nezaam............sheba

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                       aye,qatib-e-taqdeer mera intezaam badal de!
                       maiqada  badal  de,  mera  jaam  badal  de!


                       ho guzar daanishwaro.n ki bhi meri gali se.
                       mere  mohalle   ka  tu  nezaam  badal   de!


                       ho dil rujooh  kuch  ibaadat ke  taraf  bhi.
                       maikashi  mein  doobi  hui shaam  badal  de!


                      husn-o-jamaal ki tanqeed se labrez ye ghazal.
                       ab  iska  kaam  badal  ya   naam   badal  de!


                       mahtaab  see  soorat  ka main karo.n kya ab.
                       mujh  ko  badal  ya  mera  moqaam  badal de!


                       koi  nahin  sunta  meri  daleel shahr  mein.
                       musnad  nashee.n  badal  ya ilzaam badal de!


                       mujhe   manzoor  nahin  tera  faisla  sheba!
                       o,  qasid-e-khutoot  tu  payaam  badal  de!!



                      


                      

      qaatib-e- taqdeer = taqdeer likhne wala

      daanishwar      = intellectuals.

      rujooh         = inclination

      tanqeed        = criticism.
      nezaam         = system
      labrez         =  full

      mahtaab       =  moon

     musnad nashee.n = king

     qaasid -e-khootoot = messanger
                      
                      
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«Reply #1 on: October 03, 2013, 02:44:40 AM »
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Waah Waah,Bahut Khoob Sheba Jee,

Quote from: Sheba on October 03, 2013, 02:41:44 AM


                       aye,qatib-e-taqdeer mera intezaam badal de!
                       maiqada  badal  de,  mera  jaam  badal  de!


                       ho guzar daanishwaro.n ki bhi meri gali se.
                       mere  mohalle   ka  tu  nezaam  badal   de!


                       ho dil rujooh  kuch  ibaadat ke  taraf  bhi.
                       maikashi  mein  doobi  hui shaam  badal  de!


                       husn-o-jamaal ki tanqeed se labrez ye ghazal.
                       ab  iska  kaam  badal  ya   naam   badal  de!


                       mahtaab  see  soorat  ka main karo.n kya ab.
                       mujh  ko  badal  ya  mera  moqaam  badal de!


                       koi  nahin  sunta  meri  daleel shahr  mein.
                       musnad  nashee.n  badal  ya ilzaam badal de!


                       mujhe   manzoor  nahin  tera  faisla  sheba!
                       o,  qasid-e-khutoot  tu  payaam  badal  de!!



                       


                       

      qaatib-e- taqdeer = taqdeer likhne wala

      daanishwar      = intellectuals.

      rujooh         = inclination

      tanqeed        = criticism.
      nezaam         = system
      labrez         =  full

      mahtaab       =  moon

     musnad nashee.n = king

     qaasid -e-khootoot = messanger
                     
                     
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«Reply #2 on: October 03, 2013, 04:34:06 AM »
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Nice khub daad.
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«Reply #3 on: October 03, 2013, 08:35:05 AM »
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kyaa baat kyaa baat
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«Reply #4 on: October 03, 2013, 10:06:00 AM »
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wha wha bhut khub
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«Reply #5 on: October 03, 2013, 11:24:19 AM »
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waah waah sheba ji waah wah waah
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«Reply #6 on: October 03, 2013, 11:44:20 AM »
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Bahaut khoob Sheba ji .... Khoobsurat ehsaas aur taazgi bhara bayaan ... Daad Aapko
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«Reply #7 on: October 03, 2013, 11:59:47 AM »
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     mahtaab  see  soorat  ka main karo.n kya ab.
      mujh  ko  badal  ya  mera  moqaam  badal de!

           ... bilkul kuchh badalne ki zaroorat nahi .
           Dekhne waalon ka bhi kuchh haq banta hai .



      ...waise bahut khoob surat ghazal kahi hai shebaji .
      Har sher khubsurat aur naye andaz ka hai . bahut bahut
      mubarakbaad.
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«Reply #8 on: October 03, 2013, 01:21:48 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
Waah waah waah sheba ji... kya khoob ghazal se nawaza hai aapne.. behtareeen peshkash..hazaron hazaron dili daad qubool kariye..

  husn-o-jamaal ki tanqeed se labrez ye ghazal.
  ab  iska  kaam  badal  ya   naam   badal  de!


  mahtaab  see  soorat  ka main karo.n kya ab.
  mujh  ko  badal  ya  mera  moqaam  badal de!


  koi  nahin  sunta  meri  daleel shahr  mein.
  musnad  nashee.n  badal  ya ilzaam badal de!

