Nazron Ke Kaid Parinde... (Shikha)

by Shikha12 on January 02, 2009, 02:37:22 PM
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Samajh nahin aaya ki Ishq Section mein post karun ya Dard Section mein...  DOH
Confusion jyaada ho gayi toh Miscellaneous Section mein post kar rahi hoon...  Usual Smile



यह मदहोशी, यह बेबाकी,
इश्क़ है या फिर, हवा में साकी..
बस यूँ ही रहने दो हम को,
कुछ पल बस मदहोश रहना है..
सौ सौ सवालों के पुलिंदे,
लब यह कहें, खामोश रहना है..

बेहोशी का ये आलम प्यारा,
है तो सुहाना, ख्वाब ये यारा...
पर बेहोशी यह जब टूटेगी,
ख्वाब बिखेरेंगे, आँख भरेगी,
सजाए रहेंगी, दोष रहना है..
थकी नज़रों के क़ैद परिंदे,
सहम के बोले, बा-होश रहना है..

कौन ना चाहे दीवानापन,
कौन ना माँगे साथी का संग...
लेकिन तन्हाई ना यूँ हारेगी,
यह हम पर कोई चाल चलेगी..
जान के क्यों आक्रोश सहना है..
प्यार की भीख, रसीद और चंदे,
तन्हाई से लिपटा, आगोश रहना है…
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Yeh madhoshi, yeh bebaaki,
Ishq hai ya phir, Hawaa mein saaki..
Bus yun hi rehne do hum ko,
Kuch pal bus Madhosh rehna hai..
Sau Sau Sawaalon ke Pulinde,
Labb yeh kahein, Khamosh rehna hai..

Behoshi ka ye aalam pyaara,
Hai toh suhaana, Khwaab ye yaara...
Par behoshi yeh jab tootegi,
Khwaab bikhereinge, aankh bharegi,
Sajaaye raheingi, Dosh rehna hai..
Thakki Nazaron ke Kaid Parinde,
Seham ke boley, Baa-hosh rehna hai..

Kaun naa chahe deewaanapan,
Kaun naa maange saathi ka sang...
Lekin tanhaai naa yun haaregi,
Yeh hum par koi Chaal chalegi..
Jaan ke kyon Aakrosh sehna hai..
Pyaar ki Bheekh, Raseed aur Chande,
Tanhaai se Lipta, Aagosh rehna hai…
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«Reply #1 on: January 02, 2009, 05:33:16 PM »
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Shikha,

Wah ! wah ! Bahut badhiya peshkash naye saal mein Applause Applause Applause

Tum kahin par bhi likh diya karo...sab manzoor hai tongue3 Usual Smile

Keep going Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: January 02, 2009, 07:06:59 PM »
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tumhare background ke wajah se padhne me thodi pareshani ho rahi hain anyway achcha likha hain very good
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«Reply #3 on: January 02, 2009, 07:10:38 PM »
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kai baar koshish kar ke parra gaya... background ki wajah se bahoot mushkil ho gaya tha parna....

Hamesha ki tarah bahoot acha likha hai Mahiya!!
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«Reply #4 on: January 02, 2009, 07:12:39 PM »
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Yeh madhoshi, yeh bebaaki,
Ishq hai ya phir, Hawaa mein saaki..
Bus yun hi rehne do hum ko,
Kuch pal bus Madhosh rehna hai..
Sau Sau Sawaalon ke Pulinde,
Labb yeh kahein, Khamosh rehna hai..

Behoshi ka ye aalam pyaara,
Hai toh suhaana, Khwaab ye yaara...
Par behoshi yeh jab tootegi,
Khwaab bikhereinge, aankh bharegi,
Sajaaye raheingi, Dosh rehna hai..
Thakki Nazaron ke Kaid Parinde,
Seham ke boley, Baa-hosh rehna hai..

