aur gul ko dawaam day

Nahi bay-asar koi bad-dua
Ye chaman tu kab ka ujar chukaa
Wo jahan milen meri hum-nawa
Unhen ja k mera payaam day

Main sharaab-e-ishq main gharq tha
Tha gali gali main bhatak raha
Meri jaan lee, na bura kiya
Meray qaatilon ko salaam day

Main jo lar-kharaayaa hun raah main
Wo chalay hain rastay main chhor kar
Meray hum-safar ki kamaan ko
Koi teer-e-tashna-e-kaam day
Kisi aur gul ko dawaam day

Aye naseem-e-subuh-e-chaman tu ja
Main dasa huva hun bahaar ka
Unhen ja k mera pyaam day
Kisi aur gul ko dawaam day...
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Very Nice Poetry .... Vb Ji !

dil se daad !!!!!!!!


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Re: Naseem-e-Subuh-e-Chaman (by vb)

«Reply #2 on: February 17, 2011, 04:28:33 PM »

kuch kuch samjh aai kuch kuch nahin aai VB ji.....jitni samjh aai wo achchi lagi....


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Re: Naseem-e-Subuh-e-Chaman (by vb)

«Reply #3 on: February 17, 2011, 04:55:42 PM »

mai sharaab e ishq me shark tha---
ye para par hazaron daad.
kamaal ki soch ke saath likha aapne VB ji.
aapke iss lajawaab peshkash par dil se daad.


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Re: Naseem-e-Subuh-e-Chaman (by vb)

«Reply #4 on: February 18, 2011, 09:16:09 AM »

ab aisa hai k samjhne k baad agar hum aapko comments nahin denge to behtar h k hum samjhe hi na ...hume bina samjhe hi pasand hain aapki gazlein aur geet.....fir kya fark padta hai k kuch lafz hume samjh na aayen..hum kisi se puch lenge......matlb...sahi hai na VB ji.......