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: October 03, 2013, 01:55:41 PM »
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waah waah Sheba Ji....bahut bahut khoob ......dheron dili daad... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: October 03, 2013, 02:02:49 PM »
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ho dil rujooh  kuch  ibaadat ke  taraf  bhi.
maikashi  mein  doobi  hui shaam  badal  de!

mahtaab  see  soorat  ka main karo.n kya ab.
mujh  ko  badal  ya  mera  moqaam  badal de!

mujhe   manzoor  nahin  tera  faisla  sheba!
o,  qasid-e-khutoot  tu  payaam  badal  de!!

Bahut badhiya Sheba jee
Nihayat umda kalaam
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«Reply #11 on: October 03, 2013, 02:28:23 PM »
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aye,qatib-e-taqdeer mera intezaam badal de!
maiqada  badal  de,  mera  jaam  badal  de!

mahtaab  see  soorat  ka main karo.n kya ab.
mujh  ko  badal  ya  mera  moqaam  badal de!

koi  nahin  sunta  meri  daleel shahr  mein.
musnad  nashee.n  badal  ya ilzaam badal de!

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Wah,Wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Sheebaji,
Behad khoobsurat ghazal kahi hai aapne.Really Dil khush ho gaya.Meri dili mubarakbaad qabool farmaaiye.
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«Reply #12 on: October 03, 2013, 04:44:07 PM »
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lajawaaab, dheron daaaaad...  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: October 03, 2013, 05:28:19 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on October 03, 2013, 02:41:44 AM


                       aye,qatib-e-taqdeer mera intezaam badal de!
                       maiqada  badal  de,  mera  jaam  badal  de!

Ni badalte intezaam jo chalra hai wo chalne do
jaam badalna hai to bar tender ko bolo qatib E taqdeer ko kyun bolre
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                       ho guzar daanishwaro.n ki bhi meri gali se.
                       mere  mohalle   ka  tu  nezaam  badal   de!

main to roz guzar ta hun apki gali se
dekhte bhi nahi Giggle Giggle
                       ho dil rujooh  kuch  ibaadat ke  taraf  bhi.
                       maikashi  mein  doobi  hui shaam  badal  de!

Allah ke kaamo me dil lagaye to ibadat me rujoo hojate,
roz sahm hote hai pack pe pack lagate ho ,kitne baar bola pehle raat ki utarne do sunte hi nahi Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
         husn-o-jamaal ki tanqeed se labrez ye ghazal.
                       ab  iska  kaam  badal  ya   naam   badal  de!
kuch taqeed nai hai ghazal me,hamesha apne hi husn o jamal ki baat karte ho, kaam hojayega to naam hojaye ga badalne ki zaroorat nahi h icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

       mahtaab  see  soorat  ka main karo.n kya ab.
                     mujh  ko  badal  ya  mera  moqaam  badal de!

mahtaab se surat , achha ,hua ke apko dekhker roze nai rakhe warna pure saal ke roze chalte Laughing hard Laughing hard
                 

      koi  nahin  sunta  meri  daleel shahr  mein.
                      musnad  nashee.n  badal  ya ilzaam badal de!

behron ke shehr me rahoge to kaun sunega,
ilzaam rehne do bilkul sahi hai
                       mujhe   manzoor  nahin  tera  faisla  sheba!
                       o,  qasid-e-khutoot  tu  payaam  badal  de!!

mera har faisla namanzoor kardete ho hamesha
akhir problem kya hai,ab qasid e khutoot ni badal sakta ,watsapp se bheja hai pehle hi
 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
                       


                       

      qaatib-e- taqdeer = taqdeer likhne wala

      daanishwar      = intellectuals.

      rujooh         = inclination

      tanqeed        = criticism.
      nezaam         = system
      labrez         =  full

      mahtaab       =  moon

     musnad nashee.n = king

     qaasid -e-khootoot = messanger
                     
                     
chaah to tha ke apke kalaam ka post mortem na karunn lekin kya karein hum hain adat se majboor,
agar apke ke ghazal ka post mortem ni karta to meri ghazal bura man jati  Laughing hard Laughing hard
lekin ye ashaar  bemisaal haiin.
 ho guzar daanishwaro.n ki bhi meri gali se.
 mere  mohalle   ka  tu  nezaam  badal   de!

 ho dil rujooh  kuch  ibaadat ke  taraf  bhi.
 maikashi  mein  doobi  hui shaam  badal  de!



 
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«Reply #14 on: October 03, 2013, 06:20:11 PM »
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Shebaa Sahibaa Aadaab...!

Waah waaH waaH jee kia kahne behad gazab ki kalaam kahi hai ... kafi umdaa ashaar rahe ... Shayrana sifat se labrez kalaam huyi hai...

Har ashaar par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...
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