Kaun naa chahe deewaanapan,
Kaun naa maange saathi ka sang...
Lekin tanhaai naa yun haaregi,
Yeh hum par koi Chaal chalegi..
Jaan ke kyon Aakrosh sehna hai..
Pyaar ki Bheekh, Raseed aur Chande,
Tanhaai se Lipta,,Aagosh rehna hai…
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«Reply #5 on: January 02, 2009, 07:13:27 PM »
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Shikayat duur... Usual Smile

and Thanks a lot Rajbir ji, Sajid Ji and Pooja di... Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: January 02, 2009, 07:24:08 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause pahle shabd parr kar samjhne ki koshish main he sab chala gaya tha... kavita ka saroor to ab chadda hai jab sirf shabd aor hum.... kuch aor nahi bich main..... wah kaya baat hai... bahoot pyari kavita likhi hai... such main sochne wale per.. khumar ki madhoshi aor gahre dard ka abhaas.. dono he bhawnaaye chupi hai apki is kavita main... bahoot khoob!!!
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«Reply #7 on: January 03, 2009, 05:10:43 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Pooja di..
Ek baar ko laga shayad kisi ko samajh nahin aayi, ya kuch jyaada hi bekaar likhi gayi hai is baar.. Laughing hard
Thanks for your inspiring comments... Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: January 03, 2009, 05:18:23 PM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on January 02, 2009, 02:37:22 PM
Samajh nahin aaya ki Ishq Section mein post karun ya Dard Section mein...  DOH
Confusion jyaada ho gayi toh Miscellaneous Section mein post kar rahi hoon...  Usual Smile


Yeh madhoshi, yeh bebaaki,
Ishq hai ya phir, Hawaa mein saaki..
Bus yun hi rehne do hum ko,
Kuch pal bus Madhosh rehna hai..
Sau Sau Sawaalon ke Pulinde,
Labb yeh kahein, Khamosh rehna hai..

Behoshi ka ye aalam pyaara,
Hai toh suhaana, Khwaab ye yaara...
Par behoshi yeh jab tootegi,
Khwaab bikhereinge, aankh bharegi,
Sajaaye raheingi, Dosh rehna hai..
Thakki Nazaron ke Kaid Parinde,
Seham ke boley, Baa-hosh rehna hai..

Kaun naa chahe deewaanapan,
Kaun naa maange saathi ka sang...
Lekin tanhaai naa yun haaregi,
Yeh hum par koi Chaal chalegi..
Jaan ke kyon Aakrosh sehna hai..
Pyaar ki Bheekh, Raseed aur Chande,
Tanhaai se Lipta, Aagosh rehna hai…

bahut hi badiya mahiya. Jaha bhi likho, par dil koh lubhati hai, aap ki poem har pal hi ek naya chehra dikhati hai. Very nice

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«Reply #9 on: January 04, 2009, 09:16:17 PM »
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Waah Ji,.
Kya Khoob Likha Hai Tumne,.
Nice One,.
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«Reply #10 on: January 12, 2009, 10:25:07 AM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on January 03, 2009, 05:18:23 PM
bahut hi badiya mahiya. Jaha bhi likho, par dil koh lubhati hai, aap ki poem har pal hi ek naya chehra dikhati hai. Very nice

Jasbir Singh

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Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 04, 2009, 09:16:17 PM
Waah Ji,.
Kya Khoob Likha Hai Tumne,.
Nice One,.

Bahut bahut shukriya Azeem..
Pehli baar tumne "Aap" ki jagah "Tum" ka istemaal kiya... Bahut achha laga... Sach kahun toh bahut apnapan sa laga.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #11 on: January 18, 2009, 02:08:46 PM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on January 12, 2009, 10:25:07 AM
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Bahut bahut shukriya Azeem..
Pehli baar tumne "Aap" ki jagah "Tum" ka istemaal kiya... Bahut achha laga... Sach kahun toh bahut apnapan sa laga.. Usual Smile

Thanks once Again... Usual Smile


Sorry Didijaan,.
Maaf Karna,.
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«Reply #12 on: January 19, 2009, 11:41:43 AM »
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bahoot dino baad miane koi poetry itne dyan se padi hai...aap tho waise bhi kamal likhi hi.. sach kahooon. bahoot acha likha hai.aap ki is poetry ne mujhe jhanjor kar rakh diya seriously.. ab lagta hai.. mujhe bhi likhna  fir se suru karna hoga..
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«Reply #13 on: January 25, 2009, 06:15:05 AM »
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aaj natural ki akkad-bakkad mere kuch kaam aa gai..yun hi padh raha tha ki is kavita pe nazar gai.....kuch alag andaz-e-bayan dil ko bahoot bhaya.....
bahoot badhiya shikha Applause Applause
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