Nazm se din gazal see raateN haiN.....................Mamta Bajpai

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Nazm se din gazal see raateN hain
pyaar kee ye haseeN sougaateN hain

chaaNd taare kyaa tod paayaa koi
ye jo duniyaa hai sirf baateN haiN

tirchhee nazareN haiN or adaa saadaa
dekhiye gaharee inkee ghaateN haiN

apnee hee bandishoN ma qaid haiN sab
jitanee bhee aadamee kee zaateN haiN

meraa maasoom dil hai tanhaa sanam
har taraf zulm kee bisaateN haiN

Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #1 on: July 13, 2011, 06:18:55 PM »
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bahut khub mamataji..
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«Reply #2 on: July 13, 2011, 07:00:51 PM »
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Mamtaa jee Aadaab!


Kia kahne aapke waaH jee waah " Nazm se din gazal si raateN hai " bada hi shayarana andaaz e bayaaN raha Usual Smile


Waqai badi sach baat hai ke jin ahsaas O khayaloN ko achche achche shayar chu nahi paate unko badi aasaani se shoharayeN kalam baNd karti hai Usual Smile

Aapki yeH kalaam bhi behad khoob rahi humari taahe dil se daad
O mubarakbaad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

         




Nazm se din gazal see raateN hain
pyaar kee ye haseeN sougaateN hain

Kia khoob matla kaha hai daad daad daad Usual Smile         

chaaNd taare kyaa tod paayaa koi
ye jo duniyaa hai sirf baateN haiN

Waah jee waah behad khoob aur umdaa daad Usual Smile
Waqai shayari ki hai aapne Usual Smile         


tirchhee nazareN haiN or adaa saadaa
dekhiye gaharee inkee ghaateN haiN

Achcha hai daad ... HaaN adaa " Sadaa " nahi
saadii hoti hai... Usual Smile         


apnee hee bandishoN ma qaid haiN sab
jitanee bhee aadamee kee zaateN haiN

Kia baat hai waah jee bahut khoob Usual Smile
Daad daad daad           


meraa maasoom dil hai tanhaa sanam
har taraf zulm kee bisaateN haiN

Bahut khoob daad Usual Smile         

Mamta Bajpai


Behad achchi kalaam kahi hai aapne... Humari daad O mubarakbad fir se kabul kjiye ... 


Likhate rahiye......
Shaad O aabaad rahiye....
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile

         
       

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«Reply #3 on: July 14, 2011, 04:30:08 AM »
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mamta ji
 gazab ki shayri hai aapke
bahut bahut mubarakbaad

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«Reply #4 on: July 14, 2011, 05:56:37 AM »
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Nazm se din gazal see raateN hain
pyaar kee ye haseeN sougaateN hain

chaaNd taare kyaa tod paayaa koi
ye jo duniyaa hai sirf baateN haiN

tirchhee nazareN haiN or adaa saadaa
dekhiye gaharee inkee ghaateN haiN

apnee hee bandishoN ma qaid haiN sab
jitanee bhee aadamee kee zaateN haiN

meraa maasoom dil hai tanhaa sanam
har taraf zulm kee bisaateN haiN

Mamta Bajpai




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«Reply #5 on: July 14, 2011, 11:14:49 AM »
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Mamta ji
mai to apko mureed hu. kisi din apki kalam na chura lu.
regards
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«Reply #6 on: July 14, 2011, 01:35:29 PM »
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Shukriyaa mkv jee!!!aap ke jazbaatoN kee mai dil se qadra kartee hooN.....par mujhe zameen par hee rahne deN.......aise comment paRh kar koun hai jo magroor naa hogaa.....itanaa maan or pyaar dene kaa behad shukriyaa.....
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«Reply #7 on: July 14, 2011, 02:11:12 PM »
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acha likha h mamta ji..
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«Reply #8 on: July 14, 2011, 05:06:10 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Geet jee!
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«Reply #9 on: July 15, 2011, 05:23:55 PM »
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Shukriyaa Dr saheb! aap jaise sukhanvar or adabshanash jab kisee ko bhee saraahate hai to uskaa likhnaa saarthak ho jaataa hai........
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«Reply #10 on: July 15, 2011, 05:24:40 PM »
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shukriyaa khujali jee!
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«Reply #11 on: July 15, 2011, 05:25:38 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa GUMboy !
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«Reply #12 on: July 15, 2011, 10:20:06 PM »
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Wah wah Mamta ji.lajawab peshkash.superb. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: July 16, 2011, 08:31:50 AM »
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Nazm se din gazal see raateN hain
pyaar kee ye haseeN sougaateN hain

chaaNd taare kyaa tod paayaa koi
ye jo duniyaa hai sirf baateN haiN

tirchhee nazareN haiN or adaa saadaa
dekhiye gaharee inkee ghaateN haiN

apnee hee bandishoN ma qaid haiN sab
jitanee bhee aadamee kee zaateN haiN

meraa maasoom dil hai tanhaa sanam
har taraf zulm kee bisaateN haiN

Mamta Bajpai


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Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoob..Har Ek A'shar Ek Se Badhkar Ek..

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«Reply #14 on: December 24, 2011, 05:36:41 AM »
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deri ke liye kshmaa chaahate hue aap kaa bahut bahut shukriyaa Khwaish jee ! aap ne hameshaa hee meraa housla baRhaayaa hai...
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