Neeyat.....- Abhi:Miscellaneous Shayri

AbhiTamrakar

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Doston Neeyat bhi kitni ajeeb cheez hai, tulsidaas ji ne bhi kaha hai "jaaki rahi bhavnaa jaisi prabhu moorat dekhi tin taisi". ye shayad Neeyat hi hai jo hame ek doosre se alag banati hai...
isi par is baar kuchh toota foota likhne ki koshish ki hai ..ummed he aap sab ka sath milega...

jahan dekha wahin mil gaya khuda yaaron
baat nazar ki nahi sab neeyat ka kaam he yaaron...

husna ki mehfil me khuda dhoondta he koi
kisi ko dikhtaa he maa baap me bhagwaan yaaron...

apne lahoo se tehreer ko bhigo diya kisine
kisi ko dikhtaa he bas apna naam yaaron...

koi ek jhoot bolkar hi sachcha ho gaya 'Abhi'
hazaar sach kehkar bhi koi raha badnaam yaaron...

badi mehnat se aashiyaan katra katra banaye koi
kisi ko dikhtaa he sab chori ka samaan yaaron...


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Re: Neeyat.....- Abhi

«Reply #1 on: May 19, 2011, 06:59:43 AM »

Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on May 19, 2011, 06:53:43 AM

bahut khoob Applause


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Re: Neeyat.....- Abhi

«Reply #2 on: May 19, 2011, 08:18:11 AM »

ekdum sahi kaha……
daad dil se is sachchi kavita ko……


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Re: Neeyat.....- Abhi

«Reply #3 on: May 19, 2011, 08:24:58 AM »

Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on May 19, 2011, 06:53:43 AM

Bahut Bahut Khooob!!!

Achi Soch Ko Lafzon Ka jaama pehnaya Aapne Abhi Ji...

Bahut Ache


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Re: Neeyat.....- Abhi

«Reply #4 on: May 19, 2011, 09:11:20 AM »

wah bahut khub abhiji... ekdam sachai likhi aapne... bahut khub...


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Re: Neeyat.....- Abhi

«Reply #5 on: May 19, 2011, 09:56:54 AM »

Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on May 19, 2011, 06:53:43 AM

bahut khoob


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Re: Neeyat.....- Abhi

«Reply #6 on: May 20, 2011, 07:15:24 AM »

adil sahab,nirala ji, manjum ji, sheba ji, khwaish bhai..aap sabhi ka shukriya yunhi sath rahiye ...


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Re: Neeyat.....- Abhi

«Reply #7 on: May 20, 2011, 11:29:23 AM »

Abhi jee Aadaab !

Bade dino baad padh rahe hai aapki koi kalaam

Very janab... Aapke ahsaas O khayaal ke kia kahne ...
Behad gehre aur behad khub bayaaN kiye hai aapne.. :

Hume yeH ashaar bahut khoob lage...

Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on May 19, 2011, 06:53:43 AM

jahan dekha wahin mil gaya khuda yaaron
baat nazar ki nahi sab neeyat ka kaam he yaaron...

Hmmm Janab kia kahne aapke is khayaal ke daad

husn ki mehfil me khuda dhoondta hai koi
kisi ko dikhtaa he maa baap me bhagwaan yaaron...

Bahut khoob .....

apne lahoo se tehreer ko bhigo diya kisine
kisi ko dikhtaa he bas apna naam yaaron...

Kia baat hai Abhi jee behad khoob waah waah waah daad janab bada khub sher kaha hai

koi ek jhoot bolkar hi sachcha ho gaya 'Abhi'
hazaar sach kehkar bhi koi huaa badnaam yaaron...

Kia baat hai Abhi jee yeH to Insaani fitrat hai..
Aur duniyaa ki reet hai .... Bahut khoob

badi mehnat se aashiyaan katra katra banaye koi
kisi ko dikhtaa he sab chori ka samaan yaaron...

Achcha tanz hai janab.... bahut khub daad

Aise hi khub kalaam kahte rahiye Abhi jee aate rahiye..
Aur haan thode se aapke rhyming words sahiN se rhym nahi hai ...
ummid hai aap agli kalaam meiN pure rhym words perfect use kareNge

Khush rahiye..
Khuda Hafez


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Re: Neeyat.....- Abhi

«Reply #8 on: May 20, 2011, 11:52:41 AM »

Nice..abhi..


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Re: Neeyat.....- Abhi

«Reply #9 on: May 20, 2011, 11:42:03 PM »

Abhi dost,
Kya baat hai..Apne dil khush kar diya..
Ap kitne dino baad aye hai..apko regular ana chahiye..
Clapping Smiley

Dil dil dil se daad..
Khush rahiye..!


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Re: Neeyat.....- Abhi

«Reply #10 on: May 21, 2011, 07:02:15 AM »

shukriya parwaaz ji....mere khyaal se shayad aapka reply meri kisi bhi post ko aaj pehli baar naseeb hua hai....badi khushi hai aaj is kaabil likh paye ham...

ji maanta hun kuchh jagah rhym me kami rahi hai ...use agli baar door karne ki poori koshish hogi...

aap yunhi sath dete rahiye..

geet di apka bhi shukriya...

rahim bhaiii....aane ka kya hai ...jab waqt milta hai bas YO par hi rehetae hain ...yahin padhte hain ...or seekhte rehete hain..
yunhi sath rahiye....


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Re: Neeyat.....- Abhi

«Reply #11 on: May 21, 2011, 08:02:39 AM »

Wah Abhi ji,ye koi toota foota poem nahi hai.excellent.its really heart touching.keep up the good work. Hats off to you!


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Re: Neeyat.....- Abhi

«Reply #12 on: May 22, 2011, 01:20:16 PM »

Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on May 19, 2011, 06:53:43 AM

Bahut Khoooooob ... Abhi Ji !

Umdaa Rahe Sabhi Ehsaasat .... dil se daad !!!


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AbhiTamrakar

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Re: Neeyat.....- Abhi

«Reply #13 on: May 24, 2011, 06:48:17 AM »

shukriya apka madhu ji , naresh ji....yunhi sath rahiye ...


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khamosh_aawaaz

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Re: Neeyat.....- Abhi

«Reply #14 on: May 24, 2011, 08:48:08 AM »

gud one A.T Applause


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