Nazm : Judaa Hote Raaste ... !!! RADHIKA

by Radhika_2 on January 06, 2011, 03:26:16 PM
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Main chaahati yeh thi
Tum mere saath Rehte
Par aisa ho naa saka

Kyaa yeh zaruri thaa
Jo rozana
Badal raha thaa
Humare darmiyaan

Pehle pehl
Shabdon ka tutnaa
Phir
Khaamoshi
Aur ab
Hamesha ke liye
Judaa hote
Raaste !!!
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«Reply #1 on: January 06, 2011, 03:36:20 PM »
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hmm bahut gahri baat likhi aapne really.
serious sa post hai.
good.
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kuch likhna chahta tha mera dil
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thanx
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«Reply #2 on: January 06, 2011, 05:41:50 PM »
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Rahika jee Aadaab!

KavitaayeN likhane meiN aap bhi kamaal likhti hai aaj
aapki is kavita se jane hum... Usual Smile

Waqai behad khoob shab rachna aur satik vichar sankalpana
ki hai aapne.... Usual Smile

Is khoob kavita par dil se daad kabool kijiye....

Likhati rahiye....
Aati rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye....
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile         
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«Reply #3 on: January 06, 2011, 07:12:19 PM »
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 Applause Applause :clap:good
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«Reply #4 on: January 07, 2011, 05:39:40 AM »
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behad khubsurat andaaz me aapne apne dil ki peeda ko bayaan kiya hai..inn sawalon k jod tod bht mast ji...........
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«Reply #5 on: January 07, 2011, 05:44:39 AM »
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nice
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«Reply #6 on: January 07, 2011, 01:02:17 PM »
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Antar ke dard ko bayaaN karti ... Radhika Ji ! aapki rachnaa behad umdaa soch aur asardaar ehsaas ka jiivant manzar prastut karti hai ... bahut khoobsurat likha hai aapne ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ...
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
aise hi likhti rahen ... khush rahen ...!

duaaon ke saath ... !
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«Reply #7 on: January 07, 2011, 01:26:18 PM »
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Quote from: Radhika_2 on January 06, 2011, 03:26:16 PM
Main chaahati yeh thi
Tum mere saath Rehte
Par aisa ho naa saka

Kyaa yeh zaruri thaa
Jo rozana
Badal raha thaa
Humare darmiyaan

Pehle pehl
Shabdon ka tutnaa
Phir
Khaamoshi
Aur ab
Hamesha ke liye
Judaa hote
Raaste !!!

Bahut khoob radhika ji..maaf kijiyega kuch likhne ki gustakhi kar rahi hu...


Chaha tou maine bhi kabhi na the ki juda ho hamare raste,
kayam rahe hamari wafaye ek duje k waste,

aajkal ki fiza mein jo asar hai judai hai,
wahi zimedaar hai hamari tanhayi ka,

main chahto se badhkar jab chahu tujhe,
tou kaise ek pal mein bhulau tujhe,

khamoshiyo se nhi sar-e-aam terre apno se terra hath manga hai,
us khuda k dar per jake sachi ibaadat mein sirrf terra sath manga hai.........
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«Reply #8 on: January 08, 2011, 02:54:09 PM »
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Quote from: nirala on January 06, 2011, 03:36:20 PM
hmm bahut gahri baat likhi aapne really.
serious sa post hai.
good.
""
kuch likhna chahta tha mera dil
   lekin iss post per na ho paya mumkeen
""
thanx
"

Ji .. hausla afzaai ka shukriya ... !
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«Reply #9 on: January 09, 2011, 01:46:53 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on January 06, 2011, 05:41:50 PM
Rahika jee Aadaab!

KavitaayeN likhane meiN aap bhi kamaal likhti hai aaj
aapki is kavita se jane hum... Usual Smile

Waqai behad khoob shab rachna aur satik vichar sankalpana
ki hai aapne.... Usual Smile

Is khoob kavita par dil se daad kabool kijiye....

Likhati rahiye....
Aati rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye....
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile         


Ji ... Bauht Bauht Shukriya ... aapki daad ka !
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«Reply #10 on: January 09, 2011, 11:31:07 AM »
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Quote from: Radhika_2 on January 06, 2011, 03:26:16 PM
Main chaahati yeh thi
Tum mere saath Rehte
Par aisa ho naa saka

Kyaa yeh zaruri thaa
Jo rozana
Badal raha thaa
Humare darmiyaan

Pehle pehl
Shabdon ka tutnaa
Phir
Khaamoshi
Aur ab
Hamesha ke liye
Judaa hote
Raaste !!!


Bahut Khub Radhika JI
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«Reply #11 on: January 09, 2011, 11:31:32 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on January 07, 2011, 01:26:18 PM
Bahut khoob radhika ji..maaf kijiyega kuch likhne ki gustakhi kar rahi hu...


Chaha tou maine bhi kabhi na the ki juda ho hamare raste,
kayam rahe hamari wafaye ek duje k waste,

aajkal ki fiza mein jo asar hai judai hai,
wahi zimedaar hai hamari tanhayi ka,

main chahto se badhkar jab chahu tujhe,
tou kaise ek pal mein bhulau tujhe,

khamoshiyo se nhi sar-e-aam terre apno se terra hath manga hai,
us khuda k dar per jake sachi ibaadat mein sirrf terra sath manga hai.........

Bahut Khub Geet Ji
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«Reply #12 on: January 09, 2011, 11:35:37 AM »
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Shukkriya rishi ji...
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«Reply #13 on: January 10, 2011, 04:00:51 AM »
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Ji ....... Bauht bauht shukriya .............. !
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«Reply #14 on: January 11, 2011, 12:59:22 AM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on January 07, 2011, 05:39:40 AM
behad khubsurat andaaz me aapne apne dil ki peeda ko bayaan kiya hai..inn sawalon k jod tod bht mast ji...........

Ji .. bauht bauht shukriya Ji ... !
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