numaaish......................A.B

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                       zindagi  ki  araaish   se  kab niklein...,
                       bahkti  hui  khawahish  se kab niklein...,

                       chalna  pulsaraat  pe  baaqi  hai  abhi...,
                       chundd  roza  aazmaaish  se kab niklein...,

                       hai  do  gaz  zameen  hi  naseeb  aakhir...,
                       phir jaaydaad ki paimaaish se kab niklein..,

                       hain pare durr-o-diwaar mazloom  se apne...,
                       ki khumaar bhari rihaaish se kab niklein...,

                       poochta  hai 'bechain'  nazro.n  se  apni...,
                       bataa  jhoothi  numaaish  se kab niklein...,

                       
                       
                       
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«Reply #1 on: April 14, 2013, 06:56:37 PM »
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                       zindagi  ki  araaish   se  kab niklein...,
                       bahkti  hui  khawahish  se kab niklein...,

                       chalna  pulsaraat  pe  baaqi  hai  abhi...,
                       chundd  roza  aazmaaish  se kab niklein...,

                       hai  do  gaz  zameen  hi  naseeb  aakhir...,
                       phir jaaydaad ki paimaaish se kab niklein..,

                       hain pare durr-o-diwaar mazloom  se apne...,
                       ki khumaar bhari rihaaish se kab niklein...,

                       poochta  hai 'bechain'  nazro.n  se  apni...,
                       bataa  jhoothi  numaaish  se kab niklein...,

                       
                       
                       
nice...asghr
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«Reply #2 on: April 14, 2013, 07:04:19 PM »
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                       zindagi  ki  araaish   se  kab niklein...,
                       bahkti  hui  khawahish  se kab niklein...,

                       chalna  pulsaraat  pe  baaqi  hai  abhi...,
                       chundd  roza  aazmaaish  se kab niklein...,

                       hai  do  gaz  zameen  hi  naseeb  aakhir...,
                       phir jaaydaad ki paimaaish se kab niklein..,

                       hain pare durr-o-diwaar mazloom  se apne...,
                       ki khumaar bhari rihaaish se kab niklein...,

                       poochta  hai 'bechain'  nazro.n  se  apni...,
                       bataa  jhoothi  numaaish  se kab niklein...,

                       
                       
                       


Waah Waah waah... Adil Ji jawaab Nahi Aapka...

Bahut Bahut Khoooob!!!!!


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«Reply #3 on: April 14, 2013, 07:11:43 PM »
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waah ustaad waah
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«Reply #4 on: April 14, 2013, 07:48:21 PM »
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bahut khoob adil saheb kamaal kar diyaa aap ne Jaaydaad kee paimaaish se kab niklen  waah waah waah
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«Reply #5 on: April 14, 2013, 08:05:50 PM »
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poochta  hai 'bechain'  nazro.n  se  apni...,                        bataa  jhoothi  numaaish  se kab niklein...,

Haasil e ghazal ..ye sher mere nazar me adil bhai..
bahut mubarakbaad
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«Reply #6 on: April 14, 2013, 10:14:33 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: April 14, 2013, 11:46:18 PM »
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zindagi  ki  araaish   se  kab niklein...,                       
bahkti  hui  khawahish  se kab niklein...,                       
chalna  pulsaraat  pe  baaqi  hai  abhi...,                       
chundd  roza  aazmaaish  se kab niklein...,                       
hai  do  gaz  zameen  hi  naseeb  aakhir...,                       
phir jaaydaad ki paimaaish se kab niklein..,                       
hain pare durr-o-diwaar mazloom  se apne...,                       
ki khumaar bhari rihaaish se kab niklein...,                       
poochta  hai 'bechain'  nazro.n  se  apni...,                       
bataa  jhoothi  numaaish  se kab niklein...,

Wah,Wah,Wah Aadilji,Bahut khoob.                                                                       
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«Reply #8 on: April 15, 2013, 05:20:51 AM »
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So Nice.
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«Reply #9 on: April 15, 2013, 04:27:19 PM »
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very nice
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«Reply #10 on: April 16, 2013, 10:19:39 PM »
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bahut khoob , adil sahib.khubsurat ghazal ke liye bahut bahut mubarakbad.
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Waah Waah waah... Adil Ji jawaab Nahi Aapka...

Bahut Bahut Khoooob!!!!!


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bahut khoob adil saheb kamaal kar diyaa aap ne Jaaydaad kee paimaaish se kab niklen  waah waah waah

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