Anshumali
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Main Chehre Ki Udaasi Kaaghaz Pe Likh DooN ... !
Khol Rakhe Darwaaze Pe Apna Thodha Intezaar Rakh DooN ... !
Hawaa Me Liipte YaadoN Ke Pal Kuch Suukhe Kuch Bheege Patte Khaali Din Ki Kisi Almaari MeN Rakh DooN ... !
Jaagi AankhoN Se Bune Sapne Ko Raat Jaise UdherDti Dhaage TukDeTukDe Samet Subhaa Tak Hathelii Pe Rakh DooN ... !
Kaise Apne Pyaar Ko ToD Mann Ki Daal Se Aznabi Ke Saath Kar DooN ... !
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«Reply #2 on: September 19, 2010, 11:12:51 PM » |
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bhut khoob .......... Naresh ji very well created .......
Gud job !!!!!!!
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«Reply #4 on: September 20, 2010, 08:24:46 AM » |
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI ANSHUMALI JI......
MAIN KAHO TOH APNA SEENA CHEER KE DIKHLA DOON...!
KAHO TOH APNI DARKHAN TUME SUNA DOON...!
TU JO KAHE WO ME IMTHIAN DOON...!
PAR YE NA KAHENA KABHI KISI AUR KO APNA LOON...!
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«Reply #5 on: September 20, 2010, 12:49:56 PM » |
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Amazing Naresh jee.. bahaut bahaut khoob..
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«Reply #6 on: September 20, 2010, 02:04:23 PM » |
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buhat khoobsurat ehsaas rakhti hay ye azad nazm Anshumali jee.. buhat khoob..
and cara jee aap k alfaz bhe buhat raseelay hain...
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Anshumali
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«Reply #7 on: September 21, 2010, 01:12:54 AM » |
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Naresh Jee aadaab!
Aap ki kavitaa behad umdaa rahti hai, hume aapki sabhi kavitayeN achchi lagi hai.... aur yeH bhi behad khoob kavita hai... Daad
Likhate rahiye.... Khush rahiye.... Khuda Hafez..... Sameer Ji ... Aadaab ! aapki pasandegi aur khaas daad ka bahut bahut shukriya ... aise hi apna saath nibhaate rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen... duaaon ke saath ...
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Anshumali
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«Reply #8 on: September 24, 2010, 04:17:58 AM » |
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bhut khoob .......... Naresh ji very well created .......
Gud job !!!!!!!
aapka koshish ko saraahan ka aur daad ka bahut bahut shurkriya ... aise hi aapna saath banaaye rakhen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... duaaon ke saath.....
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«Reply #9 on: October 03, 2010, 04:05:19 AM » |
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ishk ek ibadat
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«Reply #10 on: October 03, 2010, 12:22:41 PM » |
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Naresh Ji ! Radhey Radhey ! bahut khoob rahi aapki kavita ... daad hazir hai ...
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ishk ek ibadat
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«Reply #11 on: October 03, 2010, 12:25:17 PM » |
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Main Chehre Ki Udaasi Kaaghaz Pe Likh DooN ... !
Khol Rakhe Darwaaze Pe Apna Thodha Intezaar Rakh DooN ... !
Hawaa Me Liipte YaadoN Ke Pal Kuch Suukhe Kuch Bheege Patte Khaali Din Ki Kisi Almaari MeN Rakh DooN ... !
Jaagi AankhoN Se Bune Sapne Ko Raat Jaise UdherDti Dhaage TukDeTukDe Samet Subhaa Tak Hathelii Pe Rakh DooN ... !
Kaise Apne Pyaar Ko ToD Mann Ki Daal Se Aznabi Ke Saath Kar DooN ... !
Naresh Ji ! Radhey Radhey ! saari kavita hi bahut acchi lagi mujhe .. kavita ka saar khoob pasand aaya dil se daad
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«Reply #12 on: October 03, 2010, 12:32:50 PM » |
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Main Chehre Ki Udaasi Kaaghaz Pe Likh DooN ... !
Khol Rakhe Darwaaze Pe Apna Thodha Intezaar Rakh DooN ... !
Hawaa Me Liipte YaadoN Ke Pal Kuch Suukhe Kuch Bheege Patte Khaali Din Ki Kisi Almaari MeN Rakh DooN ... !
Jaagi AankhoN Se Bune Sapne Ko Raat Jaise UdherDti Dhaage TukDeTukDe Samet Subhaa Tak Hathelii Pe Rakh DooN ... !
Kaise Apne Pyaar Ko ToD Mann Ki Daal Se Aznabi Ke Saath Kar DooN ... !
WOw... Naresh ji... Bahoot Bahoot Bahoot Bahoot Umda.. !!! :Clap: :Clap:
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Anshumali
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«Reply #13 on: October 06, 2010, 07:02:53 AM » |
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI ANSHUMALI JI......
MAIN KAHO TOH APNA SEENA CHEER KE DIKHLA DOON...!
KAHO TOH APNI DARKHAN TUME SUNA DOON...!
TU JO KAHE WO ME IMTHIAN DOON...!
PAR YE NA KAHENA KABHI KISI AUR KO APNA LOON...!
aapki daad ka bahut bahut shurkiyra Ji ! khush rahen ... duaaon ke saath ....
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«Reply #14 on: October 06, 2010, 07:17:48 AM » |
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wah ji naresh jiii bahut badhiya labzo se saja kar rakha he apne...
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