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by jaindost on May 20, 2009, 07:02:09 AM
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Wo kehte sab kuch badal geya,
aur badal gaye hain hum.
Maine socha wo shayad theek hain,
par kuch na kahenge hum.
Jo dekha uppar to bol padde,
kya KHAAK badal geya sab??
Wohi chanda!!
Wohi taare!!
Wohi aasman!!
Sab sath to hain hum dum.
Badal gayi to yaaron ki pukar,
aur shayad badal gaye hain hum.
Khoob hansne-hansaane wale hum,
na jane kyu ho gaye gum-sum.
Badal geya najariya sab ka,
Aur ban gaye khud ke he qaatil hum.
Tod diye khud ke he sapne,
aur khoob muskuraye hum,,,
Na jane kab fir muskurayenge 'JAIN',
Jo ab ke ro diye HUM...........
-JAIN DOST
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«Reply #1 on: May 20, 2009, 08:36:05 AM »
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Wah Jain as i said you are master in this particular style of work....keep going Man you really rock.
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«Reply #2 on: May 20, 2009, 09:49:48 AM »
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@ sajid, thanks bhai.....
thanks a lot
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«Reply #3 on: May 20, 2009, 10:09:53 AM »
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Jaindost,

Mashallah kya likhte ho bhai ! Applause

Keep going ! Thumbs UP
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Roja
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«Reply #4 on: May 20, 2009, 10:15:19 AM »
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Bahut accha likha hai Jain ji  Clapping Smiley
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Talat
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«Reply #5 on: May 20, 2009, 10:16:08 AM »
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Bohot Khoob Jain Dost
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sanya310
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«Reply #6 on: May 20, 2009, 10:23:37 AM »
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very nice jaindost..keep writing
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jaindost
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«Reply #7 on: March 30, 2011, 02:56:23 AM »
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Thanks u all....... am touched really!!!!!! thank u